New Maps of Hell: A Survey of Science Fiction
Date: 1960-01-02 05:00:00+00:00
Keywords: Science Fiction; Literary Criticism; Essays; Criticism; Fiction; Speculative Fiction; Science Fiction Fantasy; Literature; Books About Books
Description: Based on Amis' series of six lectures on science fiction in 1959, New Maps of Hell, discussion emphasizes the satirical and dystopian elements in science fiction rather than being primarily about technology.

THE KING'S ENGLISH

Also by Kingsley Amis F ietion Lucky Jim I Like It Here That Uncertain Feeling Take a Girl Like You One Fat Englishman The Anti-Death League The Green Man I Want It Now Girl, 20 The Riverside Villas Murder Ending Up The Crime of the Century The Alteration Jake's Thing Collected Short Stories Russian Hide-and-Seek The Golden Age of Science Fiction (editor) Stanley and the Women The Old Devils Difficulties with Girls The Folks That Live on the Hill The Russian Girl Mr Barrett's Secret and Other Stories The Amis Story Anthology (editor) You Can't Do Both The Biographer's Moustache Omnihm A Kingsley Amis Omnibus (jake's Thing, Stanley and the Women, The Old Devils) Verse A Case of Samples A Look Round the Estate Collected Poems I 944 -79 The New Oxford Book of Light Verse (editor) The Faber Popular Reciter (editor) The Amis Anthology (editor) Non-ftction New Maps of Hell: A Survey of Science Fiction The James Bond Dossier What Became of Jane Austen? and other questions On Drink Rudyard Kipling and His W orId Harold's Years (editor) Every Day Drinking How's Your Glass? The Amis Collection: Selected Non-Fiction I954-90 Memoirs With Rohert Conquest Spectrum I, II, III, IV, V (editor) The Egyptologists With James Cochrane The Great British Songbook (compiled)

The King's English A Guide to Modern Usage

Kingsley Amis

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Contents

Preface Apologia Pro Vita Sua Academica Bibliography The King's English Glossary Index

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This book is intended partly as a work of definition and refer- ence, in which some modern linguistic problems are discussed and perhaps settled, and partly as a collection of more or less discursive essays on linguistic problems. In no sense is it com- plete or exhaustive. Even the great predecessor of the present volume, the Modern English Usage of H.W. Fowler, never set out to be that. What Fowler's aim was takes some defining. To settle scores as well as problems, to shake things up, to make people think about what they said and wrote, to be provocative without being unjust, these were certainly among his aims. In my less educated way they are among mine. Fowler reprinted hundreds of real examples of real misuses. To have done so lends his work an authoritativeness mine does not attempt to match. For all that, 'a feigned example hath as much force to teach as a true example,' and what the editor has fabricated may make up in concentration and aptness for what it fails to include. Chapter and verse is not much of an extra deterrent, and the parable of the Prodigal Son would not have been more effective if it had named names. All talk of deterrence may be beside the point. Despite his sometimes derisive and even caustic tone, one easily guesses that Fowler had no real hope that his recommendations would be followed by more than a small fraction of his readership. No writer on the subject can nourish such a hope. The most that can be offered is some guidance for those who may want it and the thought that, without Fowler and his heirs and allies, the language might be in an even worse state than it is. A lost cause may still deserve support, and that support is never wasted.

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My interest in words as parts of language preceded their appeal to me as units of literature of any sort, and I was learning how to spell some individual words before I knew what they meant. Ever since, I have retained what I like to think of as a special feeling for language in spoken as well as written form. This has gone hand in hand with one of the less immediately appealing sides of my character, the didactic or put-'em-right side. I would guess that for every acquaintance of mine who looks on me as some sort of authority on correct usage or pronunciation there is at least one who sees me as an officious neurotic who sets right venial blunderers uninvited. Any vocal stickler for accuracy pecpetuall y runs that sort of risk. Turning now to more material things, I was educated more formally than has since been common. I was taught to analyse sentences, to identify subject, verb and predicate and to separate subordinate clauses from the main clause. I had studied general English, as it was called at the time, and was thought good at it. From the age of ten or so, along with millions of my school- fellows, I was taught Latin and, less formally, French. From the age of twelve I was educated in these two languages and in classical Greek. Although the writing of Latin and Greek proses and verses was part of every classical scholar's curriculum, the practice of doing so was far less an exercise of any literary imagination than a means of acquiring proficiency in those tongues and their grammars. Nevertheless, for reasons that may emerge in later parts of this book, I regard these exercises as excellent training for composition in one's own language, whether verse or prose, and for any closer investigation of that

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language. I miss close contact with the literature of a living language other than English and consider myself impoverished by this lack. At university I studied, lazily I fear, the early history of our language and some of the works written in it before the year 15 00 . Perhaps misguidedly and, not only in my case, certainly in vain, our teacher encouraged us to find emotion and even merit in the likes of Beowulf and 'The Dream of the Rood'. It would have been better all round if this part of the course had been separated off and introduced under another and un- ashamedly philological heading and literary considerations dropped. Thereafter I took an interest in linguistic matters that was sometimes close, as at the publication of a new volume sup- plementing the 0 ED, but never expert or professional. This interest has continued to the present day, not surprisingly in the case of a living language that, like all such, is continuously changing. Occasionally I think that a kind of training that has not for many years been more than avocational is no real training at all, is one that fits its recipients better for argufying than for argument, and am suitably chastened. Not for long: I spot some fresh linguistic barbarism and am off again. I am sustained by reflecting that the defence of the language is too large a matter to be left to the properly qualified, and if I make mistakes, well, so do they, and we must carry on as best we can pending the advent of a worthy successor to Fowler.

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Bibliography

This book should probably be read alongside other books, with those other books physically handy and often open, though I should not want to lose any reader in search of entertainment or simple information. What I give here is less a bibliography in the recommended-reading sense than a talkative list of those other books that I found indispensable or at least useful in writing this one.

I. Dictionaries. The OxfOrd English Dictionary (0 ED). The beginnings of that enormous work can be traced back to 1857, in which year the Philological Society heard two significant papers delivered by one of its members. The Dictionary itself, serially published over the years 1864- 1928, contains articles on over 400,000 words and nearly 2 million quotations. It is thus a monument to Victorian scholarship, though unlike many monuments it is still necessary today. Supplements in 1933 and in the 1970S and 1980s have brought the work up to date in so far as this is possible. Any self-respecting writer needs a copy to hand. The miniaturised version, in two volumes with magnifying lens, is tolerable for bare reference only, not for the necessary unmethodical reading. The Concise Oxford Dictionary (COD) was originally published in 191 I. The first edition, now hard to come by, was the work of the Fowler brothers (see FOWLER) not only in its words and definitions but also in its innumerable expressions illustrating usage. Many subsequent revised editions and reprints of these have appeared. For this book I have used the fifth edition of 1964 and the seventh of 1982. The 1982 edition is on my desk at all times.

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Webster's International Dictionary is physically huge but necessary for American usages and spellings and also contains much encyclopedic information of interest to the British reader, who may also find The American College Dictionary (orig. 1947) useful. Other British dictionaries such as those of Chambers, Collins or Longman may be of help and interest, worth keeping on a readily accessi ble shelf.

2. Guides to Ulage. This section heading perhaps raises questions of legitimacy, but there can be no doubt about the precedence in the whole field of H.W. Fowler's Modern Englilh Ulage (ME U), first pub- lished 1926 (see FOWLER). The present book was written with the 1926 work open beside the typewriter and is best read with it similarly accessible. Note now that this adherence to a document compiled so long ago perhaps indicates not just a conservative or even reactionary stance but also a recognition of necessity. In addition it points to the slow rate of linguistic change, whether for good or ill. The King'I Englilh, by H.W. and F.G. Fowler (1906) is mentioned in this position to indicate its lesser usefulness and trenchancy as com- pared with the later work, but is nevertheless valuable. See FOWLER. Modern American Ulage, by Wilson Follett and others (1966), makes its allegiance clear in its title. In its vigorous fashion it shows, among much else, how little good US linguistic behaviour has come to differ from its British counterpart. The Complete Plain Words (1954), comprising Plain WordI and The ABC of Plain Words. By Ernest Gowers, revised 1973 by Bruce Fraser, designed to improve official English and published by HM Stationery Office. Grammar and Style, by Michael Dummett (1993). Written 'for exam- ination candidates and others'. Daily Mirror Style, by Keith Waterhouse (1980s). Originally a house manual for journalists, this is now available in an expanded version in Penguin under the expanded title Waterhollse on Newspaper Style (1993).

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3. Pronunciation. Most useful: The B B C Pronouncing Dictionary of British Names (1983) has unfortunately been out of print since 1990. The paperback is also out of print. How to Pronounce It, by Alan S.C. Ross (1st edn. 1970). Mainly but not exclusively proper names. To be used with some caution. For words that are not proper names, COD' s pronunciations are reliable.

4. Linguistics. As I explain elsewhere, I am not a professional or even a trained linguist or linguistician, but I have found some linguistic terms and procedures useful. For this purpose I have many times consulted a volume inherited from my youth, Language, by Leonard Bloomfield (1st edn. 1933), especially in search of facts. Bloomfield was a major inBuence on the development of structural linguistics, I am told, and IS now opposed by Noam Chomsky.

5. Thesaurus. I can do little here except reiterate the name of Roget, say that my copy of his work sits on my desk with Fowler and the COD and add something I have recently noticed, viz. that the presence in its text and index of fashionable solecistic uses shows some sort of widespread acceptance. So the latest edition includes restauranteur (sic), for instance. (Pristine is not listed at all, however, neither in its correct nor its incorrect sense.)

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-able and -ible

I once wrote deduceable instead of deducible in a book, though nobody then or since has taken me up on it. A small point as they go, perhaps, but Rule 1 of writing acceptably is to get everything right as far as you can, and in this case I had neglected to. If I were assembling a complete guide to usage I should feel bound to give here a list of -able and -ible words, but I am not so I do not. Fowler gives a list of '-ble words not in -able' with something like 140 adjectives in it. There follow similarly long lists of 'negatives in -able not having -un', and others of comparable length and function, five such lists in all containing between them a thousand words ending in -able and -ible. Lists look impressive but their usefulness is limited. Consult a dictionary.

Accentuation

I use this term to refer to the prominence given a spoken syllable by stressing it. So in hypnosis, for example, the middle syllable receives accentuation. My hope is to avoid the ambiguity that use of the sometime synonymous accent might bring. There is a tendency with English words to put the accen- tuation as near the front of a word as possible. This tendency was once strong enough to make a schoolmaster some years

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ago do his best to pronounce anticiPatory accentuating its first syllable, a difficult task even with the number of syl- lables halved, and a noise like antsiPtry attempted. More recently the old tendency has been at work on words like contribute and distribute. Once to all appearance fixed irrever- sibly as contribute and distribute, these are in unpopular pro- cess of becoming contribute and distribute. Resistance to all linguistic change is obviously a healthy instinct, but perhaps not so much in the present case, and the accentuation dispute for the noun, much execrated, seems natural enough, in line with the general tendency of the language to stress noun on first syllable as against verb on second, as in present and present. I predict that all three changes will shortly be established. American practice in this matter seems, to a British ear, whimsical if not perverse. Sometimes Americans will throw accentuation further forward than we do, on to the first syllable of foreign words like consomme and Dubo1lnet, though they might argue that their practice sounds at any rate less defiantly non-French than ours. In the case of the noun research, their practice of stressing the first syllable is spread- ing over here, much to the resentment of conservative or older speakers. This feeling is perhaps misplaced, since the Americans are only following a traditional rule of the lan- guage; see remark on dispute above. I am less wonderfully tolerant over the other and opposite American habit of shifting accentuation the opposite way, especially in personal names. This has been going on over here too for a long time: my father had a friend called Mr Barrel or Barrell who understandably stressed his surname on its second syllable. Bernard, forename and surname, is perhaps a more typical case: Bernard in USA, Bernard in UK, though the surname is tending to follow US conven- tion over here and the BBC lays it down. But then the B Be also lays down that the surname Bottome - a pseudo- nym, strange to relate - should be stressed on the second

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syllable. In fact, both Bottome and Botham are cosmeticised forms of the old English word bottom, for centuries nothing to do with anyone's posterior, signifying a valley or its floor, found in surnames and meaning 'dweller in the valley' (cf. Wood, Hill, Holt, etc.) and in place-names like Six Mile Bottom. To resume briefly: my tolerance wears thin when I hear an accentuation that seems to me wilfully or absurdly eccen- tric, as when an American in the flesh, no broadcaster he but a decent young fellow, came up with the surname Fussell, an English name, stressed in the American way, which I happen to know is not the stress given it by the American writer of that name. (Does the young fellow talk about Bertrand Russell?) And it - my tolerance - snapped altogether the other day when I heard an English broadcaster refer to Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet with Juliet given last-syllable-stress treatment. What next? Antony and Cleop'trah? See also AMERICANISMS.

Adaptation, adaption

The term adaption, presumably made in the first place on strong analogy with adoption, is driving out the older and perhaps more correct adaptation, especially on literary fringes. Publishers and suchlike will talk to authors about possible adaptions of their novels, etc., for the screen or stage. If only to reduce imputations of illiteracy, I mean to continue with adaptation for the moment, but the time will probably come when it will seem first quaint and then unintelligible. Sensible people will have switched to adap- tion before then, as they are already switching to retraction (rather than retractation). I ask for Glenmorangie malt whisky stressing the third syllable of the name, even though I happen to know the head man there stresses the second, because a rational being

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prefers being understood, and served, to being right. No contest if the place serves The Macallan.

Address

Near the end of his enjoyable piece, 'Politics and the English Language' (1946), George Orwell gives six rules for decent writing 'that one can rely on when instinct fails'. They are not infallible, these rules, as he would have agreed, but no. I has a great deal to be said for it:

Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.

Adherence to this prohibition would certainly cut down the tedious incidence of addressing this, that and the other, of addressing a question, a problem, a situation, a difficulty that requires to be faced in defiance of the many attempts to sweep it under the carpet, confronting most newspaper readers most mornings. As so often, both reader and writer are helped to feel that some progress is made towards hand- ling, even solving, a question or problem merely by men- tioning it. A really fresh approach calls for fresh words, and without them silence is at least fairer.

Aggro

This colloquialism, already showing signs of age, can be taken as descending partly from aggres.fion and partly from aggravation in the colloquial, improper sense of annoyance, exasperation. It is often decried, but in its striking of the balance between the two in expressions like I kept away because I couldn't stand the thought of all the aggro it has or had its niche in the informal vocabulary. Plenty of disreputably

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descended words and persons have found a tolerated if not a welcome place in this country, to risk sounding pompous.

Albeit

This word is perhaps not felt by its occasional users to be an archaism and probably not felt either to be just a fancy variant of though or although. It can carry a sense of special understanding and indulgence missing from the more ordi- nary conjunctions, as in, it might be, 'He was not seriously annoyed, albeit a trifle irritated, that she left without saying good night' - not annoyed, just, well, it might have been silly of him but he couldn't help feeling a little put out that she left, etc. Not the sort of thing we hope to find in our sort of book, maybe, but surely innocuous enough. And it is right, or at any rate understandable, to be impatient with anent and aught and perchance, but to write an occasional albeit never did anyone much harm if an eye was kept on the tendency.

Ale

Fowler is right so much of the time that it is a guilty pleasure to correct him on those rare occasions when insuf- ficient knowledge on his part or a change in circumstances has shown him to be wrong. So in writing of ale and beer he asserts that 'in ordinary use, as at table, both denote the same thing, including the pale and excluding the dark varieties of malt liquor; the difference is that beer is the natural current word, and ale is' a horrible thing called a Genteelism, like stomach for belly. (See BELLY and GEN- TEELISM.) No longer true, if ever. It remains the case that only a fearful fellow would ask, say, if you would care for a glass of ale with your ham sandwich, but the two drinks

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are distinct, ale being the result of a fermentation of malt, and beer being the same thing flavoured with hops (or ginger, etc.). Malt liquor, especially in the USA, became the name for an extra strong ale.

Allergic

Allergy is an unusual sensi tivi ty to the action of particular substances or foods, such as gluten or shellfish, that are harmless to normal people. The reaction can be serious as well as distressing. It is perhaps yobbish to say one is allergic to certain people when all that is meant is that they get on , one s nerves.

All right

I hope I need not say that this is the correct form, making two separate words of it. The one-word travesty, alright, was said in the A-G volume of the Supplement to OED in 1972 to be 'a frequent spelling of all right'. Yet the citation there of most recent date is taken from ME U of 1926, where Fowler says, in part, that alright, 'if seldom allowed by the compositors to appear in print, is often seen . . . in M S ' . Fowler never said anything without good reason, and I can testify personally that in my schooldays before the Second War alright was indeed often seen - and nearly as often derided. I remember part of a solemn condemnation that ran, 'Alright is always and altogether all wrong,' and the incorrect form became nearly as much a favourite target of popular scorn as get in the sense of 'obtain' or 'become'. Perhaps this did the trick; something did, anyway, for alright is very seldom seen nowadays. Its appearance in the title of an amusing television show of the 1990S, It'll be

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Alright on the Night, a succession of embarrassingly spoilt takes, may seem a conscious barbarism. Even so there will perhaps be many whom it offends. I am one of them. No doubt as fully aware as most people that language is nothing but a series of signs to convey meaning, and that in this sense no damage seems to be threatening any part of our existing arrangements, I still feel that to inscribe alright is gross, crass, coarse and to be avoided, and I now say so. Its interdiction is as pure an example as possible of a rule without a reason, and in my case may well show nothing but how tenacious a hold early training can take.

Also

This word, as Fowler properly reminds us, is indeed an adverb and not a conjunction, but it would be dull to forbid its conjunctional use altogether. Grammatical rules do not apply so strictly to comic writing and dialogue. A vernacular style can very readily produce boring or offensive results, but no amount of grammar would alleviate that.

Alternate(ly) and alternative(ly)

There is no eXCllse but the grossest similarity in appearance to confuse these two, but people muddle them up all the time. Alternately means 'first one, then the other, then the one, then the other, and so on'; alternatively means 'another possibility is that. . .' Similarly with the adjectives alternate and alternative. Since alternative already contains the sense of 'another possibility', it is saying things twice over to speak of 'another alternative'. Remember that Mrs Thatcher said, 'There is no alternative,' not 'There is no other alternative.'

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Exception: An Americanism that sounds anomalous to British ears, as Americanisms will, is contained in the phrase 'alternate world' and its derivatives. This refers to a kind of science-fiction story or idea whereby some great crisis of the past went the other way and correspondingly changed history since that point. Thus a favourite speculation involves a world in which the South won the American Civil War. British readers are advised to follow this trend in the science-fiction context and nowhere else.

Americanisms

I open this large subject by declaring that in almost all political and social matters I am strongly pro-American. So I should be, considering how much I owe America and Americans. Thanks to them I enjoyed one of the best years of my life in 1958-9, mainly at Princeton University; every- body who served alongside US forces in the Second World War has reason to respect them; I thank country and people for many hundreds of hours of pleasurable entertainment; two of the art-forms that have meant most to me, jazz and science fiction, have a strong claim to be American creations. And every British person, along with other millions, has America and Americans to thank for life and liberty. Any American who might happen to be reading this could be forgiven for mentally preparing to receive an emphatic 'but' followed by an uproar of objurgation. Here I hope to disappoint such anxiety a little. Let me at once affirm something that takes us a little closer to matters of language and is the best test of the sincerity of what I have been saying. As I wrote in 1985, apart from being a poli tidate, the year 1776 is

a good marker for the point or stage at which English ceased to be solely the language of the inhabitants of the

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United Kingdom [and their progeny] and became also that of autonomous speech-communities round the world.

The vital, all-conceding word here is 'autonomous'. In his heart, and however he may vote, no Englishman readily allows linguistic equality to an American or anyone else born outside these shores. Not even this Englishman allows it readily, and I take that as evidence of a sound conservative instinct. Nevertheless it must bow to history and reality. As a matter of fact, many Americanisms, that is terms or usages originating in America, are embedded so deeply in British speech and writing that they are no longer thought of as such. This tendency goes back a long way. In 1789, Benjamin Franklin sent Noah Webster a list of unauthorised words that should carry 'a discountenancing mark' in his eventual American Dictionary of the English Lan- guage (1828). These included such barbarous coinages as noticed as a verb and advocate and progress also as verbs, also opposed ('tho' not a new word'). Rather later, Edgar Allan Poe apologised for using the word richness, a forcible term he says, borrowed from 'colloquy', i.e., one supposes, American conversatIon. This catalogue could be much extended. A list of fully assimilated English words and expressions that started life as American coinages or revivals would include antagonise, anyway, back-number (adjectival phrase), back yard (as in nimby), bath-robe, bumper (car), editorial (noun), fix up, just (=quite, very, exactly), nervous (=timid), peanut, placate, realise (=see, understand), reckon, soft drink, transPire, wash- stand. In some cases, Americanisms have driven out a native equivalent or are in process of doing so. For instance, in no particular order, ad has pretty well replaced advert as an abbreviation for advertisement, a Press clipping is driving out cutting as a piece taken from a newspaper, a whole new ball- game, that is a metaphorical game of baseball, is what meets

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the harried circumspect eye where once a different kettle of fish or a horse of another colour furnished the challenge, and someone quit his. job where not so long ago he quitted it. Such matters probably indicate nothing more than minor, harmless linguistic interchange, with a bias towards Ameri- can modes of expression as likely to seem the livelier and (to adopt an Americanism) smarter alternative. I feel less sanguine about the loss of fortnight to the American two weeks (as soon say sennight and expect to be understood), the new voicing of the second syllable in words like version (heard now as verzh'n) and the adoption of American stress in research (noun) and harass and harassment. American influ- ence is busily eroding a valuable and once firm distinction in British speech and writing between, e.g., I do not have and I have not got, which described different sets of circum- stances. For some discussion of this point, see GET, GOT. The Fowler brothers, H.W. and F.G., in their magisterial work The King's English (1906), wrote: 'The English and the American language and literature are both good things; but they are better apart than mixed.' I find it hard to disagree with that, even though it comes at the end of a paragraph mildly denouncing Kipling's vocabulary as Americanised, an objection few would even understand today. I also find it hard to say why I broadly agree with the Fowlers' recommendation, at least as far as cthe American language' is concerned; with some exceptions in science fiction and other genres I have small difficulty in avoiding anything that could be called American literature. I feel it is unnatural, not I think entirely because it uses a language that is not mine, however closely akin to my own. If I say the result seems to me affected, I (Ilean not that American writers are somehow not fully in earnest, and certainly not that they are any more or less affected than the ones over here. To get at what I do mean I need an Anglicism (not, be it noted, a Briticism, which word is an Americanism and a vox barbara to boot).

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What I and other non-Americans want to say to American novelists and poets is Come off it, off your stilts, off your high horse. Be natural for a change, which is not the same thing as being colloquial or writing in a 'pure' style, but beware of writing in any special writing way, a way that you would never speak. Writers seldom write just as they speak, but they move away from their speaking voice at their peril. There are of course plenty of British writers who write in affected or unnatural modes and styles: Graham Greene and Anthony Burgess are two leading twentieth-century ones at whom one longs to bawl instructions to come off it. Both seem to me to write in non-English ways, though not in American ways; both are mannerists. In P.G. Wodehouse's best vein, that of the Wooster- Jeeves stories, the come-off-it reaction is an indispensable part of the fun. Such a thing could never happen with an American writer, except perhaps at the level of Artemus Ward. As everybody knows, an American style is not one thing or even a dozen but very many more. I will however mention here two of the larger, the highly oral, colloquial manner of some New York novelists and journalists, and the most literary, abstract, formal approach seen in academic and didactic prose. We ought to be selectively hospitable to the first of these, which has already given us handy terms like baby-sitter, blurb and commuter and space-savers like sPin-off and one-off, all of which have ceased to strike us as American at all. If the greater Americanisation of our speech seems undesirable, we can adopt a policy of not using an expression we recognise as an Americanism except for some particular reason. This is not so very different from the first half of Pope's piece of advice to those considering their choice of words and expressions:

Be not the first by whom the new are tried, Nor yet the last to lay the old aside,

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and he could have added, 'if you want to be understood as clearly and universally as possible.' The other American style I have singled out, the discur- sive, is not far off being the opposite of the first. Certainly I think I detect a firm preference for the abstract word over the concrete. Here, at any rate, 'American influence is not only pernicious but pervasive,' to quote one commentator, and the following is a typical sample:

The establishment of minimum constraints for an optimisation of free growth combining elements of user- design for both the individual and the community, forms the basis of this project. The basic order devised is intended to establish a democratic interchange between human and technological factors. The order devised will stimulate multiplicity, multiformity, micro and macro relations: all expressed through logically derived dimen- sional and functional modules themselves articulated by a system of guiding lines.

Come off it, indeed, but off what exactly? That paragraph means nothing much at all - I should have said there is in it a minimalisation of semantic and referential content- material. But after some thought it seems hard to blame this kind of thing exclusively or even chiefly on American example and influence. At least as much love of long words and sheer windy pomposity is to be found over here. Never- theless American and not British English has become the international language, and it has specifically become the language of the United Nations and its agencies and their published literature. What one is objecting to is really committee English, and there is not a lot to be done about that, as about many other unpleasant things, bar making and keeping an individual vow not to add to it oneself.

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Amongst

Formerly a variant of among permitted and even encouraged in certain contexts - cf. while and whilst. Both longer forms are still recognisable, but not to be used unless a fussy, old-fashioned air should for some reason be aimed at. Although is less handy and versatile than though, but may still be preferred in rather more formal situations, especially at the beginning of a sentence of some length.

And

This little word is one of the most troublesome in the language and one of the most often misused. Its proper use is not taught at any school I have ever heard of and most people go into the great world with no more than a vague impression that and is used in sentences to link together many things, especially perhaps the last two words in a list, as in They serve peas, beans and carrots. It is not now usual to put a comma after beans as well as one after peas in such sentences. If the list has only two items, and of course links them, as in They serve peas and carrots. This is all very well as far as it goes, but many people seem to draw a false deduction from it, namely that and must only be used once in a sentence and pretty near its end for preference. However it comes about, this untruth produces what is very likely the commonest mistake in written English, exemplified in the following sentence:

Samantha is twenty years old, blue-eyed and has a large bust.

The nearest correct version is:

Samantha is twenty years old and blue-eyed and has a large bust.

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If we peer closely we see that the writer of the incorrect version thought he was ceciting one list of three items, but the correct version shows he was in fact reciting two lists. The first of them consisted of Samantha's age and eye-colour, the second of them of three facts about her, the two already referred to and information about her bust. And the first list no less than the second calls for an and to link its parts. If the first list were to be offered on its own, nobody who knew any English and was not trying to be funny would write:

Samantha is twenty years old, blue-eyed.

So it is true that and normally appears on a list only once, but to be sure of not going astray the writer needs to be sure how many lists are involved. I said above that it was 'not now usual' to put a comma before and in lists, and this is tcue enough but calls for a little more to be said. For special emphasis of one sort or another, such a comma can contribute valuably, as in:

The guerrillas killed every man, woman, and child in the village.

And the idea that and must not begin a sentence, or even a paragraph, is an empty superstition. The same goes for but. Indeed either word can give unimprovably early warning of the sort of thing that is to follow.

Apostrophe

The rules governing the use of this vexing little mark are evidently hard to master, and if you have any trouble with them or it after the age of fourteen or so, the chances are that you will always be liable to error in the matter. Still, the rules are:

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Apostrophe

I. To mark ordinary plurals (carrot's, Pickle's), the so-called greengrocer's apostrophe, its use is illiterate. Some people write about the 1990's, but I prefer the 1990S. Those who mind their p's and q's must be tolerated. I have seen an illiterate apostrophe even in the impeccably middle-class setting of a dentist's waiting-room, or rather I have seen its ghost at my own dentist's. A notice on the wall is headed 'Cancellations' in faultless style, and the text begins just as properly, 'Must be made at least twenty- four hours ahead'. But, alas, there is a small smudge before the S of cancellations and also that of hours, show- ing where the hand of a literate person has excised an errant apostrophe put there by whoever produced the notice. At the end, it says humbly, 'All we ask is a little thought. ' 2. With singular words in the possessive case add's even when the word itself ends in S, asjack's bike, the water's edge, Gus's buttonhole. (A plain apostrophe is added to some words, as in for jesus' sake, Keats' poems, but when in doubt always write the fuller version.) 3. With plural words that end in S just add an apostrophe, as ladies' room, the Smiths' car. 4. With plural words that do not end in S, add's, as the men's room, the people's candidate.

Common errors are:

(a) Putting in an apostrophe where none is needed, as with possessive pronouns such as its, hers, ours, yours, theirs; though an apostrophe is required in one's. (b) Putting one in where e is needed, as in the Wales's are estranged instead of the Waleses are estranged.

An accomplished apostrophe-wielder must be able to dis- tinguish instantly between the following:

IS

Aren't I?

He is staying with Jones. He is staying at Jones's. He is staying with the Joneses. He is staying at the J oneses' .

Note: Foreign words ending in silent s take an extra's in the possessive case, so we get Legouis's grammar, Louis's solo.

Aren't I?

This is often said but better not written except in fictional dialogue, where it usually helps to characterise some semi- literate or otherwise low person. If it should be written in ordinary prose, aren't I? is likely to be categorised as vulgar, or even as not English. It is of course perfectly good English, and in its earlier forms was certainly not vulgar. What follows is of my own devising, but I am aware of no other coherent account of the genesis of are,z't I? At some earlier stage in the evolution of our language, certainl y before the arrival of mass literacy, speakers of English collectively become aware of a need of some nega- tive-interrogative form for the first person singular present indicative to parallel the handy and easy forms aren't you, isn't he, she, it, aren't we, aren't they. The obvious parallel choice was am not I or amn't I, but nobody could say either easily and the conditions of conversation made them doubly unwieldy. What actually got said was an't I or ain't I, the latter form certainly recorded. An't I, its first element originally pronounced to rhyme with modern pant, persisted down to the time when the pronunciations of south-eastern England became standard for the whole country. In particular, short A in many words was replaced by long A, and can't as a northern speaker might say it today became the familiar cahn't. The same

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Around

thing happened to an't as in an't I, but English orthography had no way of indicating this except by changing the spell- ing to aren't, with silent R as always in this position in the south-east, and correspondingly aren't I started to be wrl tten. That this lineage is at least possible I infer from the now universal form I won't, giving won't I. Clearly, I won't began to establish itself as a colloquial contraction of the first person indicative of the future tense of I will not at a time when a lot of people were still saying I wol not, last recorded in the sixteenth century; won't occurs in the seventeenth (Pepys in 1667), pressure from wont (=accustomed) soon lengthening the vowel. One attraction of my theory is the ill-natured glee it brings to believers in it when they hear some unreconstruc- ted pedant struggling to say amn't I. I remember that the late A.]. Ayer was one of these.

Around

I confine myself to British uses, though nowadays these must often be the result of general or particular American example. The OED's first citation is dated 'c 1300', but goes on to note that it is rare before 1600 and not to be found in Shakespeare or the Authorised Version of 161 I. Nevertheless that word continued to be used here as a vari- ant of the more usual about, and when H.F. Lyte (1793- 1847) wrote in 'Abide with Me' the deservedly famous line:

Change and decay in all around I see,

nobody would have taken its sixth word for an Americanism. Often, though not in the line quoted, round seems to come more naturally to a British speaker, and my rule for the use of around would be, stick to round and about unless around

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As to

strikes you as preferable, and I mean really preferable, not just smarter or trendier or more modern. If you observe that rule you may find yourself using the word less.

As to

This pair of nasty little words has quite lately taken to inserting itself in the phrase 'the question whether) and producing the needless and distasteful variant 'the question as to whether'. The infection has spread to contexts where any indirect question appears, and any moment I expect to read that 'I asked him as to who he was.' So remember, or learn, that twenty thousand Cornish men would know the reason why if Trelawny died, not the reason as to why, and Tennyson said of the Light Brigade troopers that it was theirs not to reason why, not theirs not to reason as to why. Perhaps finally, Cecil Woodham-Smith's great book on the Charge is entitled The Reason Why and nothing else.

Aspect

This is the grammatical name given to some categories of verbal form that concern other features of an action than when it is said to take place. This attention to aspect is to be seen in many languages that boast a flourishing tense- system, such as Latin and English. It has often been observed that amo, say, means not only I love but also I am loving and I do love, less often perhaps that the first-person present- indicative familiar amo can be used to mean anything from still loving away after fifty years to having begun to love that very minute. The durative, the inceptive, the frequenta- tive and all other aspects of an action can be covered in English by means of auxiliary verbs and other periphrases.

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-athon, -thon

This hospitality to aspect as well as tense is one of the things that people mean when they call English a rich language. Latin is more concise and perhaps neater and more accurate, but its structure makes it less finely tuneable . . In comparIson.

Ate

I mean of course the monosyllabic preterite of the English verb eat, not the dissyllabic name of the Greek goddess of criminal folly and (later) avenger of sin. Pronounce et, with a short vowel. To pronounce the word as it is spelt is nothing less than a spelling-pronunciation and therefore an example of pedantry, conscious or unconscious, though in neither case a very evil one. The recommended pronunciation is the choice of ME U , COD and Professor A.S.C. Ross, expert on U and non-U among other things.

-athon, -thon

Marathon is the name of the place in Greece where in 490 B C the Greeks beat the invading Persians in a decisive battle. A messenger is supposed to have run all the way to Athens with the news, falling down dead on delivering it, as well he might have done after cunning nonstop what I had better describe as 42.195 km. That at any rate is the length of the marathon race at the modern Olympic Games. Competitive events demanding comparable endurance were quickly set up, like the so-called dance marathon in the USA. This institution may have been in doubtful taste but at least its name and nature were clear enough. Not as much could be said for what followed, when the second half of the word marathon was taken as a sort of

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Avid

verbal building-block when devising names for less edifying activities. A telethon, for instance, was a series of telephone calls intended to bully the sufferer into buying goods or contributing to a particular charity. There were things called sale-a-thons and even walkathon-talkathons. Not every Americanism deserves to have its credentials carefully examined. Some ought to be shot on sight.

Avid

This over-used word is taken in'the 1990S as an up-to-date synonym of 'keen, eager'. So it is among other things, and when somebody writes of somebody being an avid collector of ashtrays or an avid reader of modern poetry, no great harm is done, although the reader may groan a little at the sight of yet another capitulation to herd-instinct. But when somebody writes of an avid golfer or an avid motorist, the reader may remember that avid is connected with the noun avidity and itself still sometimes denotes physical greed for food or drink, and you can tolerably be described as a greedy collector or reader, though surely not as a greedy golfer or motorist. But this may be pedantry on my part. Still, avid has become quite sufficiently one of what Fowler called vogue-words to be unemployable without special care.

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B

Ballock

The early uses of this word and its by-form bollock go back centuries and are wrapped in discretion. I mention them here only to declare my preference for the more correct- looking ballock, and perhaps should not have done so at all, any learned debate on obscenities being unattractive and of doubtful value.

Bath and bathe

There is a potential confusion here which used to be veiled by a sort of vestigial puritanism. In the UK, at least, I bath, I bath myself, I have a bath, making the word rhyme each time with path. When I bathe in the sea or bathe my sore foot in a basin, I spell the word differently and pro- nounce it to rhyme with - what? Scathe, perhaps, or lathe in the sense of a rotary machine. But what exactly do I do in the USA these days? I take rather than have a bath, of course, just as I take rather than have a look at something. But what do I do in the sea or pool? Oh, of course I swim, I go for a swim even when I cannot progress an inch through the water whatever I do. And I suppose I bathe my foot like any Englishman. Americans solve all problems in their way, even minor linguistic ones.

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Because

Because

There are two popular, in the sense of common, mistakes made in speech and in informal prose. Both feature that innocent-looking word because, and one type of well- intentioned illiterate says or writes The reason he smashed the car is because he was drunk, and the other type, who is not so very different from the first type, says or writes Just because he was drunk doesn't mean it was all right for him to have smashed the car. Perhaps it was a vague sense of these dangers that, many years ago now, persuaded a committee chairman of my acquaintance to begin, a piece of self- explanation by saying, The reason being is this. (General horror ensued.) These are venial errors, but still errors. Practise saying He smashed the car because he was drunk and The fact that he was drunk doesn't mean it was all right, etc., and take some care over colloquial sentences with because in them. Refrain from starting them till you can see through to the end.

Belly

This word had an impeccable Old English and Middle Eng- lish pedigree and Old Norse and Old High German cog- nates, whereas stomach, an obvious competitor, comes to us via Old French from Latin and ultimately Greek. Of the two, belly is the more natural and obvious, stomach the more rarefied and scientific or even pseudo-scientific. U nfortu- nately belly today carries an unmistakable whiff of the ruth- lessly hairy-chested, down-to-earth, call-a-spade-a-spade 'frankness' that I for one find more embarrassing. To say 'she burnt her stomach sunbathing' may well seem over- delicate; to declare roundly 'I never drink on an empty belly' sounds to me like going too far in the opposite direction.

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Berks and wankers

Tastes differ; perhaps I can say without much fear of contra- diction that both words need handling with care. Tummy, though dating back to 1868, is of course insuf- ferably arch when not used as a childish term.

Berks and wankers

Not every reader will immediately understand these two terms as I use them, but most people, most users of English, habitually distinguish between two types of person whose linguistic habits they deplore if not abhor. For my present purpose these habits exclude the way people say their vowel sounds, not because these are unimportant but because they are hard to notate and at least as hard to write about. Berks are careless, coarse, crass, gross and of what anybody would agree is a lower social class than one's own. They speak in a slipshod way with dropped Hs, intruded glottal stops and many mistakes in grammar. Left to them the English language would die of impurity, like late Latin. Wankers are prissy, fussy, priggish, prim and of what they would probably misrepresent as a higher social class than one's OVln. They speak in an over-precise way with much pedantic insistence on letters not generally sounded, especially Hs. Left to them the language would die of purity, like medieval Latin. In cold fact, Inost speakers, like most writers left to themselves, try to pursue a course between the slipshod and the punctilious, however they might describe the extremes they try to avoid, and this is healthy for them and the language.

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Billion

Billion

Until about twenty years ago, the word billion meant, in the United Kingdom, one million million or 1,000,000,000,000 or 10 12 , and in the United States and elsewhere one thousand million or 1,000,000,000 or 10 9 . I am not saying which I think is the better system, merely that there were two distinct systems as stated. Then some time in the 1970S the United Kingdom system was changed to bring it into conformity with the US system. I think this change has bewildered many people here, has not been properly taken in by them. Very large numbers with a lot of noughts at the end are always hard to appreciate, and British newspaper readers have not been helped by the prac- tice of printing such unpronounceables as £816m and £.816bn. No doubt it is too late for us to try to insist on £816,000,000, but surely not to try to insist on printing £1,000 million. Otherwise we are in effect conniving at a conspiracy to keep voters in the dark about just what enor- mous sums are being spent or discussed in their name. And their name includes our name.

Bonus

Used to mean additional benefit. Then quite recently lazy and ignorant writers, perhaps foggily remembering or hear- ing that bonus was a Latin word meaning good (adjective: a good thing would have to be bonum), started to write about an added bonus, thus with unconscious ineptitude saying additional twice over. Who cares? Only you and me and the occasional reader.

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Breathalyse(r)

Brave

When a child is described in the popular Press as brave, we know at once that he or she is near death's door. There may be several reasons for bestowing this invariable description, of which perhaps the worthiest can be traced to a desire to hearten child, family and friends without extreme concern for the facts, should any be discernible in such a case. To carp may seem churlish or worse, but I wonder whether it might not be found acceptable to point out that there are such things as degrees of courage, and that to commend somebody automatically and indiscriminately reduces the value of the commendation. I think I see how difficult it would be to alter what has become a tradition. At the same time I hope no one concerned will notice the merely comforting aspect of it.

Breathalyse(r)

This is just the sort of word that turns an old-fashioned grammarian scarlet with rage. Neverthelec;s everyone uses it and understands it immediately. Many years ago, old A.P. Herbert devised a little four- part test for 'new' words, those fancied to be presenting themselves for admission to the language. This entrance exam comprised four questions: Understood? - Can we admire you? - Are you good? (i.e. are your etymological credentials in order?) - Do we require you? A word had to score a minimum of twenty out of a possible forty to get in. Television, I remember, scraped by with just twenty, its answers scoring 10-0-0-10. So it has been with breathalyse and breathalyser. But of course, like television, they had already got in by passing the one test that counts, general acceptance; a crude test, no doubt, and yet imposs- ible to fudge or cancel.

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Briton

Briton

This unsatisfactory. word has come to be used, chiefly in newspapers, to mean 'person of either sex either originating in Great Britain or having acquired British nationality', which is admittedly quite a lot for one short dissyllable. Among its troubles is that, in the sense just given, it is artificial, not natural, a fact reflected in its never appearing in ordinary conversation. Another trouble is that the word refers not to a country or nation but to a geographical feature, the island of Great Britain. (Note for huffy Ameri- cans and others: the 'Great' is not a claim to grandeur or importance but to mark the difference between Grande Bretagne and Bretagne, that is Brittany. Cf. Great Bear, etc.) A third such objection says that Briton has no resonance or possible appeal to national pride of the sort felt not only by Englishmen but by the inhabitants of Scotland and Wales. Milton did not write that it was the Almighty's practice to reveal Himself 'first to his Britons'. The word British is a little more vibrant but, again, Charles Kingsley did not write that 'twas the hard grey weather that bred 'hard British men'. It might be good if Briton could be confined to the popular Press. Where intra-British differences matter, as in sport, no shame or resentment is felt when things are called by their right names. In other conversational circumstances my own solution is to talk about English history etc. and Englishmen unless a Scot or a Welshman happens to be in earshot, when I consider switching. But I remember e.g. that the Armada was beaten without Scottish assistance. Perhaps Briton in the modern sense is more deeply en- trenched than sometimes appears. The earliest use of it personally known to me comes in 'The Burial of Sir John Moore after Corunna' by Charles Wolfe (1817), where Moore is said to sleep 'in the grave where a Briton has laid him'. This is perhaps a surprising use by a Dublin student

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Bureaucrat

in a poem written in Dublin less than twenty years after the Act of Union between Great Britain and Ireland. Wolfe is of course an English surname, like Moore.

Brochure

This is not just a 'needless variant' of pamphlet, though no doubt it is sometimes so used and regarded. Whatever its original meaning in French and in English, it has now developed a handy separable sense as the term for a lavish illustrated hand-out issued free by a university, hotel, firm of decorators or similar facility to attract custom, whereas a pamphlet is a mere glorified leaflet, priced but usually unbound, on some uncommercial theme. Words like brochure, with their commercial taint, are a natural target for purists.

Brutalise

Once happily and usefully settled in the meaning of 'render brutal', as in chis experiences in Angola and elsewhere seem to have brutalised him', now perverted by Americans and others to mean 'treat brutally', as in 'he was brutalised by the Angolan police', and rendered unusable.

Bureaucrat

Fowler called this a barbarous formation and would have liked us to say burOHcrat and burOHcracy. Recognising that these pronunciations were unlikely to catch on
he settles for a change of spelling to burocrat with other forms to match. For once I think Fowler's hostility was misdirected.

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Busing

Bureaucrat is a most useful word, and COD inaccurately restricts its application to government and governmental officials. It also pertains to what we might now call quangos and their various members, and the power to call somebody a cultural bureaucrat, for instance, is not one to be lightly surrendered. The word is often misspelt by those who seem to think it derives from French beau rather than bureau, and beaurocrats come popping up allover the place. It is and was and is likely to remain bureaucrat, so spelt and pronounced with stress on the first syllable. Anything else is not only a form of showing off, it may also, however briefly, not be understood.

Busing

No, this head-word is not a colloquial form of abusing or anything else but the present participle of the verb to bus. As such it is necessary for outlining in small compass a whole educational policy, that of conveying, by bus or other means, pupils of a particular race, religion, etc., to a school deemed more suitable for them than one in the neighbour- hood in which they live, quite a lot to be saying in one word. Nevertheless, busing, like the preterite bused, is not instantly recognisable as what it is. The conjugation of the present indicative starts recognisably enough I bus, not I buss, which has to do with kissing, but other forms like busing and bused may cause temporary confusion in a way that focusing, biased, etc., seldom do. Consistency and logic are to be sought after where no bad things can result, but this may be one of the places where bad things can result, and perhaps it would be better to plunge in and write bussing and bussed. I think I would if I had to use the term at all often.

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c

Capitals and full stops

Once upon a time everything was straightforward and every- thing was the same, and you wrote of the R.A.F. and the B.B.C. and the U.S.A. under principles that needed no defining, only demonstration. Then bit by bit modernity started arriving and the full stops started disappearing, but at different speeds and with different degrees of complete- ness. At one stage it looked as if collections of capital initials that could be and often were pronounced as a word, acronyms as they were very often called, consistently lost their full stops, and we wrote NATO and UNO and NASA, and said Nato and Uno and Nasa, and often-used abbreviations lost their stops too and we got ie and eg and even rsm (in The Times), and it seemed as if we were within reach of consistency, that grammarian's dream of perfection. But then some of us noticed that to write RA F suggested, often wrongly and perhaps annoyingly, that the writer said Raf, and that nobody said Ira, and that although everybody was writing USA nobody ever said Ooza or Yooza even in fun, and what about people's initials? Consistency, even a rough rule of thumb, seemed and still seems as far off as ever. There is luckily an easy way out of this not very pressing problem. It consists of heeding the fact that nobody cares much or even observes what you write in your own fist - in a personal letter, say - and more importantly as regards matter to be published no personal system of uniformity

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Careful writers

has a chance of surviving translation into print. 'House style' will take care of everything. So go ahead and write U.S.A. or USA or even usa and it will come out the way They want it. N.B. (or NB): This is written not after a tough tussle with printers but in a spirit of detachment and resignation. More generally, use capitals as little as possible. A par- ticular reference (the Government) earns a capital initial where a general one (any British government) does not. The use of small capitals is also to be encouraged, but that too is a province of house style.

Careful writers

This expression grew current in the permissive years when nobody dared say in so many words that such-and-such an expression was illiterate or wrong, but at the same time people went on feeling that some usages were better than others. Rank barbarisms could not, while that fashion lasted, be denounced as such, only mildly tut-tutted over as 'avoided by careful writers'. That phrase and concept of course carryon into the pre- sent age of renascent prescriptivism, when a spade is coming to be called a spade once more if not yet a bloody shovel. But those careful writers continue as before to avoid the illiteracies and circumvent the dodginesses I have described here. If from time to time they seem to strike a sanctimoni- ous note, to be unduly conscious of their singularity and dedication, this seems a payable price for having such people around. They will persist in fighting the good fight what- ever anybody says and under any conditions because they have to, or so it seems to them. Cheered when the general outlook seems good, not unduly dismayed at adverse por- tents, they pursue good style for its own sake. They know that no linguistic change, large or small, comes about as a

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Case

result of conscious effort. If Fowler could not discourage the improper use of eke out or of like as a conjunction, who could? We have never seen a time when it was fashionable to write well and unfashionable not to, nor are we likely to now that most of us can just about read and write. And even if one did arrive, it would fade away sooner or later, as fashions do. All that can be done is to encourage a few individuals to start thinking about how they express their thoughts. And take care oneself, naturally.

Case

(The grammatical sort, not the noun-use sometimes equiva- lent to instance.) At first sight the English language has no cases, or only a possessive signalled by apostrophe-S and a couple more in personal and relative pronouns. A little investigation shows that by and large the language has no case-endings, no inflections to show what grammatical job a word is doing in a sentence, and that nevertheless plenty of mistakes can be made that are traceable to a faulty sense of case. The most common kind of mistake is to use the nomina- tive form of a pronoun where common sense as well as grammar demand an oblique form, and write sentences like:

Everything good and pleasant in our lives we owe to He that loved us and died for us.

Behind this example there may be a feeling that He is posher than Him (see remarks on you and I in HYPER-URBANISMS), especially in such a solemn context. There is a more wide- spread feeling that I (instead of "Ie) and especially he (instead of him) are always right or suitable before a defining relative clause. Reading the sentence aloud slowly would probably

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Case

have told the writer that to He must be wrong, though nobody with a feeling for words would ever have committed to paper the sentence as it stands. Nominative where accusative/dative is necessary supplies the vast majority of case-errors in English. But now and then a writer tries to make a noun serve two incompatible purposes, as In:

There are few things such women value more, or can be more easily resold at a fair price, than the traditional diamond necklace.

Quite a few untrained but observant people will feel uneasy about that sort of sentence, far more than will correctly trace the trouble to the way the word things is expected to do two jobs at once, namely to serve as object of the verb value and as subject of can be, or (if you like) to be switched from the accusative case to the nominative in the same sentence. To be sure, all the grammarian will have done is to identify a fault that many who are not grammarians will have become aware of, but a good half of his trade is giving a name to what other speakers of his language only have a feeling about. As I write this, there comes handily to hand a letter on the correspondence page of The Times newspaper over the names of two persons known to me who share membership of a notorious centre of laxity in London's Covent Garden district. The two write about 'the long-running TV series Worzel Gummidge . . . which we developed from the original stories . . . and became something of a cult among adult viewers . . .' Oh dear. The insertion in the right place of a single word (which) would have rescued that sentence. Would that all our linguistic difficulties were so readily solved.

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Chauvin, chauvinism

Chauvin, chauvinism

Nicolas Chauvin was a soldier of the French Republic and Empire who served under Napoleon Bonaparte and was fanatically devoted to him and his cause. Chauvin soon became a byword for bellicose patriotism, and a character bearing his name was introduced into a number of plays and entertainments, not only in France. For many years Chauvin and chauvinism, the latter now often printed with a lower-case initial, were domesticated in English as virulent types of jingo and jingoism. More recently, about 1970 in fact, the phrase-makers of the women's rights movement may have noticed that their theories were thin in historicity and colour; anyway, the terms male chauvinist and -ism, designating the enemy and his 'ideology', began to creep into the language. They had hardly had time to turn round there before the male component started to creep out again. Even before the Seventies were over one was running into (female) foes of (male) chauvinism who had never so much as heard of Chau- vin. If that kind of person had ever wondered about the Frenchified pronunciation of at any rate the first syllable of chauvinism ('show' instead of 'tshaw') no sign of such a thing was discernible. Still, we all know that to be ignorant of the provenance of a word is no bar to using it effectively, and life is short. Lieut.-Co!. Jean Martinet (d. 1672), Louis XIV's inspec- tor-general of infantry, rather similarly had his surname applied to any extreme disciplinarian. He would punish delinquent soldiers with a cat-o'-nine-tails later known as a martinet. To this day any severe person in authority is liable to be called a martinet, but the man's name has never been applied to any foe of feminism, real or imagined.

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Classic and classical

Classic and classical

. One would have thought these two were settled down, classic used as a noun ('a classic of our literature') and as an adjective meaning something like 'standard' or 'ideal' ('a classic case of arrested development', 'a classic captain's innings'), and classical an adjective applied in the first place to styles of art ('a classical concerto' as opposed to a baroque or a romantic concerto, 'classical music' as opposed to light music, jazz, rock, etc.) and to be used instead of classic when in doubt. But then a commercial radio station came along playing records of classical music, or shot bits of it between chatter, and calling itself not Classical FM but Classic FM, one more verbal mistake piled on top of the majestic variety it pours out every minute. The people go wrong by constantly stressing the wrong word and pausing in the wrong place, nothing that a little less laziness would not cure. But that is true of many of the world's ills.

Coastal

A word that 'should be abandoned', says Fowler bluntly, pointing out the fact that the spelling shows by its oa that the suffix -ai, which he finds it unnecessary to state is Latin in origin, has been joined to an English root. Coastal itself, however barbarous a formation, goes back to the I 880s and, as few could have foreseen, was to be multiplied millions of times in the Coastal Command of wartime years. Men- tioned here chiefly to note that here is another natural prey of purists. Like television.

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Colloquial rhythms

Cohort

In the Roman army a cohort was a squad of infantry that, I now find, could include as many as six hundred men, not far off the complement of a modern infantry battalion under the command of a lieutenant-colonel. A cohort today, as in the US President's associates or aides or cohorts described in the media, is or can be something far smaller, a matter of three or four persons or even of one: cthe Senator's cohort was smoking a cigarette.' What has brought so much oblo- quy on this particular misuse is not clear, but it may be the error of nomenclature whereby the meaning of the prefix co- has been misinterpreted to signify joint action or close association or cohesion. Anyway, cohort has rather mysteri- ously attracted widespread hostility while legion, a division of 3000-6000 combatants, has stood for any large or largeish number without objection for many years.

Colloquial rhythms

It is still said by way of compliment that this or that poet, dramatist, prose writer is good at catching colloquial rhythms, be they those of today or yesterday in Mayfair or Essex or upstate New York. We are all grateful for a word kindly meant, but this one perhaps amounts to less than it may seem. Every spoken utterance has rhythm in the sense that it consists of a series of syllables variously stressed. This is so essential that an utterance without all rhythm could only be made by a machine of some sort. Every human utterance also has a unique rhythm, even if it repeats in every dis- tinguishable detail another by the same speaker. All I probably intend to convey is that everything we say or represent as said has its own unique rhythm, one inseparable from its meaning. The rhythm of a sentence

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Connection, connexion

cannot be determined if its meaning is ignored or not known. So the rhythm of a sentence like 'I could be reason- ably sure he had no strong motive for killing himself' would differ according to which of half a dozen words received emphasis. And to praise some of Eliot's earlier poems for their ability to catch colloquial or conversational rhythms, as has been done at least once, means either very little or some sort of compliment to their power of rendering in verse colloquial etc. phraseology, spoken expressions. This latter compliment does amount to something. Perhaps it remained unvoiced because, for one reason or another, the writer was shy of claiming knowledge of a kind of phraseology actually in use among the uninstructed.

Connection, connexion

There is a feeling here and there that the spelling of such words with an X is somehow classier, richer in history, better than the spelling with CT that everybody naturally adopts. Pfui! Everybody is often wrong but not this time. The philological evidence is dubious and no one has yet suc- ceeded in introducing even the ghost of an X into important by-forms like connecting, connective and indeed connect. So go on writing connection and the rest and treating connexion and the rest with the tolerant indifference they deserve.

Convince

Another Americanism. Nowadays people will become con- vinced to follow some course of action, whereas until recently they would only become convinced of some supposed truth or that something was true. The expected form of words was that such people were persttaded to do something. 1

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think that that is the reason for the new usage: persuading somebody too readily suggests inverted commas, the notion of illegitimate pressure, the use of threats or bribery. A similar process of guilt-by-association has tended to drive out deny (see POLITICAL WORDS). To be sure, threats, bribery, etc. are perfectly possible in a case of convincing somebody to do something, but that will have to wait.

:rescendo

Once a musical term meaning '(passage played) with increasing volume' and a derived figurative term meaning 'progress towards a climax'. For many years now taken to be a fancy synonym for 'climax' as in 'the gunfire reached a crescendo' or 'the chorus of vilification rose to a crescendo' and rendered usable only by the unwary or vulgar. Outside a strictly musical context, that is.

:rossed 7

To cross one's 7S is perhaps defensible on the Continent, where traditionally people handwrote the numeral I with a long upstroke before the downstroke, to distinguish it from the capital letter I. A cross-stroke on the numeral 7 thus distinguishes it from the numeral I. In English- speaking and other countries where no visible distinction is made between numeral I and capital letter I, it is unneces- sary and distracting and may be confusing to cross a 7. In less polite language, to do so is either gross affectation or, these days, straightforward ignorance. It should not be tolerated in any person over the age of twelve.

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Danglers, floaters

Sheridan was once staying at the house of an elderly maiden lady who wanted more of his company than he was willing to give. Proposing one day to take a stroll with him, he excused himself on account of the badness of the weather.

This famous quotation from the earlier nineteenth century shows that it was then considered quite acceptable to attach a participle to a main sentence so tenuously as to have horrified later generations. It was clearly the elderly maiden lady who proposed the stroll but, far from being the subject of the second sentence, she appears in the preceding one and there only in a subordinate capacity. Today, and yester- day too, even a not over-careful writer would have felt constrained to begin the second sentence with a phrase like 'When she proposed' or 'On her proposing'. This kind of solecism has begun to attract the dreadful fame of the split infinitive and the ending of a sentence with a preposition. This time, however, it is what I (from a lofty pinnacle) would call a real solecism. The dangling participle is not only at least as often com- mitted in America as here, but denounced there at least as regularly and rudely. In fact it took an American gram- marian to point out that the term dangling participle is itself suspect, since a body that dangles is fastened to something

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firm at one point if nowhere else, as a properly conducted participle is fastened to the subject of a main verb. The dangling participle, however, or simply the dangler, is the usual term for the thing not only in the USA but increas- ingly in the UK, where it has virtually driven out Fowler's more strictly accurate but less vivid label, unattached participle. The objection to the unattached or wrongly attached participle is firstly, of course, that it is unprofessional, the sign of a casual or careless writer. Secondly, though not often truly ambiguous, it may cause the attentive reader (the only sort really worth having) to pause without profit, to spend some unnecessary time checking that the sentence in question and its constituent parts are as they seemed to be. There are writers - Shakespeare is one - who can make us pause with profit and decide usefully that something other or more is being said than what first appeared, but they are rare. In the midst of this scene of warning and prohibition there is fortunately an active class of what have been called acceptable danglers, words that end in -ing that have in effect ceased to serve as adjectives and become prepositions or adverbs, like considering, which is often used to mean nothing much more than in view of The list of these is long and always growing and includes near its alphabetical beginning words like assuming ('assuming this was a typical county side, the proportion of keen fieldsmen seemed unduly low') and barring ('barring accidents, they should be home well before dark'). As always, it is up to the writer to decide. Looking inland, the snow-capped peaks of the cordillera dominate the prospect, all right? I think not. Generally speaking? A virtually unconditional yes.

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Data

Yes, by origin plural only, by usage irreversibly singular. Those who write these data or this datum run the strong risk of being not so much misunderstood as thought to be involved in some misprint muddle. The best solution is to avoid using any form of the word while enjoying a comfort- able little thrill of superiority whenever a singular use is spotted. The singular use of media is less general so far (1995) but looks likely to prevail; a nice posh-looking term meaning Press plus broadcasting, etc., is obviously handier in the singular than in the plural. I wish only that wits would stop being clever about the pronunciation of the word with a J sound in the middle, surely the original and unpedantic way to say media. Some of them even spell the word meeja, an excess that perhaps points to a hidden guilt at (mis)using the word in the first place. Compare agenda.

Decimate

Decimation was a form of collective punishment in the Roman army, whereby every tenth man in a mutinous or demoralised party of soldiers was executed, so to decimate in English was used to mean 'destroy a small but noticeable part of'. Most people would say they know some of that, and yet that useful word has been irreversibly corrupted into just one more synonym for 'damage beyond repair, virtually destroy', but with the advantage of looking rather classy and learned. Not to be used even in the original sense on grounds of ambiguity.

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Deism, theism

Deism, theism

Deism is belief in any sort of world spirit, a non-personal god who or which unlike other gods has never been revealed to mankind. Theism is belief in a personal, revealed god. Thus Wordsworth, in the Immortality Ode at least, was some kind of deist; the Archbishop of Canterbury is presum- ably a theist, or is paid to be. By a common error, a person may be labelled a deist when a theist seems to be meant. By a different common error, the first syllable of either word is pronounced to rhyme with pay when it should be made to rhyme with pea.

Deja vu, an uncanny sense of

This expression has perhaps been done to death by now. I certainly hope so. Its original application was to a transient psychological state, not uncommon among those under about forty, in which the subject feels that he has seen before some place where he has provably never been in this life (thus providing fanciful evidence for reincarnation). The journalistic contribution has been to apply this feeling to some event or situation a person has witnessed before, as just another way of saying that, for instance, a governmental apology for one thing is reminiscent of the same govern- ment's apology for another. This added to the world's stock of verbal garbage but it also provided the needy with a useful and quite posh-looking alternative to 'this is where I/we came in' and other tattered phrases with that sort of meanIng.

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Delusion, illusion

Those already aware of the distinction between these two words and the corresponding states of mind are advised to move to another article. Others may read on. The only possible source of difficulty is the non-existence of a verb illude to contrast with delude. In all other respects the differences are straightforward, as straightforward as those between sanity and insanity. An illusion about the world or a part of it may be con- sciously entertained by a sane person who knows the true state of affairs perfectly well. A delusion is fully embraced by someone who to that extent is insane, genuinely con- vinced of what is not the case. A sentimental dreamer may enjoy the illusion that child- hood is a time of beatific happiness; a lunatic may have the delusion (however plausible it can seem at times) that chil- dren are agents of Satan. A successful dramatic performance perhaps brings about, via a willing suspension of disbelief, the illusion that Hamlet is a real prince of Denmark; another member of the same audience perhaps falls victim to the delusion that Claudius is a real villain. Finally, I cannot improve on Fowler's contradistinction:

That the sun moves round the earth was once a delusion, and is still an illusion.

Destination

For ages this imposing word led a harmless existence mean- ing no more than a 'place for which a person or thing is bound' (COD). About forty years ago there was a film called Destination Moon, but the word went on as before until some

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time in the I98os. Then somebody in the ever-growing tourism industry saw the need for a new or newish expression meaning a 'place you travelled to for pleasure', and destination stood ready. In no time the Sunday papers were full of travel destinations and tourist destinations and, soon enough, just destinations, the noun alone coming to stand for a place you went to on a trip or on holiday or, nowadays, for a break. Useful word that, break, by the way, implying what must often be falsely that the holiday-maker is actually snatching a hard-earned and brief respite between two bouts of taxing, responsible work or even toil. To resume: destination has arrived. The word retains its pompous railway-guide feel, but it is quite long and son- orous and does seem to dignify bloody awful places like Blackpool and Acapulco. Nevertheless it exemplifies a trend worth resisting.

Dialect or language?

Dialect is a difficult word to define, not least in that, unlike language, it may be taken as derogatory by a speaker of the dialect in question. Is Scotch (or Scottish, or Scots) a dialect of English spoken in (parts of) Scotland or a language in its own right? Is Welsh a language or a variety of Gaelic or Celtic along with other varieties like Breton and Manx? Or Catalan and Basque, is either or both or neither a dialect of Spanish? Is Romansh, variously spelt and sometimes known as Ladin, a language or a dialect? Is Norwegian a national language or a dialect of Danish? Is Flemish roughly the same as Dutch, or a dialect of Dutch, or a national language? And how are Mexican and other Latin-American forms of Spanish related to metropolitan and/or Castilian Spanish? And what about, say, the Indian or Red Indian or Amerindian or native American languages? The answers to these questions would in practice largely

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depend on who is answering them. I am thinking not only for instance of personal history and ancestry and national and/or regional pride, but also of what the respondent might know of language(s) and dialect(s) outside direct experience. There would obviously be much consensus on such matters as whether German and Dutch are related to each other, and some people who speak neither language would be able to pick out obviously cognate forms in words for mother, father, etc. But no general consensus or overall definition of terms like dialect and language can be made to emerge. Nor is expert knowledge helpful in this way. It is rightly too particular, too partial, too local, in a word too expert to illuminate large, vague questions. I am interested in language and therefore in linguistic matters, but I am not and never have been an expert on any branch of them. I suppose I came nearest to being one when I was studying Latin and Greek at schooL Since then my reading has been unorganised and probably superficial, with a few approaches to learning something when I found myself alongside the Welsh and their language in the 1950s. My first father-in-law knew some Romansh. My first novel was translated into Catalan early on, before achieving Spanish or French. Things like that. As an anecdotal footnote, one that illustrates the distance between the amateur and the professional, I will recount my exchange a few years ago with a real linguist or linguisti-

ciano The talk (heavens knows how) had moved to simi- larities between languages and families of languages. I mentioned those of the Finno-Ugrian group spoken by com- munities to the east of those of the Indo-European group, the main representatives being Finnish and Hungarian. As far as I remember I passed over offshoots like Olonetsian and the Ob-Ugrian twosome. The philologist signified that I had acceptably described the relevant position in those parts. 'So Finnish and Hungarian are related,' I said.

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'Finnish, Estonian and others on the one side, chiefly Hungarian on the other.' 'How closely are the main two related?' 'Oh, very closely indeed.' The man was not joking. 'Really. How closely is that?' 'Oh, as English and Greek, for instance.' 'Fascinating,' I said. On the other hand, when a linguistician tells you that there were once dozens of entirely unrelated language- families in North America, you may take it that they were in truth entirely unrelated.

Dialogue

In the past, talks or discussions on important subjects were considered to be satisfactorily described as talks or discussions. Nowadays the two sides in a dispute, for instance, are apt to be engaged in (wait for it) a meaningful dialogue. The first element of this phrase is an absurdity, since no dialogue is meaningless, and the second illiterate, since any reasonable number can take part in dialogue or a dialogue. More charit- ably, perhaps, it can be said that we sympathise with the wish to assure reader or hearer that these talks or discussions are designed to get somewhere, not just to fill in time, but we have seen often enough what becomes of even well- formulated intentions. And anyway the whole meaningful- dialogue expression looks and sounds unbearably pompous. Nevertheless one would not wish to be deprived of a phrase that so unerringly points out its user as a humourless ninny.

Dictionary

It used to be said, probably with much truth, that every literate household possessed a Bible and a copy of Pilgrim's Progress. During the nineteenth century, the works of Shake-

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speare and of Dickens would often have added themselves to these and, towards its end, an English dictionary, one of the smaller ones. Nowadays, the shelf where these volumes would once have stood has been replaced by a longer one bearing video recordings. In particular, the habit of owning and often consulting a dictionary has largely died out among the general public. This decline has gone hand in hand with the disappearance of Latin, a language and a literature in the pursuance of which the reader and occasional writer is perpetually looking things up. Even those who make a living out of words, like journali
ts, clearly own no diction- ary or, if they do, would no more think of ever consulting it than the Domesday Book. Somebody of my sort of age and taste is bound to experi- ence a series of unpleasant little surprises here. Two such turned up the other day in the correspondence columns of what would undoubtedly call itself a quality newspaper. Both were mild complaints, one that the phrase 'the Greek Calends' was left unglossed in a recent issue, the other that a few not very hard-looking words of French had not been translated. When I had stopped screaming with rage I checked that the Greek Calends were indeed glossed in the smallest of my dictionaries. I have not much French but enough, it was soon clear, to deal with the French phrase objected to, perhaps actually recognised it. By now I had nearly calmed down, not quite, though, because how dare two grown-up people not penetrate such mysteries for them- selves instead of advertising their ignorance? Easily enough is the answer, in an era when even quite inquiring types have got out of the habit of looking things up.

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Didacticism

One of the funniest articles in ME U is to be found under this head; Fowler likes nothing better than seeing off lin- guistic prigs and pedants. Before getting down to it here he notes didacticism as a characteristically male vice. (Agreed.) His two chief examples, suttee, referring to the former Hindu custom requiring a widow to immolate herself on her husband's funeral pyre, and the Caliph of Baghdad from the Arabian Nights, are doubtless not as immediately familiar as they once were, but both are just right for their purpose and recognisable enough. Fowler duly writes:

The Anglo-Indian [of British birth with first-hand knowl- edge of India] who has discovered that the suttee he read of as a boy is called sati by those who know it best is not content to keep so important a piece of knowledge to himself; he must have the rest of us call it sati like . . . himself; at any rate, he will give the rest of us a chance of mending our ignorant ways by printing nothing but sati and forcing us to guess what word known to us it may stand for.

And straight after that:

The orientalist whose histories have made familiar with the Khalif is determined to rid us of the delusion . . . that there ever was such a being as our old friend the Caliph . . . The one truth is . . . that Khalif has a greater resemblance to Arabic than Caliph; is that of any use to anyone who does not know it already? . . . English is . . . entitled to give what form it chooses to foreign words that it has occasion to use. . . [or] why do we say Germany and Athens. . . instead of Deutschland and the rest?

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He says elsewhere:

Pride of knowledge is a very unamiable characteristic, and the display of it should be sedulously avoided. . . [as in the case of} amuck [didactically amok}, different to [forbidden by didacticism}, journal [which pedantry would confine to meaning a daily paper only, because one of its sources, the Old French word jurnal, seems to have meant daily}, shamefaced [instead of historically correct shamefast}, etc.

As so often with Fowler, his verdict was to have meant an end of the matter. But we all know that amok has driven out amuck, that different to is still thought to be a solecism, and above all that that right of the English language, as of any other, to devise its own forms for foreign names is under constant erosion. Peking was an English word for centuries before it was suddenly replaced by Beijing, however you pronounce it; Ceylon has notoriously been replaced by Sri Lanka; Lyons has reverted to Lyon (Lee-on(g» and Marseilles (pronounced Marsails) to Marseille (MarSAY, often with an attempt at the French uvular trill in the middle); Seville and Genoa have come a step nearer being pronounced in the native fashion. What about Brussels and Brussels? Ah, that I predict will go on as before. The British/English form conveniently steers between Bruxelles and Brussel, the Walloon and Flemish versions of the name of the Belgian capital.

Dilemma

This is a very precise and was once a very useful word meaning 'a position that leaves only a choice between two equally unwelcome possibilities'. Somebody in such a pos- ition was often said to be 'on the horns of a dilemma'; the

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word was narrow and clear. Unfortunately it has ceased to be either and for many years has been resorted to by journal- ists and others on the look-out for a posh-appearing syno- nym for 'difficulty, quandary'. This perversion has made dilemma unusable by careful writers.

Dimension

At one time this furnished a relatively precise term of liter- ary criticism. A dimension, then pronounced with a long I in the first syllable, was one of three observable in solid bodies, viz. length, breadth and depth, and certain charac- ters in fiction were said to be two-dimensional, like say Parson Adams, or three-dimensional, like say Leopold Bloom. However deftly executed, the two-dimensional character was felt and perhaps said to want a third dimen- sion, to lack depth or whatever was necessary to furnish a fully realised portrayal. So matters rested for a time, perhaps rather unadven- turously. Then about ten years ago and quite suddenly, limited characters in novels and plays began to be com- plained of as one-dimensional. I thought at first that critics and others were setting out to reduce such characters to mathematical lines, the only possible constructs in a single dimension. This seemed incomprehensible until it dawned on me that of course dimension was now pronounced in transatlantic fashion with a short I in the first syllable and had become no more than an additional vague, shoddy, tatty but fashionable synonym for aspect or view or side or feature or characteristic or what-have-you. A one-dimensional character thus lacked depth. Really?

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Disappearance of Latin

Disappearance of Latin

My own career is a good example of many things, but none more than in my experience of the language and the literature of Ancient Rome. Like millions of my fellows, I was brought up in the 1930S to study Latin. When I was seventeen I switched to English, which nevertheless meant that I continued to study the classics, though less inflexibly than before. When I secured an award in English and went up to Oxford in 1941 I had the advantage of a largely classical training, for all that it seldom felt like any sort of advantage at the time. The foregoing is a mere exordium in that 1 have no intention of going on to say that to have studied Latin is in itself somehow good for you or for your English style. It is not that a knowledge of Latin protects anybody from making mistakes about the meaning of English words, because the meanings of words are not fixed, they change in and after their move from one language to another. It is true that defendo means 'I defend,' but a muscle is not a little mouse, which etymologically it is, nor is a pencil what its origins declare it to be, a doubly small penis. Neither is it the case that, as schoolmasters are supposed to have thought or said at one time, one was helped to think by mastering that language, as if it were a course of mental gymnastics. Nevertheless the student of Latin, as of any considerable dead language, must constantly be trying to choose the right word to give the meaning of a Latin expression in English or an English expression in Latin. And if the writing of English generally is in decline, as many would say it is, we may be tempted to say that people no longer try to choose the right word as they once did. They often got it wrong, but they tried. Do they now? Something like the foregoing sketch might be developed to accompany an analysis of English poetry as written over the last fifty years or so. If this is seen as having become

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not only less formally organised but less exact in its expression, then the loss of Latin has surely had a hand in the matter somewhere. Again, I do not simply mean that an acquaintance with Propertius or Catullus in the original is beneficial to any sort of poet, though I think I do think so, but just as simply that translation into and out of Latin verse calls for exactness, and that that quality is demanded in the writing of poetry as nowhere else. Exactness, by the way, is to be understood as applying to more than deno- tation: a word or phrase must be suitable to its context, so that a dialectal or slang term, for instance, is on the whole unlikely to fit well into a passage of high seriousness - except for special effect, as teachers used to add. The chances are that no particular virtue attaches to Latin as a language, although its role in our culture is unique and uniquely important. Any dead language will do as the kind of trainer I mean, such as Ancient Greek or, were it copious enough and intelligible, Etruscan. But deadness is necessary. A living language is by definition unfixed, in a state of continuous development and change, taking up, adapting and often dropping dialecticisms, provincialisms, technical terms, slang of all sorts, foreign expressions and more. It has no choice but to be useless as any sort of example. The preceding paragraphs are no doubt speculative. What follows is all too manifest. Not just Latin itself has dis- appeared but in many cases any certain knowledge of what it was. A phrase like mutatis mutandis, apart from being offensively unintelligible to almost every British person, will be taken as a bit of Italian or French or (it's tempting to add) Choctaw rather than Latin. You come across it on old gravestones and monks used to sing it, or in it. The rest is silence. Latin is not only dead but cancelled. When I was at school, the so-called New Pronunciation of Latin had come into use, though some elderly teachers now and then slipped back into the Old. The N P aimed

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at speaking Latin as the Romans had spoken it, the 0 P spoke Latin words as if they were English. So, for instance, the Latin phrase just quoted would come out as mootahteece mootundeece in N P, as mewtehtice mewtandice in 0 P. That great Latinist and headmaster, F.R. Dale, always insisted that N P was called for when you were speaking Latin and o P for English; after all it was Victoria not Wicktohria Station and a vacuum not a wahkuoom cleaner. It seemed logical as well as clear. As Latin began to be less studied in schools, so, perhaps oddly, did people lose their memory of OP versions and more and more use NP, or something like it. By 1970 or so that process was complete. Today, when dealing with phrases that have entered the English language, like prima facie and a priori, non-Latinists say preema fackiay and ah preeoree if they use them at all, and whether or not they muddle them and their meanings up together as they are, perhaps more often than Latinists, apt to do. That much larger number of Latin phrases that have never entered our language or only done so among specialised speakers, like sine die or in statu puPillari, keep their OP integrity as siney die-ee among lawyers and in staychoo pewPillairigh in academe and seldom get used elsewhere. Well, there we are, and nobody is much worse off in any obvious way. We may be more noticeably worse off in the pronunciation of some ordinary English words. I suggest that this has been affected by a haziness about foreign origins resulting from the loss of Latin both as a language and as a concept. Quite recently I heard over the air a trade-union boss talk of a vayto (veto) and a Cabinet minister of a l1ayicle (vehicle), both nouns vaguely foreign-looking words on the page. Longer ago I and others heard dayity (deity) and spontanaity for the first time. And here perhaps is the place to mention the Yay Dayum and countless other NP-ings of once deeply entrenched OP words and phrases. Unfortunately as it may well be, the world has moved

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on in the last fifty years. Once upon a time you might have been understood if you had mentioned Rossini's Staybat Mayter (Stabat Mater) or the Die-ease Eye-ree (Dies Irae), but this is much less likely today. Two maxims are worth recalling: The prime object of speech is to convey meaning, not to be right in any other sense; and Consistency is usually impossible. Nevertheless. . . Well, nevertheless the demise and departure of Latin are constantly to be regretted, at least. This demise and departure, in thjs country, have not been total; life might be easier in some respects if they had. What might possibly be called living mummifications of a few bits of it are still to be found in ordinary written English, often of an old-fashioned sort and usually abbrevi- ated. (I exclude here those specialised types of discourse like those involving lawyers and academics, as noted.) Anybody who may be offended by having familiar meanings spelt out should instead feel good at being one of a select few. Old Pronunciation used except where noted.

alias originally meant 'at another time'. Then it became a handy short noun meaning 'a name one is called by on special occasions, mainly disreputable', as in 'On the job his alias was Bloggs,' 'When having a bit on the side he used his mother's maiden name as an alias.' Then it got too hard to understand and was pushed out by the dull aka (pronounced eh-kay-eh), 'also known as'. alibi originally meant 'somewhere else'. Then it became a handy short noun meaning 'ground for pleading one was elsewhere when a deed was done', as in 'his brother gave him a satisfactory alibi.' Then it came to mean merely 'excuse' and is now obsolete in any sense. cf. Abbreviation for confer, the Latin not the English word. Means 'compare'. Being driven out by cp - 'compare'. D. V. Abbreviation for 'Deo Volente', 'God willing', 'if all goes well'.

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e.g. Abbreviation for exempli gratia, 'for [the sake of an] example'. Often confused with i.e. etc. Abbreviation for et cetera, 'and [the] other things'. Some- times used in defiance of Latinity instead of et al., in full et alii, 'and [the] other people'. et seq. Abbreviation for et sequentia, 'and [the] following things', in practice usually pages. Being driven out by and foil. ib[id] Abbreviation for ib[idem], 'in the same book, chapter, passage' etc . Very useful. i.e. Abbreviation for id est, 'that is'. Often confused with e.g. Ope cit. Abbreviation for opus citatum, 'the work quoted'. pace. An awkward word, to be avoided in one's own writings. Pace tua means 'by your leave' ,pace Bloggs means 'ifBloggs will give me leave' to say something he will very likely disagree with. So you might write, 'Pace many true pat- riots, our country's interests will not be well served by any form of European union.' But you will risk incompre- hension or misunderstanding. Pronounced, if ever, pachay, as if it were an Italian word. Recast your sentence. passim. Literally 'in a scattered fashion' but is used to mean 'in every part' of author or work mentioned, as in 'found in Homer [or the Iliad etc.] 'passim: Q.E.D. Quod erat demonstrandum, 'which was to be proved or shown'. Found at the end of theorems and formerly in smart talk. R.I.P. comes in a little oddly here, but had better come in somewhere. For requiescat in pace, 'may he/she rest in peace'. Often thought wrongly but harmlessly, indeed quite help- fully, to stand for 'rest in peace'. sic means literally 'so', but is 'appended in brackets after a word or expression in a quoted passage as guarantee that it is quoted exactly, ,though its incorrectness or absurdity suggest that it was not' - from definition in 5th edn. of COD. Good going to get all that said in three letters. My

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stylistic advice is to be very sparing with the word as a way of noting supposed absurdities, as in, say, 'the sergeant called for volunteers [sic).' It is too harsh for such an 1.1nimportant context. But useful in the margin of type- scripts as a warning to the printer to follow copy. viz. is shortened from videre licet, 'one may see'. Usually spoken as namely and used as in, say, 'The Grand Fleet comprised all manner of vessels, viz. carriers, heavy cruisers, light cruisers, corvettes, sloops. . .' But 'namely' will do as well here and in all other contexts I can think of.

Disinterested

The most famous and ancient of all misuses and not for that reason any less a case of ignorant bullshit. Nowadays perhaps this depraved form is responding to decades of denigration and starting to become less popular than its virtuous cousin, 'uninterested'. For all that, by a process not altogether unique, the misuse has acquired a shade of meaning of its own. Thus a schoolboy who is uninterested in the lesson will merely be sunk in mindless apathy and gloom, whereas his disinterested classmate will be pulling faces and launching paper aeroplanes, actively expressing boredom. Compare FORTUITOUS.

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Eke out

This once useful and individual phrase has now, in familiar style, been relegated to the status of a dozen near-synonyms. Nowadays you eke out a subsistence by scratching and scrimping, watching the pennies, carrying on somehow, struggling along, just keeping your head above water, living from hand to mouth, contriving to keep body and soul together, and so on. But in the days when words meant what they said you eked out your dull diet with nasturtium leaves, or eked out your defective income (inadequate legacy, pension, etc.) with other payments. Eke, then, was an archaic adverb meaning also and the verbal expression remembered that. So in practice you eked out the small allowance from your firm or under your father's will with consultancy fees or the proceeds of domestic work. The objection to slipshod language is not so much its remissness, though there is that, as its effective elimination of useful expressions. As things now are, to refer to what used to be eking out you have to go into tedious Latin polysyllables about supplementing sources of resources.

Elevator

Everybody knows that this is a 'needless' American variant for British lift. No doubt in a different and better world elevator would have remained a needless and so nonexistent

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such variant, but in the USA in the nineteenth century and later there were swarming immigrants who knew little or no English and. to some of whom an obviously Latin-based polysyllable with a restricted meaning might have been more quickly grasped than a monosyllable easily missed or confused, to say nothing of the possible indecent overtones of lift (see SUCKING PIG) nor of any supposed preference for long words. It seems fair to add that, as a name for a passenger hoist, elevator has made no headway in the UK, and that it seems a bit much to scold Americans for using an Americanism in America.

Emulate

Like any other Latinate pedant, I used to pronounce this word with a long E at the beginning, until corrected the other day by a theatrical person. Anyway, I was not far out in mentally connecting the word with the Latin aemulari, 'to rival', however little that may seem to matter. The prime meaning of emulate is 'try to equal or surpass', so it is not what some people perhaps take it for, a recherche synonym for imitate. Such people show their ignorance by constantly writing things like 'he resolved to try to emulate Swift.' Trying to try to equal is a rarefied concept, more so, I cannot help thinking, than the writer intended. The word is still usable with caution.

England

(For 'En-gland' see SPLITTING WORDS.) While this word and its derivations are still usable, can we not all agree on their pronunciation, such that the first syllable rhymes with 'sting' and does not make the sound eng as spelt, a noise that would be unique in the language? To follow spelling

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in this case has never been frequent, and the usage has been on the verge of dying out for a long time, but it is still occasionally to be heard from broadcasters and others. Surely it deserves to be totally forgotten. The spelling-pronunciation is unhistorical as well as unnecessary and pedantic. In early days, that first vowel was represented by an Old English letter that gave the short A to be found in Modern English words like hat: compare the Anglo in 'Anglo-Saxon'. But from early medieval times onwards that first syllable had a short I in it, as it has today and as is testified by foreign versions of the word English. The Portuguese Ingles, with its 'hushed' final consonant, is almost as close to English as could be hoped for. The language group that most stands out against this practice is the Germanic. In German itself the words for England and English begin with a short E pronounced very like the English equivalent. In fact the German word Englisch is about as close to the unhistorical etc. version of the English word as could be wished. If you want to pro- nounce the name of our nationality and language as a Ger- man would, I cannot stop you. But I will do my level best.

England are

Grammatical parvenus get a lot of fun out of demonstrating they have learnt to count up to two by pouncing on plural subjects with singular verbs and vice versa. One favourite object of their uninstructed scorn is things like the headline ENGLAND FACE DEFEAT (at cricket, say). 'How can a singu- lar noun like England take a plural verb like face?' they ask rhetorically. But ENGLAND FACES DEFEAT (in war?) means something quite different. Anybody with a tittle of wit knows that country-plus-plural refers to a sporting event or something similar. 1"'his is precisely what the verb is

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Enormity, enormous

doing in the plural. It shows that a number of individuals, a team, is referred to, not one thing, a country.

Enormity, enormous

Centuries ago these two words must already have begun to drift apart and now are as separate as their respective mean- ings, viz. great wickedness (noun) and very large (adjective). When Milton wrote of Nature in Paradise pouring forth 'enormous bliss' he was making a learned pun, giving a reminder of the Latin roots (ex- or e- = out of, norma = norm, the ordinary) while testifying to the sheer size or quantity of the bliss. But when Eliot (TS) wrote of 'the enormity of man's ignorance' he was just getting it wrong: by rights he should have written enormousness. A fine example of English style he was, with his 'juvescence of the year' when he should probably have written juvenescence, though that might have been wrong too for his purposes. Such hiccups aside, however, enormity and enormous con- tinue on their way and are quite safe to use while they keep their stations as outlined above.

Ere

I mention this dead and unlamented word only to note that its ghost is sometimes raised by jocular chaps who affect phrases like 'ere long' and 'ere now'. I have two messages for such chaps: one is unprintable, the other goes, If you must write this shred of battered facetiousness, for Christ's sake get it right. The word is ere, not e'er.

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Especial(ly), special(ly)

Especial(ly), special(ly)

These words are obviously related and share their origin in the Latin species. Fowler begins his article on them by saying:

The characteristic sense of the longer adjective and adverb is pre-eminence or the particular as opposed to the ordi- nary, that of the others being limitation or the particular as opposed to the general.

This is well observed and expressed, as one might have known, and would meet wide assent, but it is not calculated to function as a handy guide to anyone who might want to be told which is correct in which circumstances. Let me try. The 'tendency' that Fowler went on to note, for the adjective especial to disappear and its place to be taken by special, has now become an accomplished fact. Nobody now talks or writes about my especial friend or my especial subject, though we should remember that past usages of this kind are not necessarily affected or unnatural. Special will now do all the jobs especial used to do as well as those it used to do itself. The adverb especially remains and will probably continue. It survives in contexts where something like in particular or even more so is meant, as for example:

This was meant for all town-dwellers, especially those in the south of England. I took this as directed against my family in general and especially myself.

Speciality is to be preferred to specialty, which is either a legal term or an Americanism meaning the same as speciality. It may just be worth trying to remember that special was and perhaps still is an adjective connoting counter-

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espionage or other security involvement, as Special Branch, Special Services, Special Wireless.

Exciting

An exciting film used to be so called because of the shoot- ups, car-chases, etc. it contained; now a film is said to be exciting if it contains what are thought to be innovations in technique, setting, etc. In fact, a person from the quite recent past might expect whole populations to be in a state of nervous collapse, so exhausted must they be by ceaseless exciting dishes, exciting drinks, exciting styles of dress or adornment, exciting new offers, exciting suggestions about anything and everything in their lives. A comparable person of our day, however, has learnt that exciting is just another advertiser's word used of a product that with luck will catch people's fancy and, in sober language, turn out to be mildly interesting or pleasurable. Having ridiculed what was then a newish absurdity in a novel of 1968, I had started to hope that exciting in this sense had passed its sell-by date (to use another shopworn novelty). No such luck. This very morning I get a letter from somebody calling herself a Customer Service Manager informing me that 'so far, this has been an exciting year for Cable London customers.' I doubt whether the two excitement-engendering events quoted, the launching of a new Travel Channel in April and of Sky Sports 2 in August, are quite enough to do the whole job between them, though perhaps the advent of Channel One ('the brand new news and entertainment channel for Londoners') which will be 'hitting' my screen in early December, will shed a sort of retrospective fever of excitement over the whole of 1994. This is perhaps as good a place as any to recall one of the sayings of the late Philip Larkin, dating from the 1950s, I think. 'I can't see why there's all this fuss about the human

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race perhaps being wiped out in the near future. It certainly deserves to be.'

Excuse me butting in (A) Excuse me butting in, but there's a wasp on your collar. (B) There are many questions to be asked about America's interest in the Caribbean, but the world awaits a reasoned explanation of the President's ordering an invasion of Santo Diabolo.

The two participle-like words, butting and ordering, are in fact verbal nouns or gerunds, and in strict grammar each should have a noun or pronoun in the possessive case attached to it, saying whose butting and whose ordering is being talked about here. Wasps on collars, however, might be felt not to go with strict grammar, and few actual people are likely to mention or even notice that strictly incorrect me instead of my, indeed to say rflY in (A) would be more likely to raise an eyebrow or two, if only in retrospect. To speak plainly, the gerund is on the way out. Many writers would say that they feel an obligation to introduce a possessive in leisurely, formal sentences like (B), but are prepared to drop it, reluctantly or not, if they sense that what they write as a result is unnatural oc stiff or awk- ward. It does seem as if they usually sense something like that. People knew where they stood in the days when thece \\'as a firm rule about gerunds, familiar as these strange-sounding things then were from the study of Latin. One feels tempted to say that in an ideal world that cule would no doubt be kept, and the objection that we have to live in the real one is not a satisfactory answer. Whatever the merits of any rule, however, it serves no purpose if nobody obeys it. I suggest a practicable compromise as follows:

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I. Do some work on learning to recognise gerunds. Remem- ber they are verbal nouns, end in -ing, look like a parti- ciple but behave like a noun, the name of an action or state of being. 2. In real situations with real wasps, you will of course find you forget about any rule or the duty to keep it. But when writing you may wish not to affront such a rule. If you do, recast the sentence, as always. 3. When writing a (B)-type sentence, give the President his apostrophe-S unless it feels unnatural. If in doubt recast the sentence. 4. But in a (B)-type sentence where a pronoun is involved instead of a President, use the possessive of that pronoun. Sentences on the following model are thus recommended:

Instead of my [your, his, her, its, one's, our, their) open- ing the discussion with a formal statement, perhaps the chairman should ask for contributions from the floor.

Execute

I bring this word up not to protest about its being used with the new meaning 'put to death by law', nor to contend that by rights the sentence, not the criminal, is executed. That cause is well and truly lost, and the new meaning has for years been the main one. I mention execute only because till recently it was thought by the half-educated that it meant not merely to kill judicially but to do so by decapi- tation with axe, sword or guillotine, a historian's word for a historical thing. Now that historians have found something more relevant to teach than the removal of past monarchs and pretenders, this transitory and lesser sense has most likely passed into oblivion.

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Expert

If asked, and quite possibly without being asked, an expert in the year 1800 might have told you the tale that Shotover Hill near Oxford got its name from an exploit of the legend- ary Little John, who is supposed to have once shot an arrow over it, no doubt for a bet. An expert of early Victorian times might well have said that that was 'unscientific' and that Shotover is a corrupt form of Chateau Vert, presumably an erection of Norman times now demolished. By 1900 if not before it was established that neither 'explanation' held water, that Shotover comes from two Old English words and that the name of the topographical feature is Hillhill Hill, or is so paraphrasable. Thanks a lot. In the same sort of way, nobody believes any more that King Canute really expected the tide to retreat at his bid- ding, nor that he staged the show on purpose to demonstrate to his superstitious court that kings were not superhuman. So what was he really up to? The answer is full and clear: nobody knows. Oh, experts are agreed that he was actually called Cnut. Thanks another lot. Twenty years ago or more I wrote a poem putting some of these points, but it was not much good. I threw in near the end the suggestion that experts consciously enjoy exploding attractive myths, which I no longer believe even if I believed it then. cf. OK, OKAY.

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False unions

There is a tendency, not always deplorable in itself, to write or print as one word what used to be two, as in underway, worthwhile, anyrate, daresay, percent, anymore, thankyou, onto and others. Some of the others are deplorable in one place but above reproach elsewhere. So come to lunch sometime is deplorable, not only socially, but a sometime [i.e. former] academic is acceptable; come to lunch just anytime is also doubly deplorable, but in my view anytime scrapes by as a newish adjective in informal contexts, as a popular anytime drink. Sometimes one has to write all ready, any way, every one and in to (he came in to see me), and an eye must be kept out for such cases. But the vilest false union of all is forever, the prettified, sanitised version of a solemn, resounding phrase. Still not permissible with the frivolous meaning 'a lot of the time', as in I'm forever blowing bubbles. To be outlawed altogether. cf. ALL RIGHT

Feminism in language

This is so notorious already, and such a joke, that I will offer only one comment. A sane feminist, and there must surely be such a creature, would presumably look forward to a perhaps far-off day when the feminist revolution is a

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fact like the Russian one, when women are so fully the equals of men that feminist propaganda and other pressures have ceased to be needed. Until that day comes, of course, propaganda etc. will continue as usual, if not more so. I have to confess that I, no doubt among others, have already begun to yield. Unable or unwilling to face the chore of perpetually remembering to write 'he or she' in appropriate contexts, I fall back on plural or passive con- structions. If after a quick search these seem not to be available I recast the sentence. Why? Because I would rather be safe than sorry, and to find myself the occasion of some feminist outburst about unconscious (or conscious) chauvin- ism would make me very sorry indeed. Has that ever hap- pened to me? Not yet, but we know well enough by now that all men are cowards, do we not?

Few

One might have thought that only a foreigner would confuse few with a few, paraphrasable as 'some but not many' and 'not many but some', but if so one would have been mis- taken. A more frequent error involves the comparative fewer. This word can properly be used of countable entities like cabbages and kings. The word for a smaller quantity of something uncountable, like sugar and spice, is less. The error I refer to is the use of less when fewer is meant; correctly, we speak or write of less sugar but fewer cabbages. In ordinary conversation, some people perhaps feel that less is a more informal word than fewer and talk about less cabbages. This is forgivable if you like the people.

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Figurative

This word used to mean 'metaphorical, not literal', and no doubt still does in some contexts, for example those involv- ing language, but in others, for example those involving pictorial art, it has come to mean something not far off the opposite of that. Afigurative painting is in a style that shows human and other figures in a recognisable form, and so is nearer 'literal' than 'metaphorical' . Well, something associ- ated with sanity is welcome back under almost any name.

Fine toothcomb

The kind of would-be grammarian who disdains locutions like England face defeat is also apt to cackle gleefully at fine toothcomb/tooth-comb, alleging that a fine-tooth comb is meant. Whatever a crime reporter may write imaginatively about a murder investigation, detailed inquiries, etc., perhaps there never was such a thing as a tooth-comb, fine or not. But there was, and still is according to the 1988 COD, which precedes its own tooth-comb entry with the sign indi- cating a British usage and continues:

(with fine close-set teeth; properly FINE 2 toothcomb, taken as fine tooth-comb)

Not so taken by me, and as regards properly the case is not proven. As long ago as before the last war you could ask for and buy over a shop counter something called a tooth- comb, the sort that as well as fine teeth had an inches-long spike at one end. No doubt you could have productively asked for a fine or finer or less fine tooth-comb. Did the COD editors know that? Or did they just fall in behind the would-be grammarian's explanation? Not the second, quite likely, but at least just as quite likely not the first

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Fivepence

either. And when you edit a dictionary you have to be as certain as you can get.

Fivepence

This is virtually a non-existent word for a perhaps suf- ficiently existent thing, the sum of five pence in our new (adopted 1971) currency. The fact that decimal coinage has never caught on or been accepted here is quite sufficiently demonstrated by the equally hard fact that the sum men- tioned has never been called fivepence but always 'five pee'; if the coin is meant it is called a 'five-pee piece', never a 'shilling', which is now a dead word in the UK. Similarly with lOp and the others. The others? The smaller denomi- nations are seen less and less as inflation renders them ob- solete. Fowler got it wrong for once.

Forensic

Until almost the other day it might have been worth aver- ring that originally this word meant nothing more than 'of courts of law' and so, for instance, 'forensic evidence' meant nothing more than 'evidence offered in a court of law', like much evidence worthy of the name. But now forensic means erudite, sophisticated, concerned with things like finger- prints, bloodstains and other stuff criminological science may be able to draw evidence from, and a forensic squad no longer brings thoughts of a gang of policemen routinely engaged in the detection of crime but of a highly trained team of experts equipped with the latest in deductive appar- atus and skills, of technicians. The origin of the word has been effectively forgotten so thoroughly that dreams of restoring the old meaning are vain even if the goal were desirable. Should then the righteous among us use forensic

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Fortuitous

in its new meaning, as a distinct synonym of technical? No, is my vote. Say technical and forget that tekhne itself once meant art.

Fortnight

An obsolete term with its roots in Old English meaning a period of two weeks and used in phrases like a fortnight today to mean two weeks after today. The word has been replaced by the more regular two weeks, which is less idio- matic and duller but as always gives everybody one less word to remember and is at any rate American.

Fortuitous

Although Fowler was denouncing it back in 1926, the misuse of fortuitous has only become noticeable in the last decade or so. The word originally meant nothing more than 'owing to [pure} chance', as in, say, 'their meeting in the fish-shop was altogether fortuitous.' Recently, the word has come to mean something more like 'fortunate, by a lucky chance', as it might be in 'their meeting was most fortu- itous, in that it led directly to their long and happy associ- ation.' In fact fortuitous now supplies the evident need for a single word with that meaning. Such a need may not be very compelling, but the more recent usage is serviceable and needful enough to suggest that such newcomers should not be shot out of hand. For after all, there are plenty of near-enough synonyms for fortuitous in the old sense, for instance 'chance' (adjective) as in 'chance meeting'.

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Four-letter words

Four-letter words

I am concerned here with words rather than ideas, although I know well enough that there is a connection between the two. So if I think present-day writers make more fuss about physical sex than I care to do, or describe it in more detail than I find comfortable, that difference must await full treatment elsewhere. Suffice it for the moment to notice that the change in what may be said has gone closely with how it may be said. Both these things, all these things, have changed a certain amount since I wrote my first novel, Lucky Jim, more than forty years ago. No doubt with no more intention than to be friendly, to make intelligible the character of the hero, Jim Dixon, more recent critics have described him as a 'womanising' young man. Dixon could have wished no more flattering label for himself, but in fact his womanising, what there is of it, is virtually limited to his imagination. All he actually does, briefly set out, is throw some sort of physical pass at one girl and lay his hands on the clothed breast of another - the sort of 'womanising' that a modern hero would outdo in an opening paragraph. Incidentally I was conscious of no unnatural restriction on me at the time or later. By 1955 the world had moved on. In my second novel the hero is stated, not shown, to go to bed with a female not his wife, and at another point a minor character is made to say of another, 'I feel sorry for that poor bugger.' My publisher, Victor Gollancz, telephoned to warn me that if I insisted on that six-letter word I might lose the 2000 (I think) copies I would otherwise dispose of to (I think) Boots' Booklovers' Library. I considered briefly. 'What about "bloody fool"?' I asked. 'Perfectly acceptable,' said Victor. So it proved. I have never felt entirely easy about the change, because 'bugger' in such a context does not count

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as swearing. It is, or was, a friendly synonym for 'chap' or 'customer' in South Wales, the setting of the story, whereas 'bloody fool' does or did count there as swearing as well as being inappropriate to speaker and situation. What a long time ago it all seems. As the reader will know, the 1960s and their aftermath brought matters up to date. I have forgotten when I first said or made a character say luck in print, but no one seemed to notice or care, any more than they did when my son Martin used the word several dozen times in one page in a novel published in 1978. Nor does it probably signify. All the same, I appear to have given myself a good chance to state and stress how much in the realm of bad language has changed over those years, not all of it for the better. Before, to utter or to write a swear-word, as they were called, counted as a small act of revolt, the breaking-out of a miniature Jolly Roger. Parents, grandparents, teachers, men in dog-collars, married men and subscribers to Boots' Booklovers' Library were dead against anything of the sort. So, for instance, when you let fall a swear-word in front of a contemporary you were among other things revealing yourself as a diminutive dissident and inviting your hearer to make a recognition signal. And when Philip Larkin used such words in letters to contemporaries he was not being 'misanthropic' or 'foul-mouthed' but being very mildly sub- versive and, like a good letter-writer, encouraging the recipient to feel he was a member of the same secret army as the sender. And what I was principally doing, by includ- ing in a letter to him a whole page of scurrility directed at our common publisher, was trying to entertain a friend. One would not even attempt such a thing these days, not by such means. These days (to resume whence I have digressed) that particular conflict is over. Four-letter words are probably less in use conversationally than they were and, with the exception of one denoting the female parts, of less impact.

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Their appearance on TV also seems reduced, now that people no longer utter them out of a boyish desire to show off. One taboo perhaps remains: as far as I know, nobody has yet said luck to a senior member of the royal family. On the whole, the thinning-out of spoken ribaldry is a loss. An entire way of being funny, an entire range of humorous effects, has been impoverished, except probably on the lower deck of our society. At first sight, the case with the printed four-letter word is different, though here I detect a similarly unwelcome drift towards serious aesthetic purpose. A bit of that can be seen in one of the last and least of the big luck-novels, the winner of the 1994 Booker Prize. The doggedness with which its author keeps on trotting out the great word and its various derivatives already has something old-fashioned about it. Time for a change. Naturally someone in my position has had to devise some rough rules governing the use of such words. My own set of rules I now put in writing for the first time. In what follows, they and them stand for what were once obscenities.

I. Use them sparingly and, as classicists used to say, for special effect only. 2. Even in low farce, never use any of them in its original or basic meaning unless perhaps to indicate that a charac- ter is some kind of pompous buffoon or other undesir- able. Even straightforward excretory ones are tricky. 3. They may be used in dialogue, though remember rule I. An attempt at humour will often justify their appear- ance. The power of making one male character say to another, 'She's a fucky nuck case' is not one to be lightly surrendered. 4. If in doubt, strike it out, taking 'it' here as one of them. (If one of them is not involved, my rule for myself is leave it in, especially first time round. I doubt if many writers get more ideas than they know what to do with.)

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Fowler

Henry Watson Fowler (1858-1933), grammarian and lexicographer, is not quite the only writer on the English language mentioned by name in this book. Another is Frank George Fowler (187 I - 1918), his brother. The two collaborated on The King's English (1906) and The Concise Oxford Dictionary (first edn. 191 I). Their literary partnership lasted from 1903 to 1918, latterly much interrupted by war service, which both brothers
undertook though over military age, by illness and by the war itself. The elder was to write of the younger, 'In 1918 he died, aged forty-seven, of tuberculosis contracted during service with the B. E . F . in 1915-16.' H.W. greatly missed him, not least as a professional colleague and a collaborator, but for all that wrote and published his famous Dictionary of Modern English Usage in 1926. This work, known for many years simply as Modern Eng- lish Usage, is also known even more simply as Fowler in expressions like 'Fowler's view' and 'Fowler is unambiguous on the point.' However much H.W. Fowler might have resented this virtual exclusion of F.G. - and we are assured in its epistle dedicatory that F.G. shared in the planning stage of ME U - the outcome was inevitable in the circum- stances. Despite its age, the book remains uniquely indispensable to any serious survey of how we speak and write. Although it calls or called itself a dictionary, and contains many brie

entries hardly going beyond the pronunciation or spelling of a word, 'much of it consists of short essays on various [pertinent topics], some with fancy titles that give no clue at all to their subject', as a reviser observed in 1965, and it is true that some of the writing needs the sort of close attention that its author deprecated as a requirement for ordinary reading. Nevertheless as a whole it has aged remarkably little over the years. Again and again the

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present-day reader will be willing to swear that such-and- such a usage has only the other day made its appearance, only to find that Fowler had already noticed it. This, together with the persistence of the C supersti tion' against split infinitives, for instance, encourages the view that changes in the way we use language take a long time to happen. More briefly, it is never safe to assume that Fowler will have nothing to say on any given point. The picture of him that emerges from his works is more informative than might be expected. Far from being any sort of conventional pedant he seems tolerant and humorous, clearly enjoying the duty of rebuking error which his task laid upon him, yet never merely destructive. He steers a rigorously unfanatical course between knowledge and common sense, and was saying something beyond both linguistics and politics when he writes in his ME U article on spelling (surely a subject that constitutes a potential trap for the pedagogic):

. . . English had better be treated in the English way, and its spelling not be revolutionised but amended in detail . .. The well-known type theoretical-radical practical- conservative covers perhaps a majority of our nation, and its influence is as sound and sane in the sphere of spelling as elsewhere.

Nothing about H.W. Fowler is changed, though something is added, when account is taken of details of his life other than his volunteering to fight for his country at the age of fifty-six. He had started his professional career as a master at Sedbergh in Yorkshire, but resigned after seventeen years over a difference of opinion with his headmaster, Fowler taking what might be called a freethinking line. In 1908 he married 'a lady four years younger than himself' and enjoyed a happy life with her for over twenty years. He kept himself fit by refusing to employ servants and by going

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Frankenstein

on runs and swims well into the winter. He was described by a former pupil of his at Sedburgh as 'a man of great fastidiousness, moral and intellectual'. In some respects he was an excellent example of a not uncommon type in nine- teenth-century England, a muscular non-Christian who nevertheless learnt his values from the doctrine of that Church. Modern English Usage is better than a worthy memorial to its author. It not only stands as the crown of his achieve- ment but also it has gone on being continuously interesting, helpful and to the point in a way that no comparable pro- duction, if there is such a thing, has ever managed to do. Anything that might be got out of this book of mine will only come from my having had Fowler open beside it. It was once said that, despite any later developments, a canny Shakespearean scholar would know it was sound policy (as well as entertaining) to see first what Samuel Johnson had had to say on a given passage before turning to more recent commentators. The same and more besides should apply to Fowler in his own sphere. He and his work have never received the honour they deserve.

Frankenstein

I. Frankenstein (brilliantly named) is the eponymous character in a Gothic romance written by Mary Shelley in the early nineteenth century. He makes something like a human being from bits of dead bodies and gives the result life. The creature is fundamentally good, but after much ill treatment from humankind becomes the instrument of Frankenstein's destruction. 2. In the early twentieth century, when science and technol- ogy seemed to be expanding at a great rate, it was natural for writers to look for images of human invention over-

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reaching itself. The Frankenstein myth was pressed into service, but in a simplified or garbled form whereby the name of Frankenstein became attached to the mon- ster. Those who talked about the danger that humans would create a deadly Frankenstein were sternly and regularly rebuked for linguistic impropriety by such as Fowler. 3. After a time, whether as creator or monster, Frankenstein was no longer to be found in newspaper columns. Perhaps he had simply gone out of fashion. Or perhaps the whole question of how to refer to him had been made too difficult or cumbersome to handle. If the latter, it was something of a triumph for the sticklers.

French expressions

The rule I follow in talk is to use only such French expressions as have no reasonably exact and often-used equivalent in English. It is pointless and may be discour- teous for one English-speaker to talk in French to another English-speaker outside the classroom, and something simi- lar applies to whatever may be written and printed. So when I hold forth a female singer gets called that and not a cantatrice, and so on. The pronunciation of a French word or words should, when the language of conversation is English, avoid any attempt at exact French pronunciation, which can hinder the flow of talk. At the same time, a speaker will not pronounce every French expression as if it were English. To do so is all right for some French words, like those in tour de force, which a sensible English-speaker will pronounce without any French sounds whatever. But many others would sound so non-English that some compromise seems called for, like tant pis or aide-de-camp, which are unintelli-

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French expressions

gible as English noises. In the list that follows, which is shorter than Fowler's of eight or nine hundred, I have tried to keep everything to a minimum, very much including my signs for awkward sounds. Only expressions perhaps inaccessible to common sense are included. Menu French is omitted: consult the waiter. ** indicates an expression to be pronounced in as English a fashion as is reasonably poss- ible; any attempt at a Frenchified pronunciation, except among the young and uninstmcted, is to be regarded with grave suspicion. Throughout, be ready to make allowance for my accent, which in non-linguistic terms comes from south-eastern England, so for instance I don't pronounce the R at the end of water and in the middle of Saturday, and this is reflected here in my re-spellings of French words. The sound every English-speaker makes at the end of words like china, represented in phonetic alphabets by a lower-case E turned upside down, is here denoted by uh. French words are signified by italics: aide-de-camp, amateur. English words, or attempts to tell an English reader how I think he/she should pronounce a French word, are conveyed in roman: thus aid-duh-CON(G) and AM-a-tuh. Some clumsiness and ugliness result, but better so than obscurity.

aide-de-camp. Pronounce aid-duh-CON(G). Or just say and write A.D.C. amateur. AM-a-tuh if non-professional is meant. If (archaic use) enthusiast or devotee is meant, a-ma- TUR. aperitif. Ignore the accent and pronounce as English, stress on second syllable. attache. Suitcase is a-TATCH-y, diplomat is a-TASH-ay. banquette. Bon-KETT. belles-lettres. Bel-LETT -ruh. blancmange. Bluh-MONJ. blase. BLAH-zay. cafe. CAFE-ay. Caff-AY is for Americans. Also, humorously, for lowbrow eatery, caif, as in Finkel's caif.

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canape. CANnapay. celeste. SilIEST. charlatan. SHARlatuhn. chauffeur. SHOfuh. ShoFUR is for Americans and their imi- tators. Old posh chaps once said SHUVvuh to rhyme with , , cover; not any more. connoisseur. ConnuhSUR. coup d'etat. Coo dayTAH. coupon. * * debacle. DA Ybarkle. If you must. denouement. DayNOOmon(g). detour. DAYtour. distrait, distraite. DisTRAY, disTRAYT. dossier. DOSSy-eh, three syllables. elite. EIIEA T. en masse. On mass as in English. esprit de corps. EssPREE duh COR. faux pas. Foh P A. fiance, fiancee (if still in use). English pronunciation will no longer do. So feeON(G)say for both. garage. GARahzh. I know the word has been in English use quite long enough for it to be pronounced in the English way, to rhyme with marriage, but it seems I can't bring myself to the point. hors d'oeuvres. Aw DERV and no messing. Not an infallible wanker-detector, but it can safely be said that few non- wankers over the age of, say, twenty-one try to say the words in any Frenchified way. If Fowler had been writing now I very much doubt whether he would advise the pronunciation orRdEU'vr(e) as he does in ME U. idee fixe. EEday FEEKS. je ne sa is quoi. Zher ner say KW AH. Important to pronounce in as English a way as possible. liaison. * * liqueur. Lih-CURE. Any attempt to say lee-cur In a Frenchified way is a useful wanker-detector.

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macabre. MuhKAHbruh. Imagine yourself addressing a Scot called Macarbrough. menu. * * I suppose there are people who try to pronounce this like a French word. Fowler seems to want us to say MENoo. milord. MEElor. A Frenchification, hallowed by custom, of English 'my lord'. Avoid. morale. MuhRAHL. Spelt with final E when meaning some- thing like confidence. naif, naive. Nah-EEV regardless of gender. naivete. Unnecessary in English. nonchalant. * * penchant. PON(G)shon(g). Worth mentioning even if only because some Americans have been heard to say penshant, as if they thought it was an English word. pension, meaning a boarding-house etc. PON(G)sion(g). Also not an English word despite some Americans. pince-nez. P AN(G)snay. The only word for the thing, alas. plaque. Say plahk rather than plack, which is hardly a word at all. precis. PRAY see. recherche. RuhSHAIRshay. A good word for the quality. reconnaissance. ** Note also reconnoitre, -oiter, ** restaurant. RESTront. For years I tried to anglicise this word as REST rant, with -ant as 'pennant' etc., but eventually noticed that the familiar half-Frenchified form was more easily understood. restaurateur. RestraTER. This man is a restorator, one who restores you and your energies, so, despite Roget, not spelt restauranteur. revIle. * * sabotage. SABBuhtahzh. One of those words like garage that resist attempts at full anglicisation. sachet. SASHay. There is no reason not to say SASHit except that no one will understand you. savoir faire. SA Vwah fair. No English equivalent. 'Knack'

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From year to year

is not highbrow enough, and cflair' is French likewise. silhouette. ** Drop the H. surveillance. **, terrain. * * timbre. T AMbruh, like an English word that ends In -borough. trait. T rate. turquoise. TURKwoize. valet. V ALLit. wagon-lit. V AGGon(g)-lee.

From year to year

'He served in the Royal Pikestaffs from 1965 to 1980' or 'between 1965 and 1980' or '1965-1980', not a hybrid like 'from 1965 - 1980'.

Fulsome

This once useful word meant 'disgustingly excessive, cloy- ing' as applied to compliments, apologies, etc.; Roget lists it between gushing and stagy. Undereducated persons, perhaps foggily supposing fulsome to be a posh form of full (from which it does partly descend), have in recent years taken to using it to mean 'ample' or possibly 'cordial'. Not to be used henceforth by careful writers.

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Gay

The use of this word as an adjective or noun applied to a homosexual has attracted unusually prolonged execration. The 'new' meaning has been generally current for years. Gay lib had made the revised Roget by 1987 and the word itself was listed in the 1988 COD under sense 5 as a homo- sexual. There, however, the noun was entered in the 'slang' category, i.e. current among a restricted group. Surely, even in England today, the literate are not a restricted group, and anybody who can read must have long known what gay means. And yet in this very spring of 1995 some old curmudgeon is still frothing on about it in the public print and demanding the word 'back' for proper heterosexual use. This is impossible. I admit I get as annoyed as anyone by being effectively debarred from quoting in public what Chesterton wrote at the beginning of his marvellous dedi- catory poem to The Man Who Was Thursday (1908). Perhaps I can safely quote it now. The era referred to is the I 890s.

A cloud was on the mind of men And wailing went the weather, Yea, a sick cloud upon the soul When we were boys together. Science announced nonentity And art admired decay; The world was old and ended: But you and I were gay.

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The fact that such a stroke is impossible now should not blind us to the larger fact that, once a word is not only current but accepted willy-nilly in a meaning, no power on earth can throw it out. The slightest acquaintance with changes in a language, or a minimum of thought, will show this troth. This time it is not wholly an unwelcome truth. The word gay is cheerful and hopeful, half a world away from the dismal clinical and punitive associations of homosexual. We lucky ones can afford to be generous with our much larger and richer vocabulary.

Gender

Many people would agree that this term would be best kept as what until the other day it exclusively was, a grammatical distinction between classes of noun and pronoun, together with the articles and adjectives appropriate to them. But then sex came into it as into much else in what we say and write, and the expression a difference of sex, for instance, was seen or thought to be chiefly concerned with sexual organs and their activities, chiefly enough to have to be specifically ruled out when these were not meant, and gender was an obvious way of signalling the fact. The discomfort that many people (the same sort of many people?) will have felt at this shift is not necessarily to be identified with that felt at most sorts of sexual intrusion. Part of it perhaps is a vague sense that something is being attacked or conceded, something to do with the recognitIon that the larger part of sexual behaviour is not physical but no less sexual for not being so, and the acceptance of gender as a non- grammatical term is to some degree a lowering of that flag.

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Genteelism

This is Fowler's word for a very real and surviving thing, the synonym for a common or garden word that seems to some persons more elevated than that word, one 'that is thought to be less soiled by the lips of the common herd, less familiar, less plebeian . . .' like ale for beer (he rather ignorantly says; see ALE), assist for help, endeavour for try, etc. One sees what Fowler means all right, but some of his distinctions have become blurred by time, while others were perhaps shaky from the start. Thus a carafe (genteelism) was surely never indistinguishable from a water-bottle (described as the normal word for the thing); a chiropodist may in truth be no better than a corn-cutter, but he can hardly be expected to call himself that; the military is not at all the same as soldiers, as many civilians could testify; mirror is not, poss- ibly never was, a genteelism for (normal word?) looking- glass. Contrariwise, one might, probably would, agree heartily that the normal verb put is far too often horribly sup- planted by place, especially in the writings of journalists who think they are being suitably serious. And yet, again, one would surely prefer to say that the Queen Mother was placed behind the Queen in the Abbey than put behind her. Not such an inflexibly organised character as he some- times appears, Fowler has at least two more bites at this particular cherry, one under the heading of Formal Words, the other under Working and Stylish Words. In both cases he has good examples to quote - donation as a posh synonym for gift, conceal for hide, obtain for get, seek for try or look for, feasible for possible, sufficient for enough, etc. - and brisk general remarks to offer, such as:

What is to be deprecated is the notion that one can improve one's style by using stylish words. . . the writer who prefers. . . the stylish word for no better reason than

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that he thinks it stylish, instead of improving his style, makes it stuffy, or pretentious, or incongruous,

and more weightily and positively,

Few things contribute more to vigour of style than a practical realisation that the kuria onomata, the sovereign or dominant or proper or vernacular or current names, are better than the formal words.

And yet, for the second or third time, the reader may object that to peruse is not just to read but to read carefully, that catarrh and cold are far from synonymous, that violin is not a 'stylish' word for the 'working' fiddle, but the standard word, the kurion onoma, for the instrument familiarly called afiddle among musicians. The last objection may be a result of the passage of time; most others are not. Calls for simplicity and unpretentiousness of style are perpetually welcome, but pressure for such virtues should not be elevated into any kind of rule. Mealor lunch or snack are undoubtedly better words in most circumstances than collation or luncheon. Nevertheless you can grab a meal or a quick snack in the kitchen, standing up if need be, of a couple of sandwiches, a spring onion and a can of beer (or ale); a collation involves sitting down to a number of courses and a luncheon a degree of formality, place cards, all that. The annoying truth is that almost every written word con- fronts the writer with a choice for which no rule will ever quite serve, and the price of a good style, like that of other desirable things, is eternal vigilance.

Germanisms

A mid-century American writer on the English language draws attention to the emergence of what he calls 'a con- struction deeply at variance with the genius' of that

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Get, got

language, and quotes so-called 'easy-to-read books for the children and ready-to-bake food for their mothers'. The same wrIter goes on to say:

If we wish to protect ourselves from this new assault on our wits, we must begin by avoiding every form of easy compounding - e.g. air-conscious ... career- or action- oriented, accident-prone, teenage-proof, budget-wise . . . It is a mistake to think that because everything is classifiable everything must be classified. And Germanisms in Eng- lish are but clumsy attempts to stick labels on arbitrary groupings: never-before-told incidents/ a more-honored-in-the- breach, situation/a let-the-devil-take-the-hindmost attitude, to which we may add the multitude of definitions by non- {nonfiction, nonviolent, nonreligious, noninsured}. Some of these last may be necessary but most of them only pretend to define.

Hereabouts the English reader may get the sense of having strayed into a domestic conflict, but there can be no doubt where the battle-lines are or which is the right side of them. Or that the enemy has powerful allies on this side of the pond.

Get, got

In my schooldays these were suspect words, not exactly erroneous in themselves but vulgar. ['II get it or he's got it were said to be expressions lazy/stupid people fell back on because they were too stupid/lazy to think of or to know genteel words like obtain or possess. Even today both get and got retain a whiff of informality, so they should be avoided in solemn contexts or when trying to impress an octogenarian. Ancient anti-got feeling may have played a pact in developing the American preference for do-you-have con-

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Golf

structions over have-you-got ones. Do-you-have is spreading in this country perhaps in simple imitation, but perhaps also, unconsciously, to placate those choosy octogenarians. If it takes over altogether from have-you-got a shade of mean- ing will have been lost: do you have such-and-such means or meant 'do you normally have it?', whether it was indiges- tion or tinned cat-food, whereas have you got something implies 'at this moment'. But then no speaker was ever inhibited by thoughts of shades of meaning.

Golf

I bring up this word because some people still pronounce it golf, though most of them must be getting a bit long in the tooth by now. Any who do should switch to.saying golf right away. To say golf nowadays is a form of didacticism, informing anybody who may be listening that this is how top people pronounce the word and also what the Scots, who invented the game, perhaps call it. Perhaps not; opinion is divided; whatever they may once have called it I doubt if many of them say the word differently from the rest of the G B population. I ask only that the 0 of golf should be of the short variety, as in gob, not the long, as in go.

Good-bye

Not only is the good in good-bye not the familiar English word good, but the bye is not what it may seem either. Every schoolboy used to know that good-bye was a contraction of God be with you, with good substituted for God probably on the analogy of leave-taking phrases like goodnight. Inter- mediate forms like Hamlet's God be wi' ye are recorded from the sixteenth to the eighteenth century, with the present form of the expression established some time in the latter.

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Gorged-snake construction

The custom is to hyphenate good-bye and leave the others, good night, etc., unhyphenated. Incidentally good evening is a valediction only on television, and I have come across good night as a greeting only in the works of James Joyce.

Gorged-snake construction

This is an engaging but perhaps not strikingly apt American name for a journalistic trick that, like so many such, is not very objectionable in its place - in a newspaper report - but out of the question elsewhere. Any example is bound to be on the lengthy side, though I have made mine as short as I reasonably can.

Briton Chris Mankiewitz, twenty-six, has been named to lead England's soccer squad against Ruritania next month. The Warsaw-born father-of-two said at his recently- rebuilt £150,000 Deptford home, 'My attractive blonde wife Samantha, twenty-four, and I are just over the moon with the news.' Success has come just in time for the whiskered former schoolboy hurdler champion star of Clapton Occident's injury-stricken midfielders. The much-photographed hat-trick specialist and avid sports-car driver, a familiar local figure in his blood-red Halberstadt D- VII . . . 'Looks like we're out of the woods for a bit,' laughed the tall dark sun-worshipper as he dubbined with his own hands the boots that . . .

Now I quite see that putting into some sort of logical order a couple of dozen facts about Briton Chris Mankiewitz would take longer than the supposed writer of the above could have afforded. Some such attempt, however, might

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Greek remnants

have made it possible for the reader to remember a few of them on finishing the story. But then no newspaper story is meant to hold athe attention longer than it takes to get from coming round after a snooze to the beginning of the first TV quiz show.

Greek remnants

Few people have ever learnt Greek or remember any. One phrase perhaps survives in ordinary talk: the hoi polloi = the (vulgar) majority. Hoi is itself a form of the word for 'the' but the accepted phrase, even among those who know this, is again 'the hoi polloi', pronounced hoy p'LOY. There are plenty of adequate synonyms in English. Look up ahead of time any Greek (or Latin) name you may wish to use in talk, which will help you not to sound like an illiterate. As with ordinary words, actual Greek (or Latin) practice is no guide. The legendary founders of Rome, for instance, Romulus and Remus, are called Rommulus and Reemus in English, and it helps nobody to know or be told that in their day and in their language they were Rohmulus and Remmus. Nor would any normal person think of pronouncing the first syllable of Socrates to rhyme with poh or poke, only with pock. But the name Pericles does not rhyme with clericals, as somebody made it do on the radio the other day, and names in -eus end with the sound of the noun 'use', so we say Perce-use, not Percy-us. And a version of original accentuation is preserved, so the tendon that connects your heel and calf is still your Achilles tendon stressed on the second syllable no matter whether you know or care who Achilles was or why this particular tendon gets its name from him. Remember to keep the ch hard in Greek-derived words like triPtych, which is pronounced triPtick, not triPtitch. And Graecist or Grecist is pronounced like grease-ist, but quite

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Gulf, the

soon the whole thing - Greek, Latin, Hebrew, Old English - will have blown over.

Gulf, the

This is how broadcasters and recent maps designate the place we all grew up calling the Persian Gulf, now robbed of its distinguishing adjective seemingly in order to placate, or not to offend, Iraq and perhaps other Gulf States. It strikes me as high time the Persian Gulf was given its historic name back. After all, the Gulf of Mexico is still so called whatever the USA and possibly other nationalities may think about it.

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Letter H

I. After many years, people still need to be told to talk about a historical novel, not an historical novel, and a hotel, not an hotel, whereas mention of either a or an hotelier should be suppressed with bloodshed. The rule is that words beginning with an H only take an when they begin with a genuinely silent H, like heir, honour, hour and their derivatives. Words that merely look on paper as if they begin with a vowel sound, like one, use and euphoria, are preceded by a, not an, as you must know. 2. An uncombined H in the middle of a word, as in philhar- monic, should not be sounded. (Unless it happens to begin a syllable, so you should pronounce the H inphilhellenism should you ever find yourself using the word.) Words of foreign origin, however, like bilharzia, may require a sounded H, and thereafter let likelihood and cpmmon sense direct you. Woe betide anybody I catch pronounc- ing the name Beethoven with a separable H.

Hamstringed

The hamstring in human beings is one of five tendons at the back of the knee, and to hamstring a man is to cripple him by cutting this tendon. Metaphorically, one's enterprise

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Happening

or efforts can be hamstrung. Or is it, should it be, hamstringed? Yes, says Fowler. Take your choice, says the COD. No, say I: to use hamstringed in ordinary conversation is to run the risk of pedantry or, worse, of not being understood. No doubt stringed instruments are so called by musicians, but even in dictionaries it is a string bass and anxious people are all strung up, not that it matters much.

Happening

It may be of some small interest to elderly readers to be told of one of the accidental fruits of my researches. I find that a happening, which in the 1950S referred to some event like the planned break-up of some impossibly vulgar art exhibition or somebody undressing at somebody's else's bor- ing party, had already been a phenomenon and a descriptive term of the Edwardian era.

Haver

Once a respectable Scottish verb meaning 'to talk nonsense', and there can never be too many words for that. Its closeness to 'hover' once gave it a useful hint of indecision, but recently, here and there, the hint has swallowed the original sense, and haver can now mean 'be uncertain'. Roget, how- ever, a fair guide to usage, lists haver in something like its original meaning, between waffk and blether, so perhaps I need not have substituted drivelling for havering when revis- ing a poem in 1979, and should have kept the older and better reading. Haver and its derivatives are best avoided by careful writers.

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Having said that

This little phrase would perhaps cause less offence if less often improperly used, as in, for instance, 'Having said that) I turn now jto less attractive features of his character.' The trouble comes when the words are left dangling, as in, for instance, 'Having said that, what action should be taken against him?' Having said that has become not much more than a classy substitute for even so or nevertheless or just anyway, but one with the added advantage, as some will see it, of being a fashionable phrase that manages to award the speaker marks for fairness of mind, unearned marks in most cases. Be on the safe as well as the virtuous side and never say having said that.

Headline English

It is no secret that newspaper headlines no longer content themselves with announcing pieces of news in abbreviated but relatively unphilistine language. Nowadays headlines come in several styles. One is the over-informative, such that not only the piece of news is given but also what followed from it, so that we learn before we start to read the story that not only has the Chancellor raised interest rates, say, but also that his doing so has 'fuelled' a Tory 'panic' about this or that. I like a headline to state straight- forward non-clever things like PRIME MINISTER ASSASSIN- ATED. To add details or consequences ahead of time is to weaken both the story and one's desire to read it, as if anyone cared. But such matters are not my present concern; other styles of headline are. A particularly barbarous one is to take advantage of the hospitality of the language to the use of nouns as adjectives; thus an escaping couple cease to be an

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ESCAPING COUPLE and become an ESCAPE COUPLE. A string of unleavened nouns will form a whole headline. Three nouns stuck cheek by jowl was once the limit, but now four is standard. Some months ago two tabloids gave their front pages to SCHOOL COACH CRASH DRAMA and SCHOOL OUTING COACH HORROR and a week or two later one of them achieved five with SCHOOL BUS BELTS SAFETY VIC- TORY. There is some loss of decent seriousness here, as if anyone cared. This loss is clearer with the style of headline that uses puns or otherwise plays with words. Last month an out- standingly giggly tabloid carried the following in a single Issue:

Page I. Picture of a pretty girl who had just had a success. Caption: 'A star is born: British actress Julia Ormond gets a big part.' Headline reads, 'Movie queen is crowned', i.e. is to play Queen Guinevere in £4om King Arthur film. 2. Headline reads, 'Still on track for more rail misery'. 3. Headline reads, 'Arnie [i.e. Arnold Schwarzenegger} his true self after pregnant pause'. [His part in a recently made film had required him to simulate pregnancy.} Also headline reading, 'Career of Julia the obscure is into top Gere', i.e. the actor Richard Gere is to star as Sir Lancelot in the film. An accompanying photograph is captioned, 'Knight moves: Richard Gere makes his point [flourishes sword} while rehearsing his Lancelot swordplay.' Copy contains the sentence, 'In showbusiness terms, unknown actress Julia Ormond has found the Holy Grail.' On the same page, a large photograph of another actress is captioned, 'Dressed to thrill: ... at premiere of new Arnie film.' 5. Headline reads, 'We're on the road to photo licences' [i.e. to the introduction of driving licences that carry a photograph of the licensee].

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6-7. Headline reads) 'Crying all the way to the bank' [Bar- clays' profits, customers' grievances}. 7. Headline reads, 'Food firms find health guide hard to stomach'. 10- I I. Headline reads, 'Food firms boil over with anger as Brussels goes sour on soya milk'. 12. Headline reads, 'Banned be thy name' (a church auth- ority has banned the use of pet-names etc. in gravestone inscriptions) . 17. Headline reads, 'How our garden paradise was lost' (through nasty neighbours). 18. Headline reads, 'Border skirmish over a hedge'. 2 I. Heading: 'Crusoe, your island awaits'. Headline reads, 'Talking heads' [on solicitors' wigs]. 23. Headline reads. 'A hot issue' (on crematoria). Headline reads, 'Cine season'. 24. Headline reads, 'Extra time to save Graces' (statuary].

There follows a financial feature with eighteen headlines and no wordplay in ten pages. The effect of all this in one issue is to make human concerns seem trivial to the reader. But what sort of reader is being looked for? If any, an unusual sort, one well acquainted with the Athurian legends who knows about ] ude the Obscure and much else in literature and yet is at home with 'Arnie' and talking heads. And when we read of somebody headlined in this tabloid and another as 'death husband' and 'kidnap horror man', and puzzle out that the same person is meant, we may start to suspect that, as in the case of much modern poetry, the journalists concerned are not really interested in an identifiable reader. They are just playing a silly game among themselves. After all, they have to fill the paper somehow whether they have anything to say or not. Stop Press (to use an outdated expression): The other day I read in the columns of a 'quality' newspaper - in the body

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Homogeneous

of a story, not in a headline - that bird-protection societies had been set all of a twitter by something or other. Oh God, where will- it end?

Homogeneous

An ordinary, regularly formed adjective of classical parent- age, meaning 'of the same kind' or 'uniform'. Begetter of the doubtful verb homogenise, as of milk whose cream content has been irreversibly incorporated in it, a word which would not deserve a mention but for its having produced a thriving back-formation, homogenous (so speIt). This, very likely pronounced with stress on the second syllable of four, is incorrect.

However

Custom has decreed that however should not come first in a sentence. When it does come it tends to throw an emphasis on the immediately preceding word or phrase which is very likely not wanted and may be a nuisance. If it is put first nothing much seems to go wrong, and surely one would rather write or read:

Tomorrow I go on holiday for a couple of weeks. However, I will telephone you as soon as I can after I get back,

than either:

Tomorrow. . . weeks. I will, however, telephone you. . .

or:

Tomorrow. . . weeks. I will telephone you as soon as I can after I get back, however.

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To some tastes, however, advantageously placed (as here) or not, however will inevitably seem a little pompous. Why not go all the way in that direction and begin with a plonking nevertheless, or some way in the other and write anyway or still?

Howlers

The description covers a good deal, but I have in mind the apparently contented acceptance of an old textual blunder that has survived innumerable attempts to correct it. So: whatever Bernard Levin thinks, cui bono? is not a rhetorical question meaning Who gets anything out of this? Le. nobody, therefore This is pointless. It is a real question meaning Who benefits from this? i.e. If you want to know who is behind this, consider who stands to gain. It is a mistake to suppose that when Hamlet says the local tradition of ceremonial drinking is a custom 'more honoured in the breach than th' observance' he means the custom is more often ignored than followed. He means it is better, more honourably, ignored than followed, as genera- tions of verbal fops should have known. And as Shakespeare could have afforded to make a little clearer. The sense in which an exception proves the rule is not the more usual one in which, for instance, Pythagoras proved his theorem. What an (apparent) exception does is test the rule. (For those who like arguments from derivation, prove is derived from the Latin probare to test, whence also probe and, with a changed meaning, probable.) Rockets are tested on proving grounds; a will is proved, achieves probate, when it is officially tested and found to be valid; the proof of an article is a test run which can be corrected; the proof of the pudding is in the eating. If we imagine a rule that all red-haired men are quick-tempered and an individual red- haired man is found who is not quick-tempered, the excep-

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tion proves the rule when it turns out that he had in fact dyed his naturally brown hair red. A devil's advocate is not one who rouses to evil courses nor one who pleads for a diabolical human being or insti- tution. On the contrary, the advocatus diaboli is an elevated ecclesiastic whose task it is to display all the sins committed by somebody now being considered for admission to saint- hood, thus advancing the devil's claim to be the rightful owner of that person. A leading question is not an important or significant one whose answer might give away something damaging or unusually interesting. All it does is tend to lead a court witness to some desired reply, as a barrister might ask, 'And the man you saw bending over the body of his victim - was it not John Smith?' when the man in the dock is the said J. Smith. 'Feed a cold and starve a fever.' As Robert Graves has pointed out, this archaic source of error treats the two appar- ent imperatives as separate injunctions, whereas what we have in fact is a conditional sentence: if you feed somebody with a cold, he will develop a fever and then you will have to starve him. Less prevalent since the spread of the 'show me an X and I'll show you a Y' construction, a splendid Americanism exemplified in 'Show me a good loser and I'll show you a loser,' which is not a programme for two. It came along too late to save Edith Sitwell from seeing two apparent imperatives as separate injunctions when Lear is made to say:

Allow not nature more than nature needs, Man's life is cheap as beast's,

and reading the passage as a statement of elderly pessimism or a couple of them. Ilk is not a handy synonym for gang or lot or sort or set, as in, for instance, 'Senator Joe McCarthy and his ilk'. Ilk is

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Hyper- urbanisms

actually a Scottish word meaning 'same', as in, for instance, 'Carrickfergus of that ilk' , meaning 'Carrickfergus of Carrickfergus', i.e. of that same place. But ilk is to be treated with circumspection or, better, avoided altogether not because of any problem about its meaning but because it is an outmoded piece of either pedantry or ignorance. The same might be said of other expressions mentioned in this article.

Hyper-urbanisms, or between you and I

I have never saw anything like what you describe. Elmer is no doubt your full brother but he doesn't look at all as you. Speculation is still rife as to whom will lead the England squad in South Africa. A rich friend has kindly asked my husband and I to dine with him wherever we please.

These examples all embody the same mistake, an indulged desire to be more correct than correct or posher than posh. A hyper-urbanism arises when a speaker puts into practice a badly taught or badly learnt lesson about the avoidance of vulgar or rustic error. Thus in the first example somebody has taken the ban on saying 'I seen' as the easier proposition that the word seen is to be avoided in every situation. Simi- larly, the word like is always turning up in disreputable circumstances, for example only bad people say 'It tastes good like a cigarette should' - better be on the safe side and steer clear of the word altogether. And as is rather posh too in its own right. Again, in the third example there can be seen a vague memory of a warning against saying 'to who', plus quite a strong feeling that whom is in itself an educated word. See WHOM.

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Hyphen

But it is in the fourth example that the vice of hyper- urbanism can be seen at its starkest and also commonest. Both anecdotal impression and published figures tells us that expressions like 'between you and I and the gatepost', a venerable howler, are actually more usual today in speech and writing than the grammatical version. The origin here is probably the quite false and truly vulgar notion that to say (or write) 'It's me' is ungrammatical and therefore to be avoided. Ungrammatical it is, but completely idiomatic, and even in fun 'It is I' is too awful to be tolerated. Anyway, the impression lingers in some that 'me' is rather mean and low and uneducated, whereas 'I' is dignified, upmarket and sort of Oxford-accented in itself. This view of style might have had the word 'stilted' - i.e. on stilts, artificially elevated - coined specially for it. It remains true that the best writers are not always the best models. In a famous speech in Julius Caesar Cassius tells Brutus:

I had as lief not be as live to be In awe of such a thing as I myself [i.e. a man, i.e. Caesar}

which shows the old boy between-you-and-I-ing like an American college graduate, unless perhaps the suggestion is that Cassius has something stilted in his character, which I have always rather felt. Later in the same speech, Cassius follows my example 2 in talking of the time Caesar was ill with a fever and called to a friend for a thirst-quencher 'as a sick girl'.

Hyphen

This word comes from two Greek words together mean- ing 'under one', which gets nobody anywhere and merely prompts the reflection that argument by etymology only

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serves the purpose of intimidating ignorant antagonists. On, then. This is one more case in which matters have not improved since Fowler's day, since he wrote in 1926:

The chaos prevailing among writers or printers or both regarding the use of hyphens is discreditable to English education. . . The wrong use or wrong non-use of hyphens makes the words, if strictly interpreted, mean something different from what the writers intended. It is no adequate answer to such criticisms to say that actual misunder- standing is unlikely; to have to depend on one's employer's readiness to take the will for the deed is surely a humiliation that no decent craftsman should be willing to put up with.

And so say all of us who may be reading this book. The references there to 'printers' needs updating to something like 'editors', meaning those who declare copy fit to print. Such people now often get it wrong by preserving in mid- column a hyphen originally put at the end of a line to signal a word-break: inter-fere, say, is acceptable split between lines but not as pact of a single line. This mistake is comparatively rare and seldom causes confusion; even so, time spent wondering whether an exactor may not be an ex-actor is time avoidably wasted. The hyphen is properly and necessarily used to join the halves of a two-word adjectival phrase, as in fair-haired children, last-ditch resistance, falling-down drunk, over-familiar reference. Breaches of this rule are rare and not troublesome. Hyphens are also required when a phrase of more than two words is used adjectivally, as in middle-of-the-road policy, too-good-to-be-true story, no-holds -barred contest. No hard-and-fast rule can be devised that lays down when a two-word phrase is to be hyphenated and when the two words are to be run into one, though there will be a rough

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consensus that, for example, book-plate and bookseller are each properly set out and that bookplate and book-seller might seem respectively new-fangled and fussy. A hyphen is not required when a normal adverb (i.e. one ending in -ly) plus an adjective or other modifier are used in an adjectival role, as in jack's equally detestable brother, a beautifully kept garden, her abnormally sensitive hearing. A hyphen is required, however, when the adverb lacks a final -ly, like well, ill, seldom, altogether or one of those words like tight and slow that double as adjectives. To avoid ambiguity here we must write a well-kept garden, an ill-considered objec- tion, a tight-fisted policy. The commonest fault in the use of the hyphen, and the hardest to eradicate, is found when an adjectival phrase is used predicatively. So a gent may write of a hard-to-conquer mountain peak but not of a mountain peak that remains hard-to-conquer, an often-proposed solution but not of one that is often-proposed. For some reason this fault is especially common when numbers, including fractions, are concerned, and we read every other day of criminals being imprisoned for two-and-a-ha/f years, a woman becoming a mother-of-three and even of some unfortunate being stabbed six-times. And the Tories have been in power for a decade-and-a-ha/f. Finally, there seems no end to the list of common phrases that some berk will bung a superfluous hyphen into the middle of: artificial-leg, daily-help, false-teeth, taxi-firm, mar- tial-law, rainy-day, airport-lounge, first-wicket, piano-concerto, lung-cancer, cavalry-regiment, overseas-service. I hope I need not add that of course one none the less writes of a false-teeth problem, a first-wicket stand, etc. The only guide is: omit the hyphen whenever possible, so avoid not only mechanically propelled vehicle users (a beauty from ME U) but also a man eating tiger. And no one is right and no-one is wrong.

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Idiom

Idiom, or devotion to idiom, or robust preference for idiom over what reason and common sense may clearly indicate, is what keeps English people or speakers of English saying and writing I won't be any longer than I can help when what the fellow so obviously and notoriously means is I won't be any longer than I can't help. Idiom, defined in the COD as a 'form of expression peculiar to a language' and translated by Fowler from the original Greek word as 'a manifestation of the peculiar', is a good blanket defence of the otherwise indefensible in phraseology, but should not be pushed too far. Idiom, or appeals to the dictates of idiom, may allow us to keep on writing and saying I shouldn't be surprised if it didn't come on to rain without anybody turning a hair, but it was naughty of Milton to write,

Adam, the goodliest man of men since born His sons, the fairest of her daughters Eve.

These famous lines, which nobody else could or would have written, produce two successive forms of discomfort in the reader, who first wonders uneasily whether some little- known but real English idiom justifies their qouble affront to common sense, and then wonders almost as uneasily whether some rather better-known Latin construction is beingLinvoked. If Milton did not surmise as much he should

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have done, and never mind that guff about fit audience, though few. Idiom, or the Giting of idiom, remains a good protection against the charge of pedantry, but its hold on the mind shows signs of weakening. In the same week I heard a broadcaster say that Snooks had had a heyday (hay-day?) on the cricket field, when Snooks mayor may not have been in his heyday but had actually had a field-day; and then I was told over the air that a senior musician had visited the opera on sudden impulse 'only to find' that his star ex-pupil was conducting the orchestra - but no, the English idiom demands that that form of words should be followed only by a disagreeable surprise, like the performance having been cancelled or the building burnt down. Such lapses in idiom are by definition invulnerable to logic and are no doubt often imputable to a foreigner's knowledge of English, perfect in every respect, perhaps, but for that of idiomatic grasp. Such minor inexactitudes are to be expected when a national language becomes inter- national too. No such excuse is available for the failures to get it right increasingly heard over the air and in speech. Native speakers are now uncertain of English idiom, for instance not knowing the difference between on my own behalf, on my own account and for my own part. Such differences may be hard to tie down but they were once instantly recognisable. They become blurred when nobody really cares much what is being said.

If and when

'Any writer who uses this formula,' says Fowler, 'lays himself open to entirely reasonable suspicions on the part of his reader.' That reader must lead an anxious life. No doubt use of the formula can be evidence of a lazy disinclination

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on the writer's part to decide which case of the two is being considered, but the harm done thereby, if any, is small, too small perhaps to justify the writing (or reading) of a couple of earnest columns on the point. And surely such a writer may have been moved less by laziness than by a desire not to commit his reader to an exclusive if or when. Other authorities have castigated the 'and/or' formula, requiring the writer to make up his mind between 'and' and 'or' . Well, the whole thing may look ugly on the page, especially the medial oblique stroke or oblique or stroke or virgule or, by a brisk Americanism, slash. But as a neat and clear way of expressing 'either and or or depending which fits' it has no equals, and as with 'if and when' it saves the writer from having to be definite. I myself have not long ago taken to writing 'and-or', perhaps unwisely. Fowler is also a bit harsh with 'unless and until'.

Imply, infer

Nothing could prevent this soporific duo from coming to the surface sooner or later in any discussion of this sort. It was established years ago that history was no help, that imply once meant, among other things, to attribute, as when you implied a motive to someone or a meaning to some statement, and infer often meant then what imply means now, to suggest strongly, to mean without actually saying. And so on. It seems best to cut through all this by stating categori- cally that nowadays imply describes a transmitting process and infer describes a receiving process: I imply, you infer. Smoke implies fire; you infer the presence of fire from seeing and/or smelling smoke, an eminently clear and comprehen- sible arrangement. There is only one difficulty. Imply is straightforward enough; nobody ever gets that wrong. But now and then

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some clot will ask you in conversation if you mean to infer that he is drunk when you have probably not even i1nplied that he is. He gets that one wrong not for any interesting historical reason but merely because he is a great one for getting things wrong. How you deal with him is your own affair, but just try to remember that imply comes from a Latin word meaning to fold in and infer from another one meaning to go into or induce. I mention these ancient roots not because I think etymologies generally give true meanings but because in this case they may assist memory. If you feel you have mental room for only one of the two, stick to infer while you wait for a new head.

Important

Section 137 in my Roget's Thesaurus is headed Occasion: timelessness. Within it there are a couple of lines in the Adjective subsection reading:

crucial, critical, key, momentous, climactic, pivotal, decis- ive 638 important,

and on duly turning to section 638 (Importance) we find, in the Adjective subsection there, a block of fifty-seven adjectives beginning with important and including several that might have been found in 137'S list but are not. The notions of urgency and of importance, though often found together, are distinguishable. To pick up a taxi may be urgent, especially in the rain, but it is probably unim- portant. The survival of the human race is important, per- haps, but it seems at the moment not to be an urgent problem. An issue genuinely uniting the two is rather rare, much rarer than a reader of letters to the Press, for instance, is led to believe. Every issue is said to be a key issue, every possible decision is crucial, critical, pivotal, essential, vital.

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In- and un-

At the moment, key is perhaps the brand leader; it appeals so strongly to an M P that he uses the adjective twice over in the same sentence (in a letter to The Times today). My memory takes me back fifty years to northern France, where the volume of signal traffic became so huge that urgency markings seemed to have lost their meaning, and bundles of emergency-operations messages were sent off on the ordinary dispatch-rider run. The reader will recall that we won the war notwithstanding all the fuss about urgency. The content of the message is what counts, not the priority stamped on it. One day, when key issues and crucial decisions are no more, it might be possible to say that something is important, incidentally the lowest priority marking of them all.

In- and un-

It looks a bit berkish to get these prefixes muddled and write, for instance, undiscriminate and indiscriminating, but unfortunately there is no rule. It might be thought that anyone used to reading, writing and hearing English would know as if instinctively when to use in- and when un-, and indeed this is usually so. Not always, however, and experi- ence will suggest that some people's instinct is more fallible than others'. The only safe treatment of what may seem a small prob- lem is to consult the dictionary if ever you feel less than absolutely certain, and some writers had better grit their teeth and check everything less obviously cast-iron than unlikely or incessant. In the absence of a dictionary or a safe alternative word or any other way round the difficulty, pick un- at the start of what looks like an English-based word like unspeakable. If you are going to be wrong, be wrong in your own language.

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In a few minutes

Servants and other inferior persons have from time imme- morial been promising they will follow an order by saying, or shouting from near by, something that means 'at once' and then dawdling or delaying indefinitely. Following their progress, or the lack of it, expressions that formerly meant 'at once' have come to mean 'in a little while'. The most famous of these is presently. Before getting to grips with the adverb, we might take a moment over the adjective present, which the biblical 'God is . . . a very present help in trouble' uses to mean not only that he is always present or available but also that he comes to our aid at once. Presently itself on its early appearances in the fifteenth century meant 'immediately, instantly', but before the end of the sixteenth had settled down to the meaning it still retains, 'before long'. Less notorious ex- amples of the same process include anon (see you anon today means 'see you some time or other, if then'), by and by and even soon, though you have to go back as far as to the Old English ancestor of the last word to be sure of finding the unequivocal sense 'at once'. Now, as in 'I'll fetch your drinks now,' was going the same way as presently in South Wales when last heard of. And finally, having dallied with after the break, in a couple of minutes and such palliatives, TV declares boldly next on LCM television when they mean not by any means next but after a stiff dose of trailers and advertisements. Human beings need their little lazinesses and dis- honesties, and a world in which everything was understood to mean what it said, no more nor less, would be intolerable. For all that, a world in which nothing ever happened straight away, in which that very concept had been lost, would not be much fun either.

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Infamous, infamy

In excess of

This dreadful little cluster has somehow insinuated itself into serious contexts in which precise quantities are bandied about. Where it was once considered careful enough to write of temperatures in the 80S or over 80° it now seems requisite to talk about temperatures in excess of 80 degrees. If over is somehow ruled out, more than will do, anything to avoid this fussy piece of pseudo-accuracy which contributes noth- ing but length and a fraudulent scientistic glow. I think I once heard talk about a dose of some opiate of up to in excess of so many grains, but am probably imagining things.

Infamous, infamy

Both adjective and noun used to be terms of extreme moral disapproval, equivalent in depth of feeling to 'abominable' and 'wickedness'. Then quite recently, perhaps not before the I98os, the adjective weakened in severity to something on the level of 'notorious'. A biography of that period describes its subject's undergraduate life at Oxford in the I920S as 'now infamous'. In former days, till recently as I say, you or your behaviour were registered as infamous at the time and you or it stayed that way; the notion of becoming infamous long afterwards was meaningless. Round about ten years ago, the account of an interview with a supposedly unconventional lady writer called her 'infamous' in its head- line, and I remember thinking she had quite enough money already without the vast sum she would surely win at her libel action. But nothing happened because there was no court action; possibly no sufficiently reactionary legal figure was available. The noun infamy, although seemingly out of use, Ifcains its former meaning, but infamous is now unusable through ambiguity.

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Internecine

Pronounced intuhNEEsine. According to COD, the word now means 'mutually destructive' and, according to observa- tion, 'internally destructive' into the bargain, as in 'inter- necine conflict'. Perhaps meanly, I hope to give complacent would-be purists a momentary twinge by telling them that the inter prefix here, as in interficio, 'I kill', stands for thoroughly, not reciProcally, and that the nearest Latinate adjectives to what they want are intestine and good old internal. Or civil, as in civil war.

Into

Well, into is a word although onto is not, or not yet. Never- theless we now and then read into where in to is probably meant or should have been written, as in, say, Then we went into where the others were. Those who produce a printed version of what we have written are inclined to follow the would-be vivid fashion of printing as one word what was intended to be two, hence many a worthwhile and forever that started life as u'orth while and for ever. I merely draw attention to another thing to look out for in proof-correcting. The use of into as shorthand for 'actively interested in', as in, say, He's into Georgian silver plate, seems handy and harmless to me, though it is admittedly trendy, or was.

Ironical

It used to be said with some meaning that things like abrupt, spectacular but somehow appropriate reversals of fortune were ironical, partaking of irony in a sense well defined in COD as:

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ill-timed or perverse arrival of event or circumstance in itself desirable, due to the feigned good will and actual malice of (Fate, circumstance etc.),

though it might be fair to add that the arrival of misfortune hard upon some exceptional success would also have been accounted irony, or an irony. Thus the diagnosis of terminal cancer in a young man crippled from birth, now newly embarked on a promising career in law, was probably called ironical among other things by some of those concerned. Recently all seriousness seems to have departed from the word. The slightest and most banal coincidence or point of resemblance or even just-perceptible absence of one, unworthy of a single grunt of interest, gets called ironical. The other day I read somewhere of how ironical it was that the going at last year's particular horse-race was perceptibly either better or worse than that predicted this year, I forget which.

-ise and -ize

In the past, a great deal of ink was spilt on the derivations, differentiations, etc., of these two verb-terminations. Fowler characteristically recommends using -ise at all times while on another page supplying a list of twenty-one of the 'more important' verbs that must never take the Z even if -ize 'is accepted as the normal form'. Nowadays you may use -ise yourself everywhere without a second thought. But keep your eye out for horrible coinages like tenderise - of meat or something resembling meat - and deratise - to rid (a building etc.) of rats. The latter is as genuine a specimen as the former; indeed I once saw deratisation in print.

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Jargon

This word, of unknown origin, has several near-synonyms and any attempt to distinguish them is perilous. Jargon itself has at least two separable meanings, as follows:

I. With another word or two limiting it to a group, a trade, etc., as in sociologists' jargon, art-critics' jargon, etc., using a specialised vocabulary. 2. Without such limitation, as in then he lapsed into jargon, you're talking pure jargon, etc., partly unintelligible and unpleasant to listen to. Perhaps (I) as heard by an out- sider, one not in the group.

Argot is best kept for French slang if the word is to be used in English at all. Cant has at least two separable meanings, as follows:

I. Hypocritical moralistic attitudinising (his speech was full of cant about duty, etc.) 2. Much as jargon I, language, vocabulary limited to a group (thieves' cant, etc.).

Dialect I have treated separately. Lingo is a contemptuous or jocose term for a foreign lan- guage. Once used by insecure Oxonian philologists to refer to Old English, Middle English, etc. Patois now has at least two separable meanings, as follows:

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I. Rustic or corrupt urban speech, best kept for forms of French (whence pronunciation PATwah), especially in old New Orleans and the area round about. 2. A trendy near-synonym of jargon I and cant 2.

Pidgin is a large subject, especially since what were once called forms of pidgin English have passed through stages of creolisation and become the official languages of new nations in the Pacific and elsewhere. The term pidgin, said to have originated in an Oriental attempt to pronounce the English word business, and not so long ago an imprecise term fit for unserious use, is now highly specialised and to be applied with caution. Nevertheless it can be predicted that, if an official language other than English emerges in South Africa, it will have pidgin features, as Afrikaans has always had. Slang, a word of unknown origin. Where discoverable, the origins of this amorphous conglomeration of words and expressions must lie in some kinds of private language in school or regiment or comparable group. Not much more can sensibly be said, except perhaps that on one side slang connects with jargon I and cant 2 to mean something semi-private, and on the other abuts on mere informal- ity. What is a slang phrase and what is no more than in- formal, and therefore freely available to all, is sometimes a distinction difficult to draw. There never was a more useful dictionary example than the one given in COD (1988 edn.) against brolly: n. I. (colloq.) umbrella. 2. (sl.) parachute.

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Jargon 2001

Jargon 2001

Here are two advertisements that appeared in a London newspaper in the year 1994.

SENIOR VICE PRESIDENT - FASHION-LED RETAIL

This is a challenging opportunity to join a fast-growing, customer-focused business which although a major player in fashion retail, is entering an evolutionary stage in its development, with the aim of building a team that will lead the group forward into the twenty-first century. Probably in your mid thirties and educated to degree level, you will be a dynamic leader with the strategic vision to steer the business through an exciting stage of its devel- opment. You will already have an extensive product and buying background in womenswear, together with an impressive record of high achievement in a similar role with a major multi-site fashion operation. Your energy, enthusiasm and assured interpersonal skills will be supported by a proven ability to think laterally and manage positive change. You will also display the potential for further career advancement.

DEVELOPMENT MANAGER - STRATEGIC ACCOUNTS

The company - UK division of world class multinational. Exceptional growth, highly profitable. - Manufacturer of global brand supported by highly original advertisingl marketing. - Strong culture that actively encourages open dialogue, staff empowerment and team results. The position - Proactively work with major customers, building mutu- ally beneficial partnerships.

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- Act as strategist and facilitator, coordinating internal and external resources to achieve business objectives. - Continuously manage the review and analysis of retail data and forecasts to optimise product placement.

Qualifications - Bright, numerate graduate, with retail or related experi- ence in account management/buying/merchandising. - Clear understanding of supply chain management. - Proven managerial skills, ability to delegate effectively. Mature, balanced approach with exceptional interpersonal skills.

Jejune

If I say this maltreated word has ceased to be current, I can more or less confidently predict, language-users being what they are, its reappearance tomorrow. But I have not come across any fresh uses of jejune, good, bad or indifferent, since my intended demolition-job of 1980. I wrote then that 'here was my favourite solecism of all time' (still true) and continue to find it highly educative. Accordingly I now summarise and paraphrase my earlier reconstruction of the word's progress to enormity:

STAGE I: A writes: 'His arguments are unoriginal and jejune.' (A knows that Cjejune' means 'thin, unsatisfying', a rare word, admittedly, but one with a nice ring to it.) STAGE II: B notices the nice ring. He doesn't know what the word means and of course wouldn't dream of con- sulting a dictionary even if he possessed one. There is something vaguely French as well as nice about the ring to 'jejune'; in fact now he comes to think of it it reminds him of 'jeune', which he knows means 'young'. Peering at the context, he sees that 'jejune' could mean, if not exactly

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'young', then something like 'un-grown-up, immature, callow'. Hooray! - he's always needing words for that, and here's a new one, one of superior quality, too. STAGE III: B starts writing stuff like 'Much of the dialogue is jejune, in fact downright childish.' With the latest edition of COD giving 'puerile' as a sense of 'jejune', the story might be thought to be over, but there is one further stage. STAGE IV: Having 'jeune' in their heads, people who have never seen the word in print start pronouncing 'jejune' not 'djiJOON' but 'zherZHERN', in the apparent belief that French people always give a tiny stutter when they say 'jeune'. (I have heard 'zherZHERN' several times in the last few years.) Finally C takes the inevitable step of writing jejeune (I have seen several examples), or even, just that much better: 'Although the actual arguments are a little jijeune, the staging of the mass scenes are [sic] impressive.' Italics in original! - which with the acute accent in place set the seal on the deportation of an English word into French, surely a unique event.

I ended my exposition with a kind of footnote:

For the interested, 'jejune' is indeed connected with a French word, but it is 'jeune' with distinguishing circum- flex over the U until such diacritical remarks were abol- ished a few years ago. Both this 'jeune' and 'jejune' derive from the Latin '[dies] ieiuna' or 'jejuna', a 'fast [day)'. Hence the familiar' dejeuner', to de-fast as we break-fast. 'Jejune' then first meant 'fast-like, scanty, Lenten', like the entertainment Rosencrantz feared the players would receive from Hamlet.

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Judgemental

Judgemental

This is a vogue-word from the more popular fringes of psychology. A judgemental person or attitude is one inclined to pass judgements on other people and their actions, in practice often unfavourable judgements and therefore much to be reprehended. Possibly the reprehension is emphasised by the location of the main stress on the second syllable of the word, thus subtly suggesting that the afflicted person is 'mental' in the colloquial sense. I should have thought on the contrary that being (unfavourably) judgemental about things like murder and people like Stalin was required by sanity as well as decency; tolerance for the tolerable and intolerance for the intolerable.

Just desserts

There are three nouns, desert with stress on first syllable, meaning a desolate region, desert with stress on second, meaning in the plural what somebody deserves, and dessert with stress also on second, meaning the sweet course of a main meal. Everybody knows that so well that to set it down here may seem needless. But if it really is needless, why do people keep writing about Joe Bloggs getting his [just] desserts when no pun can possibly have been intended? Because such writers have become pun-drunk, as they might put it themselves on a goodish day. It does seem time to look out when they let puns or the vague memory of puns get between them and the language, or them and reason.

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Kafka's The Castle

The above is the sort of thing people never say but appar- ently make no bones about writing when they have some- thing to impart from Kafka and The Castle, a suspicious divergence. Speakers of English understandably feel that a noun, or modifier-plus-noun, will take a maximum of one article or possessive or other handle and shy away from saying anything like 'Graham Greene's The Confidential Agent' or 'Anthony Burgess's A Clockwork Orange' or 'A.N. Other's He Fell Among Thieves'. What doomed the efforts of The Times to get itself called The Times in all circumstances was of course the refusal of people even to write 'The news- paper is neither your The Times nor my The Times but Rupert Murdoch's The Times,' and still less to dream of saying things like 'Do you do the The Times crossword?' To behave properly you have to write, for instance, 'Gra- ham Greene's thriller, The Confidential Agent' and 'Anthony Burgess's fantasy of the future, A Clockwork Orange' and 'Kafka's novel [or whatever it is} The Castle'. Until quite recently it looked as if you could write of Greene's Confiden- tial Agent and Burgess's Clockwork Orange and Kafka's Castle, but indexers unnecessarily and pissily put a stop to that by throwing The and A and so on back in front of the main body of the title. Nowadays you must either stick in a category-label like 'novel' or 'play' or write about works felt to be too old to need a precursory article, like Shakespeare's Tempest or Hardy's Mayor of Casterbridge. Or write something

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Kids

you would never contemplate saying. Or cunningly recast the sentence.

Kids

This word for children, labelled an Americanism by COD, was until about 1970 entirely colloquial and conversational, with no special overtones. Then it started to become a teachers' and educators' term for schoolchildren, featured in the boast, 'We [in our dedicated way) don't teach subjects, we teach kids.' It now turns up in serious places like the letters page in The Times, if that is a serious place. Kids in this sense will fade soon, though not soon enough to suit me. My objection to its 'committed' use is not to be traced, I hope, to my being snooty, old-fashioned, old or British. No, this use carries a strong hint of being down-to-earth on purpose (see BELLY). It condescends to children and robs them of their dignity in just the same way as it denatures an Italian, say, to call him a wop. To me, dubbing children kids out of policy recalls the affected, chummy docking of Christian names for public use at the head of articles and such and even at the foot of letters to The Times. Let me be the one to decide when if ever to address you or refer to you as Chris, Ken, Dave or Jim.

Kilometre

Perhaps sadly, perhaps not, this is hardly the place to launch an attack on the metric system. I can, however, legitimately snipe at the habit of stressing the word kilometre on the second syllable, thus turning the thing into a device for measuring thousands, as an anemometer measures wind-

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force and a hygrometer measures humidity. Once upon a time there was indeed a true kilometer, built on the orders of one of the ancient Persian kings. Tired of guessing how many men there were in his army and unable to trust anybody to estimate them, his majesty had a thousand such men counted out, which was feasible, and had a wall built round them. Filling and emptying this a few hundred times got the King a near-enough answer to his problem. Not many people know that, or would care if they did.

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Lather

As long as I can remember I have known, or been told, that lather rhymes with gather and not father, and like every- body else I go on doing as before and pronounce the wretched (and seldom needed) word as I always have, to rhyme with father. At the rate we seem to be going with shaving-cream and machine washing of clothes, dishes, etc., both thing and word will soon have fallen out of use. What happened to the first syllable of solder?

Letters or figures

A journalist recently lamented the seeming fact that 'among the 231 million inhabitants of the United States there were not even 3 or 4,000 who might be interested in [his} life story'. That at least was what appeared in print. What the man actually wrote had obviously pertained to three or four thousand people who might or might not have been interested, but some officious intermediary had turned it into nonsense. Numbers expressed in words, as four thousand people or a hundred reasons, are not necessarily intended to be precise. Those expressed in figures cannot help seeming as if they are so intended. The title of Ian Hay's account of the begin- ning of the Great War, The First Hundred Thousand, meant something quite different from what The First 100,000

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Like

would have meant. What until the other day was a firm distinction is now being eroded. Other agents of this erosion are the practice of printing, for instance, '£4.3m' for '£4,300,000' but continuing to set, for instance, '£43,000' in full. The apparent rule whereby a number coming first in a sentence must be spelt out in words leads straight to nonsense, as in 'Nineteen-forty-five, unlike 1950, gave Labour a comfortable majority in the House.' Another apparent rule binds broadcasters, such that 'one hundred' must always be said instead of 'a hundred', producing nonsenses like 'a one-hundred-pound bottle of . , WIne . Nowadays more and more people are innumerate, very likely know which is the bigger of a million and ten thou- sand but would not much care to have to write out the two of them in figures, and so are more vulnerable than their parents to confusion over quantities. Some may even feel dimly that knowing about such things is better left to computers. Conspiracies are unlikely things but unorgan- ised consensuses are less so, and if there exists one to degrade the importance of quantities it comes at an infectious time.

Like

All of us know that like is to be avoided in conjunctional uses, or at least not to say 'he behaved like he was drunk' etc., and nearly all of us have heard about the hippie who called 'Like help' when he was near drowning. No wonder some of us avoid the word even when the circumstances call for it (see HYPER-URBANISMS). No linguistic ban is better known. Unfortunately the picture, like many a lin- guistic picture, is a little complicated. Only a little: of the important two complicators, one is that people use the like-in-conjunctional use frequently in conversation, even if they tend to avoid it in writing; and

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Long or short?

the other is that some of them feel uneasily that there may be something unnatural, even pedantic, in its too-obvious avoidance. A third factor, that there is an impressive list of accepted writers who have used this like in the past, probably cuts little ice in itself, though it may be dimly felt that it must be better to be wrong with Shakespeare than right with Professor Tomnoddy. Two quite strong desires, not to seem mincingly donnish and not to be or look illiterate and philistine, pull in opposite directions. My solution is in two parts, conversational and written:

I. Forget that you are not supposed to talk about something or other tasting good like a cigarette should. The possible disapproval of a self-appointed arbiter of spoken usage is not much to be feared. 2. Continue to avoid conjunctional like on paper; you may not know quite what a conjunction is but you know how it feels. But always remember Orwell's final decree: break any stylistic rule rather than commit a barbarity - which includes all forms of conscious unnaturalness, not least those resulting from hankering after cor- rectitude.

Long or short?

Few people are perfectly consistent in their speech. I for one am never sure how to pronounce the I in words like direct: should it be long, like eye, or short, as in pin? Or rather I was not sure till I looked it up in COD, where I found what I had more or less foreseen, that either value, long or short, was accepted and recommended, both for direct itself and for all its derivatives, like directorate. I frankly had not foreseen the equal endorsement of both values in the third syllable of civilisation, for instance, at least in a

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British dictionary. American usage, as testified by observa- tion and by American dictionaries, leans definitely but not exclusively towards a short vowel in such words. It seems that this is not a matter that invites the laying down of the law. For all that, I suggest the following. If you want to be emphatic and have no fear of perhaps being thought a little bit ossified and careful and British, use the long vowel. In all other circumstances use the short. For once we have here a matter of taste.

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Major

Apart from special cases like Ursa Major, major-general, the key of C major and a few phrases relating to surgery, operations, etc., this word needs treating with caution. It is an indefinite comparative, coming straight from Latin where it is the comparative of magnus, 'great'. It seems hard to justify major at all in its popular sense of outstanding, unusually important. As applied to practitioners of the fine arts the word is tendentious. When the phrase major poet or major composer is used of some individual, the user is making an assertion that is not an assertion, a claim that need not be defended or argued for because nothing of substance has been claimed. 'Snooks takes his place among the major artists of our time' is saying as much and as little as 'Blanco washes whiter'. To apply the adjective great to an artist may be perilous but is not empty, there being criteria to be argued over. As for important, this seems to me to lurch towards blurb- writer's commendation in the major style - as important as who, more important than who else? I myself would want to add that artistic importance is not very important, far less so than the question of whether a sonnet or a sonata is any good. To deserve that description is hard enough. Major as in major portion of (= greater or larger or large part of), like the majority of (= most of), is nothing worse than empty pomposity.

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The Mall, Pall Mall

The thoroughfar
in St James's Park has a name pronounced to rhyme with gal or shall and there is no argument about that. The street between Trafalgar Square and St James's Palace has a name now pronounced like pal followed by mall as above and there is still argument or at least disagree- ment about that. Undoubtedly the pronunciation was once like pell-mell, though the two expressions are apparently not related, and some older speakers still preserve the original pronunciation, as the COD did until 1970. It is safe to say that by the early years of the next century no one will be saying the name like pell-mell (rhyming with gel for girl). Explanations for linguistic change, even minor ones like this, are likely to be fanciful or non-existent, but in the present case I would venture something to do with social change. As the COD says, Pall Mall was 'noted for clubs', meaning originally gentlemen's clubs whose membership was upper class. As that membership expanded downwards socially to include people like me (born 1922), so perhaps did pronunciations like that of Pall Mall. Gentlemen, unlike those less fortunately placed, notoriously take no heed of what you think of them, not least whether a favoured pro- nunciation of theirs might strike some hearers as affected or exclusive. As the middle classes moved into the clubs of Pall Mall and became predominant in them, so perhaps the accepted pronunciation of the name of the place correspond- ingly changed. Fanciful, as I said, but possible all the same.

Malnutrition

Fowler's entry under this head is a prime example of what, in a less august personage, might be called his insensitivity or even his philistinism, not to mention his ignorance. Malnutrition is not the same as underfeeding, but means

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the state of being badly or unwisely or for any reason inade- quately supplied with sustaining food, not underfed. The British working classes before and indeed after the late war often had plenty to eat, but it was mostly food like white bread, crisps, biscuits, tinned fruit and jam, filling perhaps but not part of a healthy diet.

May and might

This entry would not have been needed until quite recently, but writers in the public prints seem never to tire in their quest for new illiteracies. This one is easily detected and avoided. Not many people used to reading could fail to spot that something is wrong in the sentence If Napoleon had been at his best on the day of Waterloo, the result of the battle may have been different, and almost as few would not feel, however dimly, that the writer has managed to imply that the actual result is unknown, perhaps unknowable. Substi- tute might for may and history and sanity are restored. Most writers would never dream of erring in this shoddy way. The remainder, the weaker brethren, will just have to put may-might on their list of danger-spots. While we are on might, journalists have taken to saying things like, This climbdown could signal a further Tory defeat, perhaps out of a lubberly sense of caution. I want to shriek, 'Of course it could! Just as it could signal Balls to Mr Banglestein! Might, you numskull, might!' But I seldom do.

Meaningful

Until recently this word, if it is a word at all, was used by philosophers and others to distinguish a verifiable or disprovable statement or question from one that was in this sense meaningless. Thus 'It's Thursday today' is meaningful,

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'It's a beautiful day' is (in this sense) meaningless. Then some uneducated person took meaningful for a longer and therefore posher variant of the old adjective meaning as in 'She gave him a meaning look', in others words a look charged with meaning, an expressive or significant look. In a trice people were giving each other meaningful looks and suchlike allover the shop, and not thinking of any verifiable or disprovable looks either. So, by a familiar process, both meaning and meaningful became unusable by careful writers.

Medieval

Now the standard spelling. Pronounced in four syllables as 'meddy-eeval', with please no glottal stop before the second E. To pronounce in three syllables as 'medd-eeval' or 'mee- deeval' is an infallible sign of fundamental illiteracy, a posi- tive shibboleth.

Membership

Any trade unionist (it is nearly always a trade unionist rather than, say, a club secretary) who talks about his member- ship when he means his members is suffering from, among other things, an inBated ego. The case is different when he means number of members, and a clause like 'our member- ship has doubled [or halved} in the last five years' is perfectly innocuous, but the other shows undisguised preference for the supposed grander word.

Merry Christmas

It may betray excessive zeal to look for solecisms on a Christmas card, but here goes. The form of words above this brief article is the correct one, so never anywhere write

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Xmas for Christmas and also never print or write what many now do, Happy Christmas. Merry means among other things 'given over to merrymaking or becoming merry, perhaps with the assistance of alcohol', a festive interval in the yearly round. There is a connection with the word mirth. In the past you went on to wish somebody 'a happy and prosperous New Year'. Unlike merry, happy connotes a settled state, one that might well last a whole year. But whether Christmas be merry or happy, remember not to pronounce the T in It.

Meticulous

Fowler devotes nearly a thousand of his own words to this one word, which he calls 'wicked', strong language for him, and shows unarguably that its Latin original, meticulosus, meant something quite different from its present sense, beset by small fears as against punctilious. He traces its appearance in English to the French Academy dictionary of 1835, and goes on, 'The question is whether we are going to allow the word to be imposed upon us for general use, now that the journalist of the daily papers has caught it up from the Ii terary critic,' and proceeds to put the case against our giving such permission, rounding things off with one quota- tion illustrating the correct use of the word and a dozen of the incorrect. There was undoubtedly a twinkle in Fowler's eye as he stated his question, though it is almost as clear that he was in earnest too, wishing at least that grammarians and lexicographers should indeed be the select body to admit new usages to language. But he must have known too that, by whatever process it may be that such usages get their start, 'we', the learned few, are never even con- sulted. Hence we should not be surprised to read in the fifth edition of COD that meticulous principally means 'over-

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Much, very

scrupulous about minute details'; the seventh edition hangs a pair of brackets round the over-. The cause, as always is lost. So what can it be that prevents me from going on using the word at all?

Much, very

I once came across the sentence Suddenly he was very afraid in a story in a pulp magazine, to be sure, but it would be patronising, however natural, to lower one's standards to suit the company. Anyway, that very afraid bothered me. Something was wrong, but what? Following a rule I had learnt even longer ago, I mentally substituted much for very and found I had replaced one discomfort with another. However 'correct' he was much afraid might be, it seemed stiff and starchy, all wrong in a thrillerish context, and sticking very back in front of much only made matters worse. I soon saw that it was afraid that was wrong and that nobody could object to he was very frightened. This small incident taught me something. The rule about true adjectives going with very (1 thought she was very attrac- tive) while mere participles required much (The old lady was much encouraged) evidently had its limitations. But not only that. The fact that a word or phrase satisfies one set of cri teria is no guarantee that it satisfies all. And not onl y that, either. If a sentence keeps all the rules you know and still seems wrong, change it. That takes longer, but so does anything worth while.

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Noisome

This is a rather fancy word meaning 'objectionable, offen- sive, evil-smelling', nothing to do with noise (the S of noisome is unvoiced), more to do with annoy. What it is really doing in this dictionary is carrying my money as the likeliest tip for the solecism of 1996 or so. Any day now the eye of some verbal mountebank will catch noisome and the harmless dissyllable will be transmogrified into a posh near-enough synonym for noisy, as happened to fulsome, now used like a posh word for full (see FULSOME). Mark my words.

Nor

Sometimes, if the sentence is long enough and the writer negligent enough, or gets used round about half way where grammar and common sense would demand nor. The point of calling for vigilance here is not just the preservation of grammatical usage, though there is that, but also saving the time and trouble of the type of reader who has to trudge back to make certain that nor was actually required. So, outside a short-term, tea-or-coffee choice, be careful with or.

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Not un-

In his article Politics and the English Language (1946), a vigorous and entertaining attack on waffle which everybody interested should read, George Orwell goes out of his way to stigmatise what he calls the not un- formation, which he would like to see laughed out of existence. He says in a footnote.

One can cure oneself of the not un- formation by memoris- ing this sentence: A not unblack dog was chasing a not unsmall rabbit across a not ungreen field.

Really? Orwell was an outstandingly silly as well as a very intelligent and observant man, and here I think he goes too far. He was right to have got fed up with the waffly reluc- tance to commit oneself enshrined in such phrases as not unconnected with and a not unpromising development, but surely wrong to miss the possible virtues as well as the more selfish advantages of an unwillingness to commit oneself. Further, whatever he may have thought or said, not every statement or opinion is a political one, and there is no evasion in writing, for instance, the gaoler spoke to him not unkindly in preference to the gaoler spoke to him kindly, which means something quite different. Not un- needs keeping an eye on, like much else, but there is no point in mechanically abolishing it, even if one could.

Nouns as verbs

The English language is friendly to the practice of using as verbs what until the other day were nouns only, and the dictionary is full of well-established verbs that started life in this way. Nevertheless, there are times when this sort of

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verb seems to be growing too fast for comfort, and one suspects that now may be such a time. Nobody with any feeling for words can be glad at the arrival as verbs of author ('she has authored a dozen books'), fund ('how the award will be funded is not yet clear'), guest and host ('among those guesting/hosting the party was Mrs Joe Bloggs'), target ('gay bishop targeted'), or, according to report, critique ('to critique all aspects of life'). All these are easily avoidable blemishes. Yes, they may be quicker to say, but then cutting your arm off will reduce your weight faster and more irreversibly than any diet or exercise.

Number

(The grammatical term comprIsIng, In English, singular and plural word-forms.) The subject is hard for anybody not educated in it to understand. For instance, pick out the correct ones from the following catalogue and say how they resemble each other:

I. Violent crimes is a national growth-area. 2. Violent crime is many things, not one. 3. Violent crimes are a national growth-area. 4. Violent crime are many things, more than one.

Easy: the correct sentences above are 2 and 3. Perhaps not so easy: they resemble each other in that their respective verbs are of the same number as, or agree with, the subject of each sentence. And by the way, I and 4 resemble each other in that their respective verbs agree in their number with the complement of each sentence, the parts that come after is and are, not the subject. Laughably easy, both parts of this, for those readers who knew what grammatical number was before glancing at this article.

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The emergent rule, that in each sentence the verb takes the number of the subject and never mind what comes after the verb, sounds easy enough to follow. Mistakes are sometimes made in sentences like the following:

Close study of Nazi records, many of which are available to interested inquirers, especially if they carry letters introducing themselves, suggest dozens of conclusions.

After the event it is probably easy enough to spot the fact that suggest should be suggests. What threw the supposed writer off was first the sheer distance between the subject and its verb, and secondly the intervention of half a dozen plurals between the two and the presence of another couple just after the main verb. This sort of attraction is obviously the more likely the longer and more complicated the sen- tence, which is part of the argument for keeping one's own sentences short and straightforward. The small but troublesome word what sometimes raises difficulties here, and to treat it as an unchanging singular solves most of them. What I need is a stiff drink is all right, but so is What I need is twenty stiff drinks, grammatically at least. It would be a mistake to suppose that there is something disproportionate about using up all this space over the pres- ence or absence of a single letter, as it commonly is. What is at stake is the comfort or discomfort of one's readers, and to suppose that this does not matter is a more serious mistake.

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Oblivious

This once-useful word formerly meant something like sadly forgetful, as its Latin original suggests. A sentence like Oblivi- ous of his social position, he plunged into a life of gambling shows it used in its original, precise meaning. Then, a hundred years ago or more, restless but lazy writers started using it as a posh synonym for merely insensible, as in He stiffened in alarm, but the guard remained oblivious to [sic} his presence. The difference is the substantial one between not noticing and taking no notice of As in other cases, all the writer who is careful with the words he uses can do is drop oblivious from his vocabulary and fall back on forgetful, unaware and the like.

Obscenity

The subject is adequately dealt with, I hope, under FOUR- LETTER WORDS, but I wanted to protest somewhere against the use of obscene and obscenity to refer to things that may be undesirable but are not 'grossly indecent, lewd' (COD). The full-sized 0 E D gives as sense I of obscene:

Offensive to the senses, or to taste or refinement; disgust- ing, repulsive, filthy, foul, abominable, loathsome. Now [I933} somewhat arch{aic}.

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OK, okay

The Supplement to the Oxford English Dictionary says under sense 1 of obscene:

Delete 'Now somewhat arch.' and substitute 'Now [1982J restored to general use',

and proceeds to give citations from 1875, 1915, 1923 and 1936. Then we move to three from 1974, of which the first declares, not unexpectedly,

Vietnam was the most obscene episode of the century,

and in the same year 'Broadmoor's forbidding buildings' are quoted as being 'obscenely overcrowded', after which many politically objectionable things were said to be obscene. One hesitates to quarrel, even on a small scale, with the authority of the 0 ED, but to my mind it goes wrong here. What we have seen, I would maintain, is much less the restoration to general use of a somewhat archaic sense than the impious and impudent hijacking or bagging of a word for sensationalist purposes. The kind of person who calls the events in Vietnam obscene is being irresponsible under the guise of moral shame. Dreadful things happen in the world all the time, and they are not made more objection- able by being misdescribed. These are not grossly indecent or lewd; in a word they are not what we have nowadays come to understand by obscene, however disgusting and depraved they may be.

OK, okay

The origin or origins of this English adjective, adverb, noun, verb and interjection are none of my concern, if my concern is supposed to be the correct or all-right usages of the language. For all that, one is sometimes expected to have

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a view of such matters, and so perhaps one should; I find it hard not to. That does not mean to say any attention should be wasted on it. I have heard or seen in my time countless tales of the 'origin' of OK or okay, starting with the information in the old label on a bottle of 0 K Sauce to the effect that the Cherokee (or was it Choctaw?) for 'It is so' was Hoke or Oke. Quite possibly. I might very well have passed over the question in silence this time round, but yesterday my eye happened to fall on an 'explanation' new to me, viz. that the expression derives from the French words Aux Cayes, 'at the Keys', like Florida keys, from Spanish cayo, 'reef». The words were supposedly stencilled on packages of new rum by Haitian freight-handlers to indicate that the con- tents had been made up 'at the Keys' and therefore included only the finest merchandise. Again, quite possibly. To me, this 'explanation' is like the ones about posh being derived from the initials of 'port out, starboard home' and therefore to be given a cabin on the far side from the tropical sun; or bloody coming from 'blood' = parentage = [blue} blood = of first-rate quality = [bloody} good, etc. Or something. In other words, having been taken through the 'explanation' I feel no better, cer- tainly no better informed, than before. The COD is not the earliest authority to cite the initial letters of oil korrect as the 'origin' of OK. Pfui! Nobody really knows the story of 0 K or posh or bloody or a great deal else, and all we need is our existing knowledge of what the words mean and how they are used. The rest is small-talk and readers' letters in the Daily Mail.

On the third day

Christians know as certainly as they know anything that on the third day after his death on the cross Jesus rose again from the dead. Like many others I knew this myself at one

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time. Even while I knew it, however, another part of my mind was not to be prevented from seeing that Easter Day, Sunday, was only the second day after the day of crucifixion, Friday. This caused me no difficulty at that far-off time, and it cannot have been long afterwards that I abandoned all speculation about such matters. The answer to the problem is, as usual, that there is no problem. The ancient world reckoned the passage of time inclusively, so that to every Roman yesterday was two days ago and tomorrow came along in two days' time. And any Sunday was the third day after the preceding Friday, what- ever else might have been going on. This fact cannot have been generally known for some centuries, but I have never heard of any Christian who seems to have experienced diffi- culty in believing two apparently incompatible things at once. This would appear to point to a discreditable incurios- ity about one of the fundamental articles of Christian faith.

Only

This little word has the property of straying from its logical position in a sentence or phrase, an eccentricity firmly entrenched in idiom and reinforced millions of times a day by English-speakers allover the world. No such person would say, for instance, 'Nelson seemed to lose his touch only when he fought on land,' instead of 'Nelson only seemed to lose his touch' etc. (In writing you might have to think again so as not to be taken as saying N. only seemed to, he didn't really.) The 'misplacing' of only, like the split infinitive and other fancied lapses from verbal rectitude, inevitably draws the fire of parlour grammarians, 'those friends from whom the English language may well pray to be saved,' as Fowler calls them in this connection. His dislike of such people is so strong that it actually betrays him into a mixed metaphor

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when he says of them, 'they were ... slapping a strait waistcoat upon their mother tongue,' a lapse, but not a very sad one.

Onto

This form, rather dated now, will strike many readers as a would-be neat or smart or up-to-date version of on to, as if into were a neat etc. version of in to, which it is not. I have no great personal objection to onto, though I have found by experience that no one (not no-one) persistently using onto writes anything much worth reading. There seems to be a similar connection, or lack of one, between starting lines of verse with a lower-case letter and inability to write a worth-while (not worthwhile) poem.

Opine

There is not much of a case against this word, which means to hold or express an opinion and appears in general to be correctly used. Its attractions, I suppose, are that it remains for the moment a smart-looking synonym for say, and if what was said was adequately banal oPined will draw atten- tion to that, as in, for instance, 'He opined that the weather was seasonable.' This would appeal to writers who like to seem superior to what they report or describe. Indeed opine, though unfortunately rather short for the job, has something of the quality that made essayists of an earlier generation think it amusing to call a drunk man an intoxicated individual. That something no doubt resides in the Latinity! formality of the word. When I add that, for whatever reasons, it has evidently become fashionable, handy for cheering up a lack-lustre diary para, I sense that there is a

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stronger case against opine than I thought when I started this article.

Optimistic

When a public figure says he is optimistic about the future of something, he chooses the word in preference to hopeful not only because optimistic is posher and longer but also because it seems more hopeful, rather as hopefully seems more hopeful than I hope. To be optimistic in what one may be tempted to call the true sense, certainly the original sense, is to hold a generally sanguine view of the universe or at least possess a cheerful temperament. I once heard on the radio an exchange between a journalist and a poet in which, perhaps unexpectedly, it was the journalist who asked the poet if he was optimistic (by nature, in the old sense), and the poet who apparently knew only of the newer sense. He answered the question by asking, in effect, 'What about?' Yes, he was a lousy poet too.

Orchestrate

A fashionable verb, meaning not much more than oyganise but implying that the user has a superior intelligence system: any fool can organise a conspiracy but you have to know a lot and work hard and deviously to orchestrate one. There might have been a valuable extra sense, derived from the original musical one, of setting out in full detail what had originally been no more than a mere undeveloped basis, but journalists can be relied on to steer confidently away from any such potentially interesting idea.

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Other

In early use, other or its ancestor sometimes meant 'second', a sense retained in the modern expression every other day, meaning not 'every day except the one specified' but 'every second day'. This was perhaps not a common use, but it was evidently common enough to carve out a place in our ordinal numbers for the word second, a Latin-based intruder among the impeccably Teutonic first, third, fourth, fifth, etc. Pace the purists, other on its own, without suffixed wise, is a respectable English adverb and there is no objection to, for instance, the following: He had no time to look at the document other than cursorily.

Our mutual friend

Mutual is an indispensable but tricky word more easily understood than defined. An attempt at the latter might read, 'Felt or done by each of two towards the other,' as in mutual liking, mutual destruction, mutual admiration society, often a less fussy way of saying reciProcal. So far so good. The trouble comes when mutual is made to mean something like shared or joint, as notoriously in our mutual friend. (Here Dickens mayor may not have meant to quote an ignorant character in the novel.) The usage and the famous phrase have passed into colloquial English, though not into mine. If we could say our common friend our troubles would be over, but in England a real grammatical solecism is preferable any day to a fancied social solecism, and the risk of seeming to mean that the friend is vulgar or lower class is too embarrass- ing to be faced.

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Overstatement

The language of
ewspaper headlines inevitably overstates. They exist not to advertise the truth but to catch attention as shortly as possible. They do not tell us what is probably the case, that the Prime Minister was mildly vexed when Buggins let out some small confidence, they announce instead, PM FURY AT BUGGINS BETRAYAL. Similarly, a brief spasm of disquiet at a threat to the tranquillity of a Party conference becomes PANIC AS VIOLENCE LOOMS AT EAST- BOURNE. Most people are well aware of this and many allow for it. What is perhaps less widely understood is the degree to which ordinary newspaper language (if I may so put it) seems to be pushing in the same direction of overstatement, sometimes by means of or via what Fowler would have called popularising a technicality, usually from that shadowy area where psychiatry and medicine intermingle. Thus people are no longer upset or confused or flustered by an unpleasant experience, they suffer a trauma or are traumatised by it. More briefly and inaccurately, they are not merely shocked, nor suffering from shock; they are said to be, or describe themselves as being, in shock. In the proper sense, that is pathologically, shock is a state of utter prostration following over-stimulation of nerves by sudden pain or violent emo- tion, and can result in death. It is many times removed from any reaction to what is usually described as a shocking experIence. Examples could be 'expanded. Until the other day, to bemuse someone was to reduce him to a condition of stupor, of morbid numbness and apathy; now, a transient state of mild perplexity is evidently deemed sufficient. In perhaps lighter vein, I saw some time ago that New York people were 'paranoid - with reason - about rising crime'. In case anybody really is ignorant on the point, paranoia is a type of mental derangement marked by delusions of grandeur,

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persecution mania and other phenomena into which reason as we know it cannot enter. Some New Yorkers are no doubt uncommonly sensitive and intermittently emotional, but only very few can be truly paranoid in so objective a matter. Very likely sensitive and emotional was all that was meant, but the writer, in search of a more stylish and voguish word, was led via a popularised technicality into overstatement. Paranoia and its derivatives may still not be beyond res- cue, but earlier captures have gone for good. To mind- doctors and the like, mania may still be a type of mental derangement marked by excitement, hallucinations and violence, but to everyone else it denotes nothing more than an affection or admiration for something (bibliomania, anglomania). Less acute conditions are distorted in the course of popularisation, so an inferiority complex ceases to be a state of assertiveness or megalomania (there goes another) to compensate for suppressed feelings of inferiority and becomes merely and irrevocably those feelings them- selves. I suppose we should think ourselves lucky that a maniac can still be a mad person and is not confined to indicating a lovable eccentric.

Owing to/due to

This is a perfect example of what it is an example of: a grammatical distinction that was once clear-cut and perhaps no longer is, but needs to be observed for reasons no longer purely grammatical. Let me explain. Strictly, you may say or write, 'Owing to lack of interest, the carol service has been cancelled,' or equally well, 'The cancellation of the carol service is owing to lack of interest. ' You may also say or write, 'The cancel- lation of the carol service is due to lack of interest,' but not 'Due to lack of interest, the carol service has been cancelled.'

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I have investigated the origins of this rule, and nothing substantial or satisfactory emerges. It seems to be just a rule. Which does not mean that it can safely or praiseworthily be ignored, and I must confess that to my pair of ears or organs of grammatical fitness the exclusion of due to as an introductory phrase is justified. Would you comfortably say or write, 'Due to his swarthy complexion, he escaped the anti-European riots'?' Here, and in general, when in doubt follow the rule. This one is worth following for its own sake, not just in deference to the fact that elderly powerful persons happen to know about it.

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Pairs and snares

This is the heading Fowler gives his characteristically enter- taining article on misleadingly similar pairs of words, simi- lar usually through a common etymology. Here for once I suspect him of having inflated his list a little for show. While his warnings are always to be taken seriously, I feel that no more than four of his fifty or so listed pairs offer anything very perilous in the way of snares. I will try to deal with the surviving four.

I. Alternate and alternative. That would present no problem were it not for a chiefly American use of alternate and alternative in certain contexts, particularly in a science- fictional one. Here an imaginary world in which, say, the Reformation failed to take place and Roman Cath- olicism has become prevalent is likely to be called an alternate world. Simple enough if you keep your head. 2. Compose and comprise. Just to set it out, the various items on a list compose, constitute, make up that list, which is composed of those items; a list comprises, comprehends, includes the items, the list consists of them. Thus wood- wind, brass, percussion and strings compose a full sym- phony orchestra; such an orchestra comprises woodwind, brass, percussion and strings. Worth getting straight. 3. Derisive and derisory. Journalists and others still busily confuse these two. Derisive=scoffing, as in a derisive yell, a yell of derision. Derisory=ridiculous, unworthy of serious

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discussion, as in a derisory offer, a bid so low as to be derisory. Worth getting straight. 4. Masterful and masterly. Also often confused, especially by writing masterful when masterly is clearly intended. Masterful=wilful, domineering; masterly=immensely com- petent, befitting a master. Thus Mozart's operas can be said to be masterly. It seems somehow important to get this straight.

And a couple that have come up since Fowler's time:

5. Baleful and baneful. To write baleful when baneful is clearly intended has become very popular. The two words are easily confused, not only because of their close simi- larity but also because the ideas of pain and destruction are common to both, and both have an archaic/poetical ring to them. But bale = evil, woe, pain, while bane= poison, cause of ruin, thus a baleful glare but a baneful influence. Worth getting straight if possible. 6. Complement{ary} and compliment{ary}. Only a little effort is required to make the right choice here. 7. Discreet and discrete. The second word is newly fashionable and is quite often used instead of the first, perhaps by those who mistake discrete for a classy, up-to-the-minute spelling of discreet. I hope I need not say that in speech it is disCREET but DIScrete.

Panacea

Another once-useful word, whose original meaning was almost exactly universal remedy, cure-all. The prefix pan, meaning all, is well enough known, one would have thought, what with pan-European conferences, Pan-American aircraft, etc., but not everywhere, it seems. Quite recently,

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lazy and incurious writers began, irreversibly as always, to use the word when they meant nothing more than remedy or cure, as was shown by a new-fangled tautology, universal panacea. This forced careful writers to use cure-all when they meant that and cure when they meant that. The reader, in typical fashion, is left to puzzle over just what is meant on encountering panacea.

Parameter(s)

Parameter is a mathematical expression denoting a 'quantity constant in case considered, but varying in different cases' - far too technical and difficult for verbal novelty-hunters and seekers after poshness, who this time only wanted a newish word meaning 'limits', something not too far from perimeters, only different. How important it must have made leaders of this and that feel, to read that on behalf of their membership they had laid down the parameters of discussion. And still in use. I heard it on the radio only yesterday, and I was going to round off this article with a small song of triumph at the disappearance from the media of this repul- sive word.

Parody, satire, comedy, irony, humour, wit

These words have areas of meaning that may overlap, and the words themselves may be intended in differing senses by different speakers. For all that, some agreement is advis- able and may even be discerned here and there. Parody. Best kept as a literary term denoting a piece that sets out to amuse by exaggerating stylistic and other qualities. I know only one such that has no amusing inten- tion to be seen, 'The Hero' by Roger Woddis, which par- odies a poem by Yeats as part of a devastating attack on

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terrorists, specifically those who carried out the Birmingham pub bombings of 21 November 1974. In most cases the purpose is not unkindly, though some critical strictures on the original can be detected in, for instance, C.S. Calverley's parody of Browning, 'The Cock and the Bull'. If used out- side technical limits the term is necessarily vaguer, as when in his poem 'The Donkey' G.K. Chesterton calls the animal 'The devil's walking parody/On all four-footed things'. He might have done better with travesty but for its association with changes of costume. Satire is amusing only incidentally, if at all, and has or used to have a moral intention, to expose vice and folly as a means of correcting them, in theory at least. Again the word is at its most precise in a literary context, referring to the works of the classical writers and Swift or Pope. In recent years almost any old TV show put together in a jeering or mocking or generally 'irreverent' spirit gets called satirical or a satire. The same thing happens to any reason- ably diverting novel that treats of some particular environ- ment, like an advertising agency or a school. In my opinion this is all mistaken. Let Anthony Powell put the point in the course of his remarks on Ronald Firbank. Powell describes 'an inept, not to say fatuous form of contemporary criticism to which Americans are peculiarly subject', and goes on:

This lack of contact derives from an inability to distin- guish between comedy and satire. When a comedian imi- tates a drunk man, he is not miming a tract against alcoholism. He is being funny. Mr Micawber is not a 'satire' against improvident officers of Marines. He is a great comic figure. Thus with Firbank. He was being funny about priests, and - dare one hint it? - about Negroes. [Written in 1970}

Comedy. Here, as already hinted, breadth and some vague-

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ness of definition are called for. In literary terms the word continues to be more often applied to a work for the stage or broadcasting than to novels, though this distinction is being steadily eroded. There are historical connections with the portrayal of ordinary folk rather than grand personages, and in medieval times there was a requirement that the story of a comedy should begin in adversity and end prosper- ously (The Divine Comedy), but over the centuries the spirit of comedy, the comic muse, has come to require little but the intention to divert, to tickle, to cause to laugh. Attempts at a more particular distillate have been unsuccessful, as far as I am aware. Irony. The non-literary use of the word ironical is dealt with under that heading. Almost separably, stylistic irony is well defined in COD as the 'expression of one's meaning by language of opposite or different tendency, esp. simulated adoption of another's point of view', before dramatic or tragic irony is defined as 'words having an inner esp. pro- phetic meaning for audience, unsuspected by speaker'. In the conversational sense, irony has something English about it, or so English critics have felt, but it is no more than one possible weapon among several in the armoury of the comic writer and is associated with no particular literary form. Humour. This is no more definable than poetry, with which it has other affiliations. Humour speaks to the comic sense, whatever that is; one might as well just say it makes people laugh. Something more, perhaps, emerges from a comparison with wit, than which humour can be seen as blunter, broader, kinder, less verbal. To inquire further would be as unprofitable as trying to explain why fairs, the coconut-shy sort, have stayed popular over the centuries. Wit. Like humour, this quality is much more easily recog- nisable when it appears than encompassed by a generalisa- tion. Unlike humour, wit has a characteristic form of expression in the epigram or aphorism and a characteristic

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weapon or technique in the pun or play on words. Bits of it can be extracted and repeated without much loss. Wit needs no context. The word has a possibly misle
ding archaic sense. Applied to a man or woman it means some- body of mental ability, and in saying that great wits were sure to madness near allied Dryden meant chaps of great intelligence, not great after-dinner speakers. Yet an implica- tion of intellectual liveliness remains in the modern use of the word.

Perceive, perception

To perceive something, or that something is so, used to mean simply to take in with the senses or the mind; you would perceive a tree on the horizon or the importance of heredity. The word is almost a synonym for see, except that a degree of effort or special ability is implied. But whatever you perceived was understood to be really there. Then, in the earlier I97os, a new meaning started creep- ing in. From then on what was perceived no longer had to be really there, it might be just the way you saw it, looked at it, saw not in the primary meaning of taking in reality but in the secondary meaning of taking a view of, e.g. I see things differently now. Nowadays journalists write of X's perception of the Labour Party when X might see the Labour Party as anything from a capitalist conspiracy to a gang of communists, while Y's perception might be entirely different and yet equally 'valid'. When Samuel Johnson said to an acquaintance, 'Sir, I perceive you are a vile Whig,' he certainly did not mean to say anything as wishy-washy as that his uneven and temporary view of the chap took him to be some sort of vile Whig; he meant he now knew the other chap was a depraved supporter of parliament rather than crown, etc. As Johnson would have known, the Latin roots of perceive

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indicate that it meant to grasp thoroughly. Latin roots of English words are notoriously often bad guides to meaning, but not seldom, as here, they may remind the user of what the English word once unequivocally meant. This user of perceive and perception will remain at best potential until further notice. The distinction between their traditional and contemporary meanings is quite substantial enough to deter me from ever running the risk of being thus misunderstood. Such is a common result of verbal innovation: instead of anything valuable, it causes either muddle or the departure of a once-useful word.

Pidgin Latin

In origin, French is a creolised Latin pidgin. In less abstruse terms, what we now know and have for centuries known as the French language is a simplified and- corrupt form of Latin once current between Roman troops or colonists or traders on the one hand and the local peasantry on the other, a form of language eventually creolised, i.e. adopted as the one and only language of the locals. Spanish, Proven
al, Catalan and others evolved along similar lines. Like its sister languages, what became French contained at some stage versions of sundry words and constructions and equivalents, some perverted almost out of recognition: who for instance would guess that avec ('with') comes from apud hoc? Somehow Romanised Gauls put together a verb aller ('to go') out of ragged bits of at least three distinct Latin verbs, vadere meaning 'to hurry' (je vais), ambulare 'to walk' (nous allons, cf. English amble) and ire 'to go' (j'irai). One easily imagines dialogues between a scrounging legion- ary, perhaps a Vandal or a Parthian by origin, and a willing but benighted yokel. LEGIONARY (in vile Latin) : I want water. Bring me water. A quam.

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YOKEL: Ugh? L.: Aquam! Say aquam, you bloody fool. Go on - aquam. Y.: O? (To be spelt eau when they get to the writing stage centuries later.) L.: Bring it to the high cliff. The high cliff. Altum. Y.: Ugh? L.: Altum! Say altum, you bumpkin. Go on - altum. Y.: O? (To be spelt haut when, etc.)

Latin left its mark even where the locals did not adopt a pidgin-Latin as their mother tongue. This is especially visible in place-names.

L.: Bring a dozen eggs to the place where the rivers join. C onfluentiam. Y.: Ugh? L.: Confluentiam, you clodhopper. Y.: Coblenz?

So with Pfalz, one syllable from the five of palatinatam. Etc. We in what is now G B are not altogether free of this imputation.

L.: Our chaps are thinking of calling this place Eboracum. Go on, say it, you bog-trotter. Y.: York?

These observations are intended not so much for home consumption as for that of anybody who may be in danger of forgetting that the language of Racine and Voltaire took its first steps not in any perfumed court or candle-lit cloister but in the lee of some rain-soaked dunghill. Should the subject come up, you have my permission to add that, although the lexical effect of Norman French on English was monumental, the structure of the latter is indigenous.

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Pleasantry

A pleasantry is not a kind word or an amiable remark but a playful word or a joke, though often used nowadays to mean a pleasant bit of behaviour. The original sense derives from an archaic sense of pleasant meaning 'jocular, facetious, light-hearted, full of mirth'. When we read in the second book of Samuel that 'Saul and Jonathan were lovely and pleasant in their lives,' we are being told, not just that they were nice-looking and friendly, but something much more interesting and attractive, that their relationship was both affectionate and humorous.

Policy

Some of these entries are justifiable, if at all, chiefly because I had some remark to make and could find no better place to make it. This is one of those, although in its small way it offers an apposite moral. You still hear people say 'Honesty is the best policy,' meaning no more than what the words will now bear, that fair dealing is the best general plan. No doubt, but perhaps not worth elevating to the status of an aphorism. Few can now be aware that what has become a bland near-platitude was once a disrespectful paradox meaning very nearly that honesty is the best trickery, and certainly that fair dealing will get you further than any clever stratagem. But that was when policy could be used to mean underhand behaviour, a sense the OED pronounced obsolete in 1933, its latest citation being dated 1849. It is more widely known that politician started life as a crafty planner or intriguer, a sense first recorded in 1588 and obsolete by the end of the eigh- teenth century. When a piece of accurate cynicism or well-directed spite passes out of currency, something is lost.

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Political words

This is not going to be an essay on such well-known slipperi- nesses as democracy and freedom but a short discourse on politically handy verbs and other expressions that are simi- larly adaptable. They may incidentally offend in philological ways but their primary offence is that they are attempts to gull the reader or hearer, to practise a verbal sleight of hand. What follow are examples only. I. Refute. This word once had the useful meaning of proving falsity or error by argument and/or a recital of facts; it was not a mere synonym of reject or rebut. Then, some time in the 196os, most likely while Harold Wilson was Prime Minister, it began to be used to mean deny, meaning really no more than it had always meant, a mere declaration that something was untrue. And yet, with the old basic sense of the word still hanging about in the public mind, it did sort of mean more than just deny, it implied too that there were or might be facts around that would back up the denial if they were produced. Refute also carried a valuable suggestion of dignity, several cuts above the indignant protestations of a junta that their aims were not tyrannical and far superior to the captured criminal's denial of charges against him. No wonder that an American president said he categorically refuted the accu- sation that he had abused his powers, or that a local auth- ority should refute without satisfactory argument the idea that their proposals were wasteful. The word is now unus- able by any person of intelligence and taste. 2. Sorry, but this is a case too famous to be passed over in a work of the present sort. Unlike refute, hopefully in the sense of 'it is to be hoped (that)' has never been respectable. When someone says or writes, 'Hopefully, the plan will be in operation by the end of the year,' we know immediately that we are dealing with a dimwit at best. The most serious objection to the use of hopefully in a dangling position, often

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signalled by a following comma, is not that it is not good English, though it is not, nor that it is a trendy usage, though it is, nor even that the thing remains obstinately afloat after many well-aimed salvoes of malediction, but that it is dishonest. In the example given, all that is really meant is, 'I/we hope the plan will be in operation by the end of the year,' or still less dishonestly, 'With luck, the plan,' etc., but the type who says or writes hopefully puts on a false show of nearly promising something while actually saying precious little. A favourite with politicians and even more with publishers. 3. Up to. This is admittedly not one word but two; neverthe- less the two function as one. Used together, they behave with characteristic dishonesty. In a sentence like 'The plan will create up to fifty new jobs' an instant's reflection shows that the syntax leaves it open whether perhaps forty-eight new jobs or perhaps four new jobs may 'eventuate'. The reader or hearer is stranded in a condition of foggy opti- mism, half aware that an unspecified number of new jobs may be coming along while nothing has actually been pledged or even said, a highly satisfactory condition for an elector to be in from the point of view of somebody standing for election.

Popular etymology

This means, not a much-liked branch of linguistic science, but the erroneous rephrasing of an unfamiliar expression as one more familiar; folk etymology is another name for the same thing. An early supposed example substituted the odd but non-foreign sparrowgrass for the Latin or Greek aspara- gus. As both food and word grew less unexpected, so spar- rowgrass faded from sight. A more durable instance is afforded by varicose as in veins, meaning dilated in a special way. Hundreds of mostly elderly people are afflicted by

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varicose veins for everyone who has the faintest idea of the history of the term. No wonder popular etymology flourishes here, and the old ladies who suffer, or describe their friends as suffering, from various veins or, less fam- iliarly, from very close veins must be numbered in almost as many hundreds. Or they used to be. A more up-to-date popular etymology is a quick Lorraine, recently offered me as a snack lunch as I got myself ready to dash off some- where. Other notorious cases include Jerusalem artichoke and hic- cough. The artichoke matter is highly learned, showing that not all such etymologies are associated with illiteracy.Jeru- salem in this phrase is a corruption of an ultimately Italian original, girasole or gyrate-sun, sun-follower, sunflower, of which this artichoke is a species with edible roots. Hiccough is all home-grown, an attempt to normalise and domesticate the unEnglish-looking hiccup, earlier hicket, which sounds much more like an actual hiccup than hiccup does. As anyone knows who has had an attack of hiccups, the performance does not in the least resemble a series of coughs, but cough is a decent God-fearing English word with roots in Old English. This desire for a kind of linguistic respectability, the look if not the fact of genuineness, guaranteed the survival of belfry, which started life in the twelfth century as bere/reid, became berfrey and barfrey and then quite abruptly in the fifteenth century turned into belfry, which everyone knows is the abode of bells, and so it has comfort- ably remained ever since. The story of avocado is more remarkable and also exotic (=with foreign origins). Our starting-point is the word ahu- acatl, the Aztec term for the pear-shaped tropical fruit. It takes some finding out, but evidently ahuacatl in non- frugivorous contexts means testicle, not much of a metaphor unless a monorchid scrotum and a pear of the Florida (Gulf of Mexico) rather than the California variety are visualised, and even then. . . Anyway, ahuacatl as it stood would clearly

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not do for the sixteenth-century Spanish invaders of Mexico. The tl termination had to go, as it went in chocolatl and tomatl, and the final answer was rather surprisingly avocado, 'lawyer'. Avocado in its turn would not do at first for the English, who took things through another stage of popular etymology, and until not so long ago one ate an alligator pear, what with the exotic and tropical connotations and the sometimes knobbly skin a good deal more appropriate than anything to do with lawyers. But as we all know, in the end avocado triumphed, helped perhaps by looking foreign on the menu but at the same time being easy to say. Some British eaters call it advocado to this day just to be on the safe side. I have said that there is no necessary link between popular etymology and illiteracy; nevertheless the one flourishes where the other is widespread, and Jamaica is or was a place of high illiteracy and plenty of things with odd or learned names like exotic plants. One of the more outlandish examples is the plant known popularly as simple-bible or single-bible, botanically as supervivium, with of course its first I a long vowel. The tree poinciana, more understandably perhaps, became Fancy Anna. Place-names, or names for topographical features, are especially suitable to popular- etymology treatment. My favourite in all this field is the local name for an unusually deep body of water on the island, the Wag Water. It seems as certain as such things ever are that this name is a corruption of the Spanish agua alta, 'deep water'. How satisfying that the original word for 'water' changes into something quite arbitrary and the word meaning 'high' becomes water. Sound-change comes in here: at the time the 'translation' was made water must have been pronounced not as it is now, something like wawter, but as it still was in the earlier nineteenth century, something like watter, to rhyme with flatter. In 1820 or thereabouts Byron wrote:

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I say, the future is a serious matter: So now - for God's sake, hock and soda-water!

which requires water to be pronounced as described if the rhyme is to be true. If any reader still needs reassurance, let me be quite emphatic that the Romans too had their popular ety- mologies. One of them has given us the English word post- humous, which derives ultimately from classical Latin postumus, meaning 'last', connected with post, meaning 'after', often given to a last-and-no-mistake son, one born after the death of his father. Somebody in the Dark Ages, mindful of the Latin word humus, meaning 'earth' or 'ground' and so no doubt suggesting thoughts of burial, slipped in an H that had no business to be there. Finally, there are false popular etymologies only a few streets away, very common for some reason with the names of pubs. The Elephant and Castle, one of the four London pubs supposed to have given its name to a district, is often said to have been The Infanta of Castile. No; it had a sign showing an elephant with a castle (contemporary term for a howdah) on its back. Then there was The Goat and Com- passes, alias God Encompasseth Us. No comment, except that it sounds a bit unlike the first place you would call at for a reviving glass.

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These expressions are not worth articles to themselves. Men- tioning them here will have to do.

feedback. Has a precise use in mechanics and electronics but is pissily and pretentiously used by psychologists and others to mean nothing more than 'comment' or 'response' (as from a 'patient').

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in-depth. No committee these days would dream of 'funding' a surveyor analysis that was not said to be an in-depth survey etc. A mere deep one draws few dollars. in terms of. A great anytime thought-saver. To be avoided even in correct use, for instance speaking of expressing feet and inches in terms of metres and centimetres. A trustworthy shibboleth, like the arts, in that nobody who uses it in ordinary conversation without some sort of jeer or sneer is to be trusted. ongoing (situation). As above. Anything wrong with present or current? or whatever. Try to avoid this in speech. Never write it. -type. This, as in guerrilla-type war, is a lazy time-saver, but is not actually criminal unless situation follows it, as in Vietnam-type situation.

Popular misspellings

Any fool can misspell, and many do in a sporadic, random, innocent sort of way, but a few words evidently cause wide- spread difficulty, not necessarily for any apparent reason. Even quite good people, for instance, sometimes write super- cede instead of the correct supersede, obviously muddled by the nearby presence of concede, intercede, etc., but why so many, good and bad, should write that something is a great suprise causes me some mild surprise as well as puzzlement. Perhaps pronunciation is a guide: no comparable English word beginning with sur- (or ser- or sir-) swallows its first syllable in that way, and suppose in childish or illiterate speech is often heard and printed as s'pose, though never so spelt. Other popular misspellings, with some possible expla- nations, include:

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accommodate. Is often spelt with only one M. Due to laziness. develop with an extra E stuck on the end. Attraction from envelope. gutteral for guttural. Due to ignorance, plus possibly some unconscious xenophobia. idiosyncracy like a form of government. Confusion with democracy etc. practice/practise. Laziness, plus perhaps some US influence. princiPal/principle. Laziness. seperate instead of separate. I have no idea why. Influence from sever?

Like all good spellers, I have never experienced any real difficulty here. I admit to some slight recent hesitation over instal, instalment and instil. Should the L be doubled? No, only in America. To plead American influence to defend an English mistake is only half a defence. I have not listed all popular misspellings, but there are not many more. Their general paucity is a strong recommen- dation of the English orthographical system. There must be a lot to be said for what comes naturally to nearly everyone nearly all the time.

Power of words

Anyone who doubts the power of words should consider the importance often attached to them by reasonable people. Or such a person might take a look at Ulster, where a few words are busily and effectively fighting on the side of those who want the whole of Ireland to be governed by Dublin. The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is the cumbersome full name of our country, of that part of the world that we are citizens of. Not surprisingly, no convenient collective name for those citizens suggest itself, as for instance Canadians describes citizens of Canada

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or Italians those of Italy. It is for this reason among others that the word British has become the accepted description of our citizens. This works all right most of the time even though it is inaccurate, taking no account of the one and a half million or so who live in Northern Ireland. When British becomes the name for citizens of the UK, when our army becomes known as the British army instead of what it actually is, the army of the UK, injustice is unconsciously done those people and the many among them who serve in our armed forces. No doubt they have grown used to that. What they may not have got used to so readily is not being thought of as citizens of that awkward entity, the United Kingdom. An English friend said to me recently of the Irish prob- lem, 'I think we should get out,' a very popular and pissy view. By 'we' he clearly meant the British, reminding me of an ignorant and admirably clear-cut American slogan, 'England get out of Ireland'. To talk in this strain is only possible for those who have never started thinking. Of course one country should get out of, cease interfering with, another; the trouble is that what is being petitioned for here is not that but the expulsion of part of a country (Northern- Ireland) by that country as a whole (the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland). There are obviously several reasons for the trouble in and about Northern Ireland, but the use of a few words is among the most intractable.

Predictable

The Leader of the Opposition reacted with predictable indignation to an accusation that he was the paid employee of a foreign Power.

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This is a parody, to be sure, but not a very far-fetched one. Every day, people are shown to be reacting in ways so fully predictable that one may wonder what the word is doing in that context. What it is usually doing, of course, apart from lending tone, is subtly suggesting that (a) the com- mentator is too intelligent and well informed ever to be surprised by anything, and (b) the bit of conduct mentioned was insincere, perhaps even rehearsed in advance. All this is a substantial return for a small outlay, cheap at the price, so cheap indeed that the word might be given a rest.

Preposition at end of sentence

This is one of those fancied prohibitions (compare SPLIT INFINITIVE) dear to ignorant snobs. In this case they should be disregarded, and they mostly are, though the occasional stylistic derangement may suggest that a writer here and there still feels its force. It is natural and harmless in English to use a preposition to end a sentence with. As Fowler famously observed, 'The power of saying . . . People worth talking to instead of People with whom it is worth u,hile to talk is not one to be lightly surrendered.' This time idiom and common sense have triumphed over obscurantism.

Pristine

This is not a new word meaning 'spotlessly clean' but an old word (first recorded 1534) meaning 'original, ancient, primi- tive'. I suppose there is enough overlap of the two meanings, via references like 'a shirt restored to its pristine splendour', to explain something of how the old word was taken up as an attractive novelty. Usable by those who like attractive novel- ties even when they only seem to be novelties.

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Pronunciation and accent

These are twO ways of describing how we speak. My attempt to differentiate them here is meant not as the drawing of a sharp or final distinction but just a matter of convenience. So somebody may speak in a way that strikes his hearers as markedly individual, but for all that everyone's accent is a general thing that depends roughly on a speaker's place of birth, upbringing, education and subsequent environment, whereas pronunciation is a question of how individual words are spoken. Therefore it may make sense to talk of an Ameri- can accent or a Suffolk accent or a public-school accent, and even to think of one as 'better' or 'worse' than another overall, but one pronunciation of a given word will be considered 'correct' and another 'incorrect'. It has become respectable to say so only in the quite recent past. See RECEIVED PRONUNCIATION. For practical purposes, an accent is chiefly a matter of how vowels and suchlike are said, an obvious example being the 'Northern' or 'North-country' U in words like bug and bud; pronunciation often concerns the stressing in a given word, so that the correct way to pronounce formidable is with the stress on the first syllable and to put it anywhere else is incorrect.

Pronunciation as it now is

It may be deplorable, or at least seem old-fashioned to some, to talk of correct and incorrect pronunciation, but surely most of those who refer to or otherwise read a treatise on our language are looking for guidance rather than mere description, not least in the present category. They want to be told not what their neighbours or the educated or the half-educated or the vulgar or scholars say or avoid, but what they themselves should and should not say, what is

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correct and what incorrect. In 1926, Fowler found it suf- ficiently easy to instruct readers of Modern English Usage that:

While we are entitled to display a certain fastidious pre- cision in our saying of words that only the educated use, we deserve not praise but censure if we decline to accept the popular pronunciation of popular words ... Pro- nounce as your neighbours do, not better. For words in general use, your neighbour is the general public.

That view could only have been advanced when the division between educated pronunciation and popular pronunciation was more rigid than it is today, and perhaps by somebody whose neighbours lived next door in a college quadrangle rather than in a housing estate. Further, the imagined spec- tacle of Fowler in his talk nimbly leaping across that div- ision, and a moment later as nimbly back again, causes me some uneasiness. I am not quite saying that in the passage quoted his chief intention was to vindicate his usual approach to linguistic problems. He was certainly doing more there than justifying his inclination to run with the liberal hare and hunt with the conservative hounds, but he was doing that. Today, too, Fowler might have had to recognise that the 'general public' often use words that in his time only the educated would have used, and more importantly that that 1990S general public no longer learn their pronunciation chiefly from the practice of their elders and contemporaries but from other sources. The most important of these other sources is broadcasting, in a wide sense of that term. I intend not only what reaches us by television and sound radio, though it is predominant, but also film, the stage and various analogues and derivatives.

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Pronunciation as they broadcast it

Young broadcasting performers, prominent performers, regular performers exercise a powerful influence on how the rest of us speak, an influence more immediate than that of courtiers, ecclesiastics, academics or any other dominant group of the past. Modern broadcasters do not of course speak with one voice, but by listening to them it is an easy matter to form an image of how the pronunciation of our language may be changing, perhaps irreversibly. When one of us today hears a recording or sound-track of speech from before the last war, it sounds old-fashioned in several ways that have nothing to do with reproduction systems. In particular, the pronunciation of several easily differentiated vowel-sounds seems not to be as it was. To particularise further, the pronunciation of what used to be the short A (as in bat), the short E (as in bet) and the long vowel or diphthong AR or AIR (as in bare) is changing to something different, as follows:

i) The sound of short A is now close to what used to be short V (as in but). A broadcaster now seems to talk about 'the impuct of blucks' attucks on other blucks' in parts of Africa. ii) The sound of short E is now close to what used to be short A. A broadcaster now seems to talk about 'lass attantion in the Prass' paid to something-or-other. iii) The sound of AIR is also not what it used to be, but the change is more difficult to pin down without recourse to phonetic symbols. Here goes anyway. Ifin pre-war times a speaker talked about air or bare, the diphthong used consisted of an E-sound blended into a V-sound or something close to it. If a modern broadcaster talks about air or bare, she (see next section) uses a pure or near-pure A-sound of longer duration than the vowel once generally heard in words like bat. Try saying bat

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slowly without the final T and you may well produce a sound very like the trendy pronunciation of bare.

Anybody who finds parts of the foregoing abstruse can at once recognise what I mean by turning on the wireless, now often known under American influence as the radio. As I write (in 1994), as good an example as any is the speech of Classic FM, or Clussic Aff-Am in its own manner of speaking. Further pronunciation-trends to be found there and elsewhere include saying -sheer for -shire in names of counties (Northamptonsheer for old -shuh) and a colouring of an E-vowel in short V-sounds (sebmarine, hennyseckle). This latter sound was once current among would-be posh speakers from the north-east of England, but shows recent signs of settling down as part of the generic sub-standard RP to be heard among radio news-readers. Another shibbo- leth is provided by the pronunciation of one more or less as wan (rhyming with don) in Northern fashion. There are further examples of the influence of broadcasting and broad- casters.

Pronunciation: he-she

For an essentially modern broadcaster (see last section) I would prefer to read she chiefly because the new sounds were first heard in public from young women, especially actresses of the I94os, who perhaps felt that the old sounds helped to create a vaguely superior, scolding, finicky effect out of place in the then new Britain. See Language Made Plain, by A
thony Burgess, who was among the first to notice the new sounds. To this pair of ears, the old sounds do indeed seem a bit finicky, etc., in comparison, but at least they never seem gushing or girlish.

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Pronunciation in general

Spelling-pronunciation, the tendency to allow or encourage the way a word is spelt to influence the way it is spoken, must be as old as the first attempts to commit speech-sounds to paper. In English at least it is traceably very old. Evidence from such sources as diaries and personal letters suggests that, as always, men and women in the past spoke less carefully and correctly in ordinary domestic dealings than on formal occasions. Their practice in putting words on paper was, as might be expected, generally similar. So when we read, in a letter between friends, lie sen you an unnerd pOlin, we can guess that this closely follows the sounds of actual informal talk, though we can be pretty sure too that the sounds of formal, best-behaviour discourse would be more closely represented by, I'll send you a hundred pounds. Not very sure, however. If I may digress for a moment, the way we now say hundred might well be the result of a modern spelling-pronunciation, an opinion supported by such evidence as the words blundered, thundered and wondered offered as rhymes to hundred by the educated and fastidious Tennyson ('The Charge of the Light Brigade', 1854) and by the fact that older rustic speakers said something like hunnerd within living memory. Perhaps some still do. I will add here that the dropping of the final D in vocables like sen and poun is paralleled by the occurrence in pre-war blues lyrics of forms like han for hand and mine for mind. Spelling-pronunciation (to resume) was greatly boosted by the educational reforms of the nineteenth century, which made it socially more difficult to speak like an illiterate person. So the traditional weskit was firmly pushed out by waistcoat, the monosyllabic fords yielded to the dissyllable towards (though not in America), perhaps replaced the juven- ile praps and the likely adult version per'aps, and the H began to be sounded as never before in words like hotel and humour. I conjecture too that during this period words hard

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to pronounce 'properly', like secretary and recognise, lost their old pronunciations of seckatry or seckaterry and reckanise except among the 'lazy', the 'vulgar' and the 'uneducated'. VVhat aboutda
iau? The post-1945 educational 'reforms' (inverted commas denoting sarcasm are hard to avoid in the present context) made people more anxious than ever before to show that they were literate, i.e. able to read. Spelling-pronunciation entered its heyday and what had perhaps been heard only now and then became general and normal. In 1926 Fowler could cover the subject in less than a column. He recommended that 'no effort should be made to sound the T in the large classes of words ending in -sten . . . and -stle. . . , nor in often, soften, ostl

, nestling, waistcoat [of CQURSE},postpone [less expected}. But some good people,' he continued with a show of leniency, 'afraid they may be suspected of not knowing how to spell, say the t in self- defence.' He might have added chestnut and Christmas to his list. Fowler also went on to give a handful of samples of the many words 'whose spelling and ordinary pronunciation do not correspond, but with which mistaken attempts are made to restore the supposed true sound'. His first two samples are clothes and forehead, and I admit that I should rather like to be able to say close but from fear of being misunderstood do not dare, and that I unconsciously said forrid until the sincere incomprehension of a lecture-class in the 1950S brought me round to fawhed and to hell with Longfellow's little girl. (But see below.) So it goes with linguistic change: the aim of language is to ensure that the speaker is under- stood, and all ideas of correctness or authenticity must be subordinate to it. One's readiness to embrace the last belief may suffer some weakening when the question turns to another pronunci- ational phenomenon, what might be called the intrusive H. 'In Hunt has hurt his head,' says Fowler, 'it is nearly as bad

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to sound the h of has and his as not to sound that of Hunt and hurt and head.' Seventy years after ME U , some observers might want to amend this to read, in part, 'far worse . . . than'. To pronounce those five words with no Hs at all is a mere piece of illiteracy or vulgarity, venial offences com- pared with the vices inherent in pronouncing all five Hs. The 5-H version may be judged slightly superior in point of intelligibility, but not by nearly enough to balance its appalling affectation and pedantry, indeed vulgarity of a less appealing sort than that of any zero-H version. And yet, allover the kingdom, real people, not just actors and actresses, are saying, 'His tie suits him' and 'Her dress fits her' simply to show their hearers that they know an H when they see one. The old usage was that in ordinary talk little words like has and his and her and he had their Hs sounded only to mark emphasis: 'he's gone [but she's still here}' as against 'e's gone [without leaving an address)' - so went the rule, none the less a rule for going unmentioned, being taken for granted, and like many rules of language easier to understand than to explain. 'For a particular affectedly refined pronunciation,' writes Fowler, 'see GIRL.' It may be disappointing to some that, when they duly see GIRL, they find only a short note on how to and how not to pronounce that word, so that it 'rhymes with curl, whirl and pearl, with the first syllable of early, not of fairly . . .' Here I can wheel forward my Long- fellow quatrain, which runs:

There was a little girl and she had a little curl Right in the middle of her forehead, And when she was good she was very very good, but when she was bad she was horrid.

Nothing wrong with that, though unfortunately Fowler goes on, 'But a pronunciation gairl, not very easily dis- tinguished from gal, is much affected by persons who aim

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at pecular refinement,' etc. Experience shows the danger of assuming that Fowler was ever unaware of anything, and perhaps the date is wrong for his apparent unawareness that the gal pronunciation is American rather than British, as in Somebody Stole My Gal et passim. And in any case the pronunciation he means to censure is surely gel, not gal, as in the speech of many born later than Fowler (b. r858), and he also seems unaware of evidence that gurl was once a spelling-pronunciation, as in Max Beerbohm's caption to his caricature of Kipling (r896). But this is another digression. Even at his best and most prophetic, one of Fowler's generation could never have foreseen the extent to which spelling-pronunciation, through the medium of a then undeveloped technology, would come to dominate our speech-habits. Except when delivering a news bulletin or the like, a broadcaster is not speaking in public in any close sense, but such a person must nevertheless be aware that untold thousands of people are or may be listening and anyway has some sort of duty to be (i) clearly heard and (ii) understood by as many listeners as possible whatever their own speech-habits. Once upon a time RP took care of any stragglers, but the world has moved on since then. It is no wonder if the result is a more precisely articulated mode of utterance than ordinary talk, a clarity of enunciation that will involve giving every syllable something like the value it has on the page, in fact liable to pronounce words as they are spelt. And several sorts of pressures will make it hard not to follow that example in one's own speech. One obvious place to look for examples is in the pronunci- ation of those proper names which traditionally were not spoken as spelt. Among those no longer pronounced tra- ditionally are Blount (formerly Blunt), Bohun (Boon), Ciren- cester (Sissiter), Coke (Cook), Daventry (Vaintry), Hepburn (Hebbun), Ker and Kerr (Kar), Marylebone (Maribun), Ponte- fract (Pumfrit), St John (Sinjun), Waldegrave (Wargrave) and

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Woburn (Woobun). It is probably tcue that a righteously egalitarian, who-does-he-think-he-is (to call himself Chum- ley when he spells his name Cholmondeley) spirit is also at work here. These days we are pestered by something far more various, widespread and noticeable. The change is in the direction of pronouncing unstressed syllables with their full value, especially though not exclusively in unfamiliar or new words - I write 'in the difection of' because this is a tendency not yet completed. For instance, when I was young there was a contraceptive thing called a condom, pronounced cond'm; now, the evidently same thing is a con-dom, with a fully rounded second syllable. A year or two earlier I had been fond of a sweetmeat called a caramel, pronounced like camel with a brief extra syllable in the middle; it's a caramell now. As a sterling moderniser of Fowler's original has noted, fortune and picture, which used to be pronounced forchoon and Pickcher, are now said as they are spelt, and regiment and medicine are usually spoken as trisyllables. My and your used to be fully pronounced only when emphatic, as in 'Well, it's not my hat (, it must be yours).' Otherwise, it was muh or m' as in m'lud, m'tutor: 'I've left m'hat behind.' Now we get the full treatment every time. Proper names cop it too. There was a boy at school called Ballard, pronounced like ballad, rhyming with salad, by one of the masters, an elderly chap born probably in the 187os. The boy himself called it Ballahd, like the rest of us, and of course the eminent writer of today is universally known as J.G. Ballahd, and jolly good luck to him. Also in those early years of mine there was a composer called Edward Elgar, second syllable like that of sugar; fOf a long time now the man has been Elgah. Well, unless his name gets its full value every time we might not all understand that it was he who wrote the Introduction and Allegro for string quartet and string orchestra. Foreign or foreign- looking names suffer from being sort of Europeanised, so we

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hear about the oratorio Judas Maccabayus and the overture Layonora no. 3, say. The tendency to pedantically accurate pronunciation has been reinforced by the employment of broadcasters born outside the traditional RP area of south-eastern England. West-country speakers, like Irish and most Americans, were brought up to pronounce the R in words like bard and bird, north-country ones to give full value to words like consider and perceive. Such habits provide some of the hearable evi- dence of an inclination to speak in a way perceptibly differ- ent from oldsters and snobs. And anybody who feels that the old speech-habits are too firmly entrenched should take discomfort from my having heard, three or four times recently, one or other broadcaster pronounce the words says and said as saize and sehd, to rhyme with stays and staid. Most things are never meant, as Philip Larkin wrote, and we all know that a thing does not have to be meant by anyone in order to happen. Fowler is a marvellous writer with among other gifts an inquisitive and accurate ear for speech-sounds, but in one regard he had it easier than his successors. The contents of a printed page will last at least as long as that page; a spoken enormity comes and goes in a flash without record. But perhaps I am alone in feeling we have among us a small and not very dangerous monster that is nevertheless hard to keep in check. I am less likely to be alone in thinking that educated people mispronounce words more than they used to. On the whole, it seems that positive guidance or direction of broadcasters' speech is attempted in only a few cases, of which -sheer for -shire is presumably one. Others include the saying of 'one hundred' in full every time that quantity is mentioned, occasionally producing mini-nonsenses like 'a one hundred times over', and a more mysterious ruling that calls for an interval before penultimate or antepenultimate and. This quite often produces less trifling nonsenses like

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'showers in midland (voice falls and a brief pause follows, as at the end of a sentence) And northern districts'. But these are easily detectable, and nothing more detailed or outrageous is to be heard, so for instance we are spared attempts to make six syllables of extraordinary or pronounce England, English, etc., according to the spelling. I end this section with a brief polemic on the spread of the glottal stop. This is a kind of consonant or consonant- substitute that may take some explaining to the uninitiated. The linguistician Leonard Bloomfield defines it as a slight catch in the throat; a speaker of German uses it before every word that begins with a vowel, as before the second and third word in Deutschland uber alles; in old-fashioned cockney and Glaswegian speech it comes in the middle of words like letter (le'er) and button (bu'on), generally doing duty for medial double T; it is a small puff of breath from the top of the windpipe. There. I first heard the glottal stop in standard English speech in 1946, though it can be traced back to American broad- casting in the 1930s. The greater historical closeness to German of American speech compared with British is per- haps relevant here and helps to justify my mention of Deutschland uber alles. The glottal stop would have recom- mended itself to some speakers as a handy way of escaping the temptation of an intrusive R in phrases like law and order. Whatever the exact reason or reasons, the new conso- nant-substitute soon spread allover the place among broad- casters and others. It was apt to pop up before any initial vowel anywhere, so that people started speaking not of the I R A, but of the '[ 'R 'A with a glottal stop before each letter. I have even heard it used in the middle of a word, like/ore 'arm, and, once, QueenJuli 'ana of the Netherlands. 'Our Father, which 'art in heaven . . . for 'ever and 'ever,

, amen. I object to this shopworn novelty in the first place as a German noise, while lawr and order, however unpleasant to

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some ears, is a British noise. More reasonably, perhaps, unnecessary glott
l stopping seems an example of headlong pedantry, especially when associated, as it so often is, with affectations like sounding all one's Hs regardless of empha- sis. English managed without such trumpery for hundreds of years. May it go on doing so.

Protagonist

In its time, this word has meant or been made or taken to mean at least four different things: the one and only chief actor in a stage production, the one and only central figure in a political or other awkward situation, one among several figures in an awkward situation, and the proponent or cham- pion of a particular cause or view. The battle to determine the true or accepted meaning of the word was first joined perhaps a century ago and probably still rages in scattered common-rooms and libraries. My advice is never to say or write protagonist yourself, thereby avoiding any possible misunderstanding or obloquy on the point. If you mean a central figure, say central figure, if you mean a proponent or champion, say proponent or cham- pion. To abandon what was once a perfectly good, unambigu- ous word is no doubt to concede a small defeat, but life is short.

Psychotic

It is all right to say many things in conversation, including a lot of exaggerated and intemperate things. Thus to say she literally drives me mad is all right, but to put it on paper, to have it published is not, unless you mean mad literally and literally literally as well. Psychotic is one of the words you may say and welcome, but write only after due deliber-

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ation. The word psychotic, in print, means suffering from a severe mental derangement involving the whole personality, so of course you only write it if you are prepared to stand by it. It would have been unnecessary to sound such a warning if it were not for the increasing influence of television and radio, which blur the distinction between the spoken and the written word. Broadcasting encourages people to say in talk what they would very likely not write and so only fleetingly and partially mean, but may nevertheless be faith- fully preserved and if thought to be damaging to another may legally be quotable in an action not for slander but for libel. Not any longer is a word no sooner spoken than lost.

Puns

Fowler writes:

The assumption that puns are per se contemptible, betrayed by the habit of describing every pun not as a pun, but as a bad pun or a feeble pun, is a sign at once of sheepish docility and desire to seem superior. Puns are good, bad, and indifferent, and only those who lack the wit to make them are unaware of the fact.

One would not want to alter a word of that, except possibly to replace sheepish with sheeplike. A codicil might be added, however, along the lines of there being places like newspaper headlines where puns may be thought to cluster too thick. See HEADLINE ENGLISH.

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No problem here, one might have thought, and certainly there is none while writers can tell the difference between a direct question (e.g. Who are you?) and an indirect question (e.g. Ask him who he is or Tell me who he is). Direct questions are followed by a question mark; indirect questions are not. Nothing easier, one would have thought. Alas, if one did one would have been wrong. Plenty of direct questions are regularly ended with a full stop on the correspondence pages of newspapers. The writer kicks off by asking, May I crave the hosPitality of your columns in order to right some piffling injustice or other, and by the time he has got to the end of his first dose of verbal Mogadon he has succumbed to it himself or simply forgot- ten how he started; anyway, he ends it with a full stop. To do so not only sends the interested reader, if there is one, back to the start to check that the fellow did at any rate start to ask a direct question, it also carries the disagreeable and perhaps truthful suggestion that the writer thinks a request from the likes of him is probably a needless polite- ness to the likes of the editor. Even quite short direct questions are liable to be left without a question-mark if they are information questions (e.g. What's on telly?) as opposed to yes-or-no questions (e.g. Anything good on telly?). The oral link remains strong even when the writer never so much as subvocalises what he writes, and what he writes is apt to be, say, When did you

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last change your car full stop; he has 'heard' the speaking voice dip a little at the end of asking that information question, like somebody making a statement, and he knows well enough that statements are followed by full stops. (If his question is a yes-or-no question, with the voice 'heard' to lift at the end, he will put in a question-mark and write, say, Would you like a new car free?) Question-marks are sometimes mistakenly put at the end of indirect questions if the writer feels specially interrogative and wants to remind his reader that the question he asks deserves an answer, or perhaps he is just carried away by herd-instinct. So he writes, I wonder how many lunatics are actually living in the community? and feels a sense of duty done. Nine times out of ten a sentence that opens with I wonder ends with an unwarranted question-mark. In colloquial prose, or in dialogue where a speaker's tones and inBections may be more or less closely reproduced, these rules can be relaxed.

Quixotic

This misuse is uncommon, but it attracts attention by its very singularity. Traditionally, and still usually, quixotic means 'like Don Quixote in Cervantes' novel, i.e. character- ised by lofty but impracticable ideals, indifferent to material advancement in comparison with honour and truth.' I can- not discover what has made the word sometimes seem to mean 'eccentric, freakish, disordered', as for instance in a description of an outre artistic style (in the works of an excellent but admittedly careless English novelist) and applied to a dipsomaniacal writer in an outstanding Ameri- can film of the I94os. The overlap between the two senses is small.

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Received pronunciation

(The American expression is Received Standard.) The Received Pronunciation, often labelled simply RP, is or was not so distant from the so-called Oxford accent or public- school accent or, rather anachronistically, BBC English. The term accent is probably more accurate than pronunciation for a way of speaking in general. In the last few years, the expression has become too broad to be very useful. The COD (7th edn., 1982) mentions 'local variations', when surely one great thing about the old RP was that it was exactly the same at Land's End as at John 0' Groats, not to mention Singapore, and famous for being widely intelligible. It was well defined by a gram- marian in 1990 as 'a social accent associated with the upper end of the social-class continuum'. Young speakers of it are becoming rarer than they once were.

Recipe, receipt

The use of receipt where most people would use reciPe con- tinues to this day and is indefensible. It introduces a profit- less ambiguity into a stable situation in which, as everybody knows, reciPe stands for the formula for producing a particu- lar dish or drink and receiPt for an acknowledgement of a remittance etc. Receipt for reciPe would count as an example of didacticism if anything of conceivable benefit or interest

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Recourse

were being imparted. To use it today is the merest affecta- tion, and if any user mutters it was good enough for her grandmother, ask her if she feels the same about the dentis- try her grandmother got, if any, and tell her that such an attitude, if generally adopted, would be a receipt for disaster.

Recourse

This apparently indispensable word is often muddled up with resort and resource, which both seem to be rather better known. The three all have senses that overlap. Now: recourse means 'a likely means of help', and to have recourse to means to 'make use of something (or somebody) as help', so you have recourse to violence or bribery (or good old Jack) to get you out of trouble. In the relevant senses resort to means much the same thing, with the attractive availability of the set phrase last resort, last recourse not being a phrase at all. A resource is something valuable you already have in your possession and the word is often used in the plural, so your resources include a large bank-balance and those of America include a stock of natural helium. Resource also means 'contrivance, stratagem, device', here approach- ing an overlap with recourse. That is about the best I can do. My advice is to keep resort, especially last resort, keep resources in plural use, and think about ditching recourse altogether. If you find yourself using any of the three, read the whole paragraph through carefully before you publish it. But then you ought to be doing that already, as a matter of routine.

Relevant

This is an example of a former vogue-word that has now become a battered ornament. In a sense, one mourns the passing of a vogue-word as that of a wanker-indicator, but

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relevant was harmful too. Relevant subjects or settings or attitudes or theories are not more blessed than the irrelevant sort, and in some fields irrelevance or apparent irrelevance can be a virtue. There is not much to be said for the kind of person who recommends a children's tale or book for its supposed relevance to the child's experience. What has moved into the former relevant sector is more vogue-words like insightful, innovative and ground-breaking, as in a ground-breaking approach. The third of these is perhaps better considered as a piece of jargon of the hard-to- fathom denomination. Indeed, one or another kind of fortu- nate coincidence would have been needed to let the outsider know that what is meant is not a ground-breaking approach, whatever that might be, but an approach to a subject or author that supposedly breaks new ground. No doubt it was felt that a new-ground-breaking approach was too advanced an expression for ordinary prose. But the occur- rence of any two of this depressing trio (insightful, innovative, ground-breaking) in an article or review is enough to mark its author as a trend-hound of the most committed sort.

Renaissance

I used to be a great one for using the sturdily English form of this word, renascence, before I realised how pissily eccentric and difficult it sounded in conversation. Whatever you may write, you are much more likely to be understood if you say renaissance, the last syllable rhyming with ponts or ponce. In the same sort of way I used to try to say restaurant like an English word with no final vowel to speak of. Not any more. Restaront or restront is the spoken English name of the thing.

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Residual pronunciations

This catalogue 1'\lostly includes pronunciations that seemed to me not worth an individual note, though it also contains some remarks on allied topics. It does not set out to be complete in any way; in particular, it excludes most personal and place names, and anyone in search of guidance here is referred to the B B C ' s pronunciation guides.

abhor. AbHOR with the H sounded. acoustic. A-COOstic. (Not aCOWstic.) alas. A-LAHSS. (Not aLASS). always. AWLwaize is a spelling-pronunciation and AWL- whizz is the thing to say if you can manage it. I never really can, having spent most of my life saying ALLwaize instead. My difficulty is not in remembering to say AWL- whizz so much as feeling like a fool or Lord David Cecil when I say it. analogous. With the G hard as in get. Andrea, Andreas, Anthea. I stress all these names on the second syllable, having noticed that those who stress the first one are usually berks. azure. I try to avoid this word completely, at any rate in talk, where EHzhur is undoubtedly the thing to say except that nobody will understand me if I say it. banal. BuhNAHL. But best avoided completely. bastard. BAHst'd as term of abuse, of course. The pronunci- ation BASSt'd is correct for somebody born out of wedlock but the word is too funny for ordinary talk. beautiful. To pronounce the middle syllable with a full short I is pedantic and also non-V. BYOOtuhful is recom- mended. berserk. Best avoided completely. Nobody can give the right pronunciation (stress on first syllable) with a straight face. Bourbon, bourbon. Meaning a member of that dynastic family prone BOORbon. Meaning a kind of chocolate biscuit,

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BA Wb'n. Meaning a kind of whiskey made from (Indian) corn or maize, BURb'n (from Bourbon County in Ken- tucky, where first made). Byzantine. There is a wide choice here. I would use, if I had to use something, bighZANtighn. cadre. When I was a cadet in the City of London School OTC in the I930S, this word, meaning the permanent establishment of a training unit like that of one of the Guards regiments, was pronounced CA Y der, but no doubt this has lapsed. Caernarvon. CuhNARv'n. casual. Only a wanker makes three syllables of this word. Cecil. As most non-U speakers will show they know, this name is pronounced as if spelt Sissie. Indeed an American of that very name ran a successful jazz band in the 1930S and called it Noble Sissie's Swingsters (featuring Sidney Bechet). Clwyd. Rhymes with druid. controversy. A well-known trap. Stress on first syllable only, without a secondary stress on the third. Only a berk stresses the second. cucumber. The name of this plant and its fruit was sometimes pronounced as cowcumber by Victorian wits, it seems. More recently, cowcumber was a name for a type of wild rhododen- dron in the southern states of the USA, though by now probably an archaism as well as a rusticism. Cwmbran. CoomBRAN. First syllable like cook, not doom. data. DEHta, not DAHta. De'Ath. There was a boy at my school so surnamed. He pronounced the name Dih-ATH with a short A. He also had a great many brothers. dilemma. Pronounce dighLEMMa to remind yourself and perhaps others that the word means, not just a difficulty, but a choice between two unpleasant alternatives. Doreen. I have known only one person who used this fore- name. She called it D'REEN and was nice enough, but my

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pronunciation-vote would go to DA W reen. Cf. Maureen. Dyfed. DUVV -ide either. I say EYEthuh and you perhaps say EEthuh. Person- ally speaking, I find the latter a trifle underbred. envelope. Fully an English word, so pronounce the first syl- lable EN. fellow. In ordinary conversation, when 'chap' is meant pro- nounce FELLa. In any other meaning, especially an aca- demic one, FELLoh. formidable. Another well-known trap. Only a berk stresses the second syllable. I am not sure what name to attach to the Irish lady who said of some elder French lady that she was rather formidable, giving the word something like its French pronunciation as if under the impression that French formidable meant formidable. Genoa. For the Italian city, stress first syllable. For the type of cake presumably first made there, rich, with almonds on top, stress second. Cf. Seville. government. In ordinary talk, two syllables only, GUVm'nt. graph. Pronounce to rhyme with gaff. Gwynedd. GWINNedh, GWINNuhth, etc. handkerchief. Best to say HANGkuhchiff, plural HANG- kuhchiffs. Hertford. Town and college are pronounced HAHf'd. But HAR Tf' dshuh. interesting. A word to be careful of. Avoid such remarks in conversation as 'That's interesting,' which implies clearly that what has gone before was and is uninteresting. This may well be true but tactless to convey aloud. Anyway, make it a trisyllable, INtruh-sting. A quadrisyllabic spell- ing-pronunciation is offensive. invalid. To mean 'sick person', pronounce INvuhlid. Avoid INvuhleed when I am in earshot. issue. The pronunciation of this word is perhaps the only point on which I agree with Tony Benn. It is ISHoo, and to say ISSyoo is a piece of pressi-OSSity. So with tissue.

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Kabul, the capital of Afghanistan. Properly pronounced to rhyme with bauble, although when I have to refer to the place, which is seldom, I find I prefer to call it the capital (of Afghanistan). Keynes. It is Maynard K.A YNZ the economist and Milton KEENZ the place. Llanelly or Llanelli, Dyfed. If you must, unlike most of the Welsh, attempt a Welsh pronunciation, at least pronounce the first LL as English L. LuhNETHlih will do very well. Majorca. The English name, pronounced as an English word. Avoid would-be Spanish - or Mallorquin - noises like Migh-ORca. Marie. Pronunciation chaotic. Best ask the name-bearer how she pronounces it. Old-fashioned English Marie was MAHrih. Maureen. Proceed as with Doreen. Menzies. Pronounce like an English name unless the bearer is a white-haired Scot, in which case he will tell you. miniature. Three syllables, MINNy-chuh. necessarily. Stress on first or third syllable, but avoid nessaSAIRil1 y . Newfoundland. The old pronunciation with stressed first syl- lable is becoming archaic and incomprehensible, so if in doubt stress the second. ominous. Undoubtedly descended from omen, and English omen is undoubtedly pronounced OHmen, but for all that ominous is pronounced OMMinus, whatever Latinists may say. pariah. PuhRIGHa. parliament. Three syllables only: P ARlam' nt. pejorative. Stress on first syllable, like PEE. peremptory. Stress on first syllable. poetry. PWETryand POYtry are devilish noises. Make three syllables of it. Powys. POH-iss. privacy. PRIVVacy with short I, or PRIGHvacy with long?

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Either is correct. My own vote is for the second as more intelligible in talk. Puerto Rico. The first element is pronounced POR Toh. quasi. Many possibilities. I go for KWEHsigh as more intel- ligible than some. Ralph. I realise that in a way I should say Rafe to rhyme with safe, but find I can only happily say Ralf. Like most people. resPite. I pronounce this RESSpit with a short I in the second syllable, unlike the long vowel of COD and other diction- aries. It is clearly unRESSpittid in Belial's famous Paradise Lost speech. reveille. Stress second syllable and rhyme with pally. REVValy nearly rhyming with Beverley in US. romance. RuhMANTS, not ROHmantss. Sarah. Traditionally SAIRa. But sometimes called SAHra now, as Clara is sometimes CLAHra. Some bearers of these names are not clear whether their name is Hebrew or Italian or English. Try asking them how they say it them- selves. scallop, scollop. Always write scallop and pronounce SKOLLop. Seville. For the Spanish city, stress second syllable. For the type of bitter orange and the marmalade made with it, stress first. Cf. Genoa. Smyth, Smythe. If in doubt, say Smith. They are mere variant spellings. Southey. Robert Southey the Lake poet IS pronounced SOWDHy, not SUDHy. status quo. First element STAYtus. stern. V ocalise the term for the back of a ship like the adjective meaning 'grim'. The pronunciation starn is not listed in COD and is now archaic. It was never more than a dialectal variant. Swansea. SWONzy. Nothing to do with swans or sea. temporarily. Make three syllables of it: TEMPraly. Theobalds Road. Once TIBBalds. Now as spelt.

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tissue. TISHoo, not TISSyou. Cf. issue. tryst. Archaic word, pronounced TRISST or TRIGHSST. turquoise. Treat as an English word and pronounce TURK woyze. (Madam) Tussaud's. (Madam) TOOSSohs. TuhSAWDS is admirable but old-fashioned. victuals, victualler. VITT'ls, VITler to rhyme with Hitler. Westminster. WESSminster. Wodehouse as in P.G. As Woodhouse, not Woadhouse. zebra. COD gives ZEBBra and ZEEbra. I pick the first. Personally speaking, I find the other a trifle underbred.

Respectively

This serviceable word is sometimes used unnecessarily. When we read that 'the editors respectively of the magazines Flick and Flock have announced' something, respectively tells us that both editors do not edit both magazines, and this might be helpful. But when we read that 'the presidents respectively of Puerto Povre and San Jaime have declared' something, respectively tells us only that the two places have a president each and do not share a duumvirate, which most of us could have worked out for ourselves. The lure of respectively lies in the impression of careful solemnity it gives, its posh, classical air and its four syllables. The writer of a sentence with respectively in it should always check to make sure the word is needed.

Restaurateur

Meaning the proprietor of a restaurant, and so spelt, not as restauranteur, I say in the entry on French expressions. The sign restaurant on a building or room means that restoring, or restoration, of what W ode house calls the vital tissues,

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by means of food and drink, is available there. Similarly, cafe originally meant that coffee was to be had there, un dancing was a hall that offered a band and a dance-floor, and un camping is a site where camping is encouraged. Restauranteur is impossible in French and a pretentious illiteracy in English. But the entry in the latest Roger's Thesaurus has the intrusive N and anecdotal and aural evi- dence suggests that, as often, the illiteracy will shortly replace and render obsolete the true form, in English at least.

Rhythm

This is not the easiest of subjects. The seeker after advice on what rhythm in prose actually is, and how to achieve a kind of prose displaying it to advantage, is not likely to find an answer quickly. One is sometimes tempted to think that anybody with leisure to worry about how a message sounds is not overmasteringly concerned about the content of that message. Nevertheless one or two rules of thumb do emerge. No careful writer of fiction, that is to say of realistic fiction, will be satisfied with a line of dialogue unless it sounds satisfactory when read out, spoken aloud. It may be less obvious that the writer of any and every kind of prose should also read aloud what it is proposed to print. Nobody who has not habitually done so can imagine the farrago of ineptitudes revealed by this obvious method: unintended rhymes, assonances and repetitions, continual failure of whatever organ might guard against bad sound. If a para- graph of prose is to sound satisfactory to the reader's inner or outer ear, it must already have satisfied its writer by the same crt terla. For all that, when a passage of prose is commended for its rhythmic or sonic beauty, it is often some passage of

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scripture or high drama or other solemn and emotional wri ting. This is a little hard on the non -scri ptural writer. A meditation on first and last things, not to speak of an account of a human death, is bound to strike the reader as more impressive than a report on the strength of materials. Nevertheless both have their place. It strikes the reader as trenchant and witty when George Orwell rewords a well- known and splendid verse from Ecclesiastes in the style of a government pamphlet, but neither he nor anyone else I know of has tried the same sort of thing the other way round. Specialised expressions, technical terms and such often have the merits of clarity and definiteness, not to mention irreplaceability (if you get what I mean). So no, a juvenile delinquent is just that, neither more nor less, and cannot be paraphrased into anything else. And no, it will not do to reword There is a total lack of ablution facilities as There is nowhere to wash, however funny and brilliant it may be to do so, because those facilities include means of not only washing in general but also of showering, having a bath, shaving, cleaning teeth and washing various bits and pieces and no doubt of other things, all summed up under the admittedly fussy and cacophonous but necessary and concise phrase, ablution facilities. With that said, of course there are plenty of jargon- merchants, those who prefer sonorous, polysyllabic abstrac- tions to plain words, and an eye must be kept out for such, not least within oneself. But to write graceful or stately prose you need a suitable subject with plenty of heavy monosyllables in it, one nearer the Last Judgement than the provision of visual aids and kindred apparatus in pre-teenage educational environments.

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Role model

Like TRACK RECORD, this phrase has come into being because of pressure on the bare noun. Role model is for those who think that if they say or write Joyce is a perilous model for young intellectuals some of the audience may think Joyce is a fashion model or perhaps an artist's model apt to do some unspecified damage to her young intellectual admirers. And if anyone says or writes Wellington is an excellent model for those intending a military career, some of the audience may think Wellington reduced to a plastic manikin two inches high would be especially useful to anyone purposefully play- ing with toy soldiers. And rather than face such eventualities the invention and parrot-like use of a hilarious barbarism like role model is surely justified.

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Sacrilegious

This word earns its place here merely because of the fre- quency with which it is still, after all this time, wrongly pronounced and spelt as if it had something literal to do with religious.

Salutations and valedictions

Occasions when an ordinary person has to write to the Queen or the Archbishop of Canterbury are few and rare, so much so that my observations on how to start such letters are likewise sparse. My advice in such matters is in serious cases to telephone and inquire of one of the secretary-figures by whom those of any grandeur are attended, or should this prove an unattractive option and the need be dire consult a reliable reference-book like Titles and Forms of Address, published by A. & C. Black, p. I 15 and following. In practice, the most common kind of formal letter you write is one to the editor of some newspaper or journal or other, and the preliminaries are straightforward enough: To the Editor of the Budleigh Salterton Guardian top left and salute that eminence as Sir or Dear Sir, and the newspaper will do the rest. When it comes to signing off, you have the choice of Yours faithfully and Yours sincerely. Theoretically either of these will do, but your choice in an individual case, like much else, is bound to be influenced

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by your upbringing and its date. My own were such that I am reluctant to sign myself yours sincerely to anybody I have not actually met. I still remember and feel something of the mild shock I felt when the President of St John's College, Oxford, decent and honest man as I knew him to be, wound up a circular letter to me as one of all of the college undergraduates with this formula in 1945 or poss- ibly early 1946, quite a novelty then. I remember thinking he had every right to call himself mine sincerely at the end of any personal message to me, but slightly less so when he was addressing one and all. Even today I feel a tiny twinge when a correspondent in The Times newspaper, unlikely on the face of it to be on amicable terms with the editor, even less the correspondence edi tor of the publication, closes his letter in those words. The valediction Yours, etc. comes in handy when you want to brush off some intrusive fellow. It is not suitable at any other time. American usage drops the Yours and merely says Faith- fully or Truly or Sincerely. Perhaps originally (and pissily) they wanted to show how egalitarian they were, like calling the children's game follow-the-Ieader. British subjects will avoid.

Same

This little word used to give trouble in a sort of down- market area, as a mode of saying ditto in what were then apt to be called business communications: 'We duly despatched your esteemed order of 2 doz. shirts on 20th inst, and beg to request acknowledgement of receipt of same.' Now same has started to upset things in a new sector, in sequence of phraseology. Strictly, the same must always be followed by as if it is followed at all, so you can say he wore the same college tie as I did but not he wore the same college

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tie I did unless you can face being mistaken for an American. Of course you are always free to write he wore a college tie and I wore the same. If awkwardness looms, recast the sentence.

Sanction

This mysterious word seems to behave as if at one moment it meant to forbid something and at the next to permit something. The best course is not to set out on any project of reconciliation but simply to take note of the following:

I. Sanctions (noun) are a form of economic/military action which, by denying a state or nation the power to import certain materials, seeks to coerce it into certain courses of policy. 2. Sanction (noun) is a consideration that operates to enforce obedience to some supposed ethical rule. A sense best avoided in one's own writing. 3. Sanction (verb). To sanction a course of action is to declare it justified by the most solemn standards, to ratify or approve It.

A unifying account of the various usages of this word must be possible, but I have never seen a coherent one.

Saxon words

There was a minor craze for these early in this century, giving us all manner of quaint pseudo-archaisms like skysill for horizon, but it has passed, and with it any notion of a special virtue inherent in 'native' roots. It remains broadly true that, as compared with derivatives of Latin, a decent proportion of Saxonisms in the vocabulary is a sign of a

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good writer, but the reader should never be allowed to suspect that this is the result of any conscious policy of choice on the writer's part. What 'a decent proportion' amounts to cannot be defined, and it seems easier and safer to approach the problem from the other end and work on the principle that a preponderance of classically derived words in what one writes, especially words denoting abstract qualities or things, especially polysyllables, especially those ending in -tion or -sion, is a bad sign. That is Rule I. Rule 2 annoyingly goes back a little way and says, Never choose to write one word rather than another on the sole ground that it has an Old or Middle English pedigree and its competitor comes from a Latin, French, anyway non-English root. In particular, never choose an English-descended word like forebear when a foreign one like ancestor seems more familiar and natural. Rule 3 simply says, as always, read through what you have written and change anything you are not reasonably well satisfied with.

Scotch, Scottish

Best known and most often used world-wide in the form Scotch, a noun, the name of a drink. There is much to be said about this, but I will confine myself here to remarking that whereas the legal definition of whisky is long and com- plicated, that of Scotch whisky is short and simple, viz. 'whisky made in Scotland'. Scotch was at one time the preferred form of the adjective in England. Now this has almost disappeared, driven out by Scottish, the preferred form north of the Border for over a century, while Scotsman has driven out Scotchman. The form Scotch survives, however, in compounds and set phrases. Nobody talks about butter scottish or hopscots, and I have never come across a Scottish egg or woodcock, nor a dendrologist

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who talked about a Scottish pine (by rights he should say a Scotch fir, a fir being a kind of evergreen conifer with needles placed singly on the shoots, whereas a true pine has its needles placed in groups of two or more). The spelling whisky, without any E, is preferred for the product of Scotland. Whiskey, with the E, is generally used for varieties made in Ireland and the USA.

Secret

At a time when there are apparently no secrets, only revela- tions of what used to be secrets and perhaps should have remained so, the media apply the adjective secret to all sorts of things that have never deserved the label. Thus there may be meetings to discuss a City merger that were nothing more than unreported, but get called secret, talks about possible military actions nobody would have honestly called anything but confidential get called secret, discussions between two persons of opposite sexes, or even the same sex, are no longer private but secret. Oh well, secret is a shorter word than some of its possible alternatives, and also tastier and more inviting to the prying and the prurient, and therefore made for headlines - who wants to read about the confirmation of rumours? This is after all no more than a very small victory for trivialisation.

Seek

Except in phrases like hide-and-seek, the verb seek is little heard in ordinary conversation. Nobody ever asks another if he is seeking trouble or to be funny; the obvious phrases, looking for or trying, are preferred in informal circumstances. Where seek belongs is in formal statements in the media. A management or trade-union spokesman cannot afford to

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try and perhaps fail or look for an agreement he may never find. But seek and ye shall find, as we were told on a suf- ficiently solemn occasion, and an agreement both sides are seeking sounds almost in the bag. Seek in this sense is a politician's word, like hopefully.

Semantics

This word (from the Greek semaino, I signal or signify or mean) stands for the branch of the study of words which is concerned with their meanings. You might have thoug
t that anything that could possibly help us not to talk non- sense was to be welcomed. There are plenty of people around, however, who dislike having to define their terms, say, when advancing a disputed case, and those who have come across the word in question are likely to say in defence or offence, 'I'm not interested in semantics' in an attempt to reduce their interrogators to the status of mere hair- splitters or nit-pickers. As Johnson said, 'There is no argu- ing with unresisting imbecility.' One's only dignified recourse is to quit the scene at once, perhaps muttering not very audibly, 'Nor in other things besides,' or some shorter expreSSIon.

Sentence

Few readers of these lines will need to be told what a sentence is, but these few include a number who fondly think they know already. Language specialists and others have been busy for decades saying that the old rules are dead, that a sentence is more or less any chunk of wordage anybody cares to sling together, that it is nothing more than a 'part of writing or speech between two full stops or equivalent pauses' (COD, 7th edn.). The word sentence itself

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only has definite meaning as a technical term preceded by simple, compound, complex, etc., categories which include subject and predicate, etc. A sentence, however, is a stylistic as well as a grammatical unit. A written sentence that is technically irreproachable may offend in other ways. One such example is the verbless sentence, acceptable to lexicographers, not necessarily so to ordinary readers, who have stylistic views and expectations whether they know it or not. The short kind (Night. April in Paris. What rough beast?), sometimes in a paragraph of its own, will be readily dis- missed as a piece of failed modernism, a vulgarity, a passe shock-tactic. The longer version will almost certainly take longer to identify, moving the reader's eye and attention through several lines of print before letting it be seen that there is no main verb within it, and again plenty of people know what a main verb is who could not set about a defi- nition. They know that an although clause, for instance, ought to be subordinate and followed by a yet all the same main clause, and feel dissatisfied if none follows. In such cases they have been made to pause without profit, and no self-respecting writer should make a reader do that. A decent line of prose, like a decent line of verse, cannot be expected to yield up its full contents at a single reading, but it must yield up enough to make it plain that to continue at once is a worthy enterprise. Even today, most of the sentences we come across, includ- ing many we hear and never see, contain a main verb and probably other features of the sentences we have met in print, and a great deal would have to change before that is changed and, with it, our expectation of the utterances we encounter.

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Sequence of tenses

There is present sequence of tenses and past sequence thereof. Present sequence needs, if anything at all, no more illustration: 'Every day I tell her (that) I love her.' Past sequence may bring problems, consequent on the rule that when a main verb in a sentence is in the past tense, verbs in dependent clauses go to the past tense in sympathy, even though there may be no question of past time elsewhere in such a clause. So when Smith says, 'Every day last week I told her (that) I loved her,' he means 'Every day last week I said to her eel love you",' with no implication that at the- end of last week he stopped loving her. But perhaps he feels he must specifically exclude that implication, in which case he would probably say 'Every day last week I told her (that) I love her,' keeping the dependent verb in the present tense to emphasise its present meaning. My own feeling is that, with a topic of such importance, Smith was right to be quite unambiguous, even at the cost of breaking the correct sequence of tenses. That other rule, saying that meanings must be absolutely clear, takes precedence.

Sexist language

The language referred to is English, which regularly includes some less than respectful affix meaning man or masculine in its words for female. The word female itself, from femella, diminutive of Latin femina, assimilates its second syllable to male, thus implying that a female is a mere appendage or subsection of a male. The ordinary French word for woman, known to many readers to be femme, eschews both affix and implication. The English word woman carries the process a stage further. The 0 E D calls this word 'a formation peculiar to English, and not extant in the earliest period of Old English,

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the ancient word being wife [and its variants).' Thus again, in the word wife, a word originally signifying nothing but biological sex becomes one denoting a social relationship in which the man is possessed of and gives his name to the woman. The word wife in the sense of old and rustic or uneducated woman, married or not, is still current, especi- ally in dialect and in combinations like old wife, midwife and, sometimes fancifully, fishwife. The almost archaic term lady is free from any linguistic- ally built-in put-down or sneer, though perhaps none was felt to be necessary in a word originally signifying nothing more than loaf-kneader (hlafdige) beside a lord who at any rate was guard or warden of that loaf (hlafweard). Derivations as given in COD, etc. Girl is said, in COD, etc., to be perhaps cognate with a Low German word for 'child', nothing more. The word she is actually the modern version of the Old English feminine demonstrative pronoun and adjective, meaning roughly 'that (feminine) one over there'. He, in contrast, has always been a regular personal pronoun. For centuries English writers, in the course of trying to make a point or raise a laugh, have been going on about woman and woe-man, and Chaucer six hundred or more years ago was being no more than neater than some of his contem- poraries when he made a male character say to a female:

Mulier est hominis confusio; Madam, the sentence of this Latin is Woman is mannes joy and all his bliss.

Chaucer, though well enough educated by the standards of his time, was just possibly unaware that, while mulier will do fine to mean woman-as-opposed-to-man, homo and its oblique cases will not do as well for man-as-opposed-to- woman and usually means man-as-opposed-to-animal etc. On the other hand it would have been very like Chaucer

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to pretend to mean the one thing (women throw men into disorder) and all the time mean the other (women throw the human race into disorder). If needed, he had the get-out that he really meant the word in its colloquial sense and the actual meaning of this Latin is that women throw a fellow into confusion. (Full marks to him for the unobtrusive way he implies that of course no woman understood" a word of Latin.) As far as I know, no English dictionary that gives etymo- logical origins has yet been edited by a female, woman, lady, girl or one of those over there, though such persons can be trusted with revision and kindred tasks.

Shakespeare

It is fair, though hardly very important, that to say or imply that the man of this name is not our greatest writer marks a second-rate person at best. The aberration whereby the name was spelt Shakspere is now happily discontinued. I recommend that the derived adjective be spelt Shakespearean with an E, not Shakespearian with an I. His works should not be taken as justifying subsequent practice. In particular, as a writer and speaker of the period 1590-1610 he threw accentuation further forward than we now customarily do, making actors in Hamlet, for instance, stress commendable and observance on their first syllables.

Shall and will

In my youth and later, the question of when it was correct to write and say shall and will (and should and would) was a matter of continual discussion. Wilson Follett, as unstuffy a man as ever put pen to paper, had twenty-three pages on the question in 1966, and not all the other participants were

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schoolteachers or swots or petty usage-fanatics or linguists. Now, however, it has become safe to say that it is nothing but a lonely and diminishing remnant who are even aware that there once was a choice and faintly still is. For good or ill, what H.L. Mencken wrote in 1949, that 'except in the most painstaking and artificial varieties' of the American language the distinction had ceased to exist, has spread out over the English-speaking world. These days there is no point in rehearsing, for a select few, the various Old-English proto-auxiliary verbs from which our present pair are descended. I offer instead a few scattered remarks which may be of interest and here and there of use. (The rules for I also apply to we and those for he and she also apply to they.) At one time there was quite a hard-and-fast rule that said I shall denoted simple futurity or prophecy, as in By this time tomorrow I shall be in Oxford. I will denoted intention or threat, as in If you say that again I will (I'll) knock your block off. By one of those quirks dear to grammarians, this arrangement was reversed with you and he/she/it, so that you/ he etc. will be there tomorrow is a mere statement of futurity and you/he etc. shall denotes something more, as in he shall do as he's told, a rare construction nowadays. If this picture was ever clear it has been fogged by the increased use of contractions such as I'll, you'll for I will/shall and you willi shall. By a further such quirk, old-fashioned speakers of Scot- tish-English took that whole arrangement through another 180 degrees. Everybody knows that 'Rule, Britannia' declares at one point, 'Britons never shall be slaves.' What the author, James Thomson, actually wrote was 'Britons never will be slaves,' but he was a Scot. A battered old joke illustrated the difference, as follows. A swimmer in difficulties was heard to shout, 'I will drown and nobody shall save me.' At an inquest on the unfortunate fellow, English jurors wanted a verdict of suicide, Scottish jurors

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a verdict of death by misadventure, and MacTavish pressed for a rider or footnote rebuking witnesses for making no effort to rescue the victim. Nobody tells that one today. The words of a song of the Second World War illustrate, no doubt unintentionally, the supposedly traditional role of will and shall. There'll be bluebirds over the white cliffs of Dover, sang Dame Vera Lynn, as she later was, Tomorrow, just you wait and see, conveying the meaning that the bluebirds would be there one day whether or not anybody did anything about it. There could not be a clearer case of third-person will making a mere statement of futurity. Later in the same song Dame Vera sang:

The shepherd shall feed his sheep, The valley shall bloom again, AndJohnny shall go to sleep In his own little room again.

It's tempting here to get distracted by the way the American lyric-writer has exactly caught British rural sentimentality about shepherds and valleys, and also the accuracy of the Johnny stuff down to his very name and the form of it. But we must notice the use of shall there, indicating not mere futurity but something more, something paraphrasable as, 'I intend to see to it that,' etc. Marcellus, the character in Hamlet, put some of the same force into shall when trying to warn his prince against wandering into metaphysical danger with the words, You shall not go, my lord; it was not Marcellus's fault that Hamlet went regardless. Douglas MacArthur showed a similar grim determination when he promised the Japanese who had thrown him out of the Philippines, I shall return (and kept his word). End of half-digression. What are we to do, faced with a choice of will and shall, as we still in a sense are even though only a small part of our audience is going to care or even

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notice, and of tpat part at least half are sure to be incited by malignant pedantry? The only advice on speech I can give that is likely to be taken is, Bash on regardless, or Do as you've always done. But never say anything that strikes you as unnatural; remember, if it strikes you that way it will certainly strike parts of your audience that way too. When we move from speaking to writing, many people feel and behave differently. They would rather, or nearly rather, or feel they would rather be stiffly correct than chummily illiterate, especially when writing on their best behaviour, as in a memorial notice. To such people I feel I can offer the following advice:

I. See that you understand the 'hard-and-fast rule' as set out earlier. 2. Decide how important it is to you to follow this rule rather than the dictates of what, on consideration, seems to you natural and unaffected. 3. Proceed accordingly, remembering the two golden rules that really are rules: don't write anything that seems to you barbarous, and you can always recast the sentence. 4. But not before having read me on SHOULD AND WOULD.

She and it

Until quite recent times any country was apt to be personified in certain contexts, almost always in the form of a woman, as in our own cases. The United Kingdom, then often called England, was mother of the free, and motherland, although nowadays it has an archaic ring, stayed in the dictionary as meaning one's native country. Now- adays, again, the usual and operative pronoun is not she but it, so firmly so that to speak or write of one's country as

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Shibboleth

she invites genuine incomprehension or else a faint hostility ,.. .., as JIngoIstIC. There are countries, Castro's Cuba for example, that one would hesitate to speak of as any kind of person, indeed even to call them it may seem a little on the flowery side. But there are others, like our own, still decent enough to be personified, and to make it harder, even by a small amount, to feel a personal attachment to the place and its ways is surely undesirable, however 'jingoistic' the alter- native. I seem to remember that the Church too was once referred to as she, but can find no authoritative confirmation.

Shibboleth

A shibboleth is defined in COD as a noun meaning 'test word or principle or behaviour or opinion, the use of or inability to use which reveals one's party, nationality, ortho- doxy, etc. (see Judg. 12:6); catchword,' and so on. At the end comes the pedigree of the relevant Hebrew noun, sibbolet with a couple of diacritical marks, meaning 'ear of corn' though the scholiast differs - but the meaning is irrelevant here. But the OT Book of Judges 12 is relevant enough. Two armed factions in ancient Palestine, Gileadites and Ephraimites, had quarrelled and the Gileadites under Jephtha had won. A surviving Ephraimite tried here and there to pass himself off as a returned Gileadite, without success as It appears:

. . . the men of Gilead said unto him, Art thou an Eph- raimite? If he said, Nay: Then said they unto him, Say now Shibboleth: and he said Sibboleth: for he could not frame to pronounce it right. Then they took him, and slew him at the passages of Jordan . . .

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Failure to pronounce a word right today seldom brings such dire consequences; nevertheless, it is always rewarding to spot a would-be dissembler or infiltrator. Most Welsh people, now, make no bones about being the genuine article, and quite right too, but there are those among them who, like their English neighbours, try to pass themselves off as having come from a posher background than the one they grew up in. The shibboleth-word in such cases is sometimes said to be situation. Fearful of putting in a giveaway conson- antal-y-sound as in flyoo or scryoo, the aspirant over-corrects by leaving it out this time round and says sitooation, unlike most of those east of Offa's Dyke; Lord Jenkins himself tumbles down here. My own Welsh shibboleth is a word like longer or stronger, which the unwary Welshman will pronounce without the guttural force of the G, unlike, say, conga. I had always wondered a little about the poet Sir John Davies (1569-1626) until I caught him rhymingfinger with singer, which secured him for ever in my esteem as a true Taff. For a shibboleth to persist over centuries is nothing; I think I have identified one that spans millennia. In Coro- nation Street on television, the decent Moroccan character Samir or Sameer now pronounces his name like Sam-EER, instead of Sham-EER as earlier. The reason for the change was given out as that only Israelis pronounce that kind of initial S as SH; others in that part of the world, including Moroccans, kick off with a plain S. So after all this time the heirs of the Ephraimites are still saying S where their rivals are still saying SH, though without the unpleasant consequences noted in the years B C . At the moment, anyway.

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Should and would

Should and would

Over the last cou}?le of generations, will has been pushing out shall. Over a similar period, would has even more effec- tively been pushing out should. There are several possible reasons for this.

I. I'd for I should as well as I would seems even easier to slip into than I'll for I shall as well as I will. 2. The should area is complicated by notions of duty and obligation (e.g. this is not a matter of what I want to do but of what I should do) in a way and to a degree that the shall area is not. 3. The construction I should do such-and-such without the follow-up of if I were you or in your place has grown to the point where I should has increasingly become a verb of advising or recommending rather than one of conse- quence. 4. Nobody has ever said I should if I could" 5. Influence from America has made I would think so seem more the expression of a personal opinion and more tentative than I should think so.

It seems to me quite likely that I should, as any sort of past tense of I shall, will in another couple of generations be as archaic as I ween.

Simplistic

This is a recent usage - first recorded 1881, but not popular for a century or more - and a handy put-down word. By its use, what you thought was simple - straightforward, obvious, clear - is transfigured in a flash into simple- minded, credulous, naive:

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The simplistic view that criminals are born, not made. Simplistic theories of the genetic transmission of intel- lige nce.

Now it may well be that such views and theories are indeed simple-minded or advanced by the simple-minded, but that is not the issue. The word simplistic is perfect for its usual job, that of gracefully dismissing something without dis- cussing it. The something so dismissed is more often than not on the political Right and the dismisser even more often on the Left. No word suggests itself as an equivalent weapon for the Right, which has to fall back on tattered labels like old-hat, crackpot, airy-fairy, half-baked. But then the Right has often been old-hat in the past and the Left good at devising new words and new usages.

Single-handedly

Some illiteracies are presented in the name of literacy, or at least of regularity and common sense. This is a popular one just now. Those who like to make words longer and more polysyllabic have not noticed or do not care that single-handed is already an adverb as well as an adjective, and expressions like he saw it through single-handed are used and effortlessly accepted a thousand times a day. The lately fashionable overly, one of the ugliest intruders of this part of the century, is similarly an unnecessary extension of what was already a thriving and unquestioned adverb. There are plenty of other adverbs vulnerable to creative illiteracy through not ending in -lye Regardless is in the forefront, having three syllables already and perhaps stand- ing in need of rehabilitation by being blown up into irre- gardless by a different kind of illiteracy. But no word of this

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sort - an adverb not already ending in -ly - can be con- sidered safe. When can we expect to see quitely? Altogetherly? What nextly? The foregoing can be seen as a gallant attempt to ridicule what may be cause for more than a passing irritation. An award-winning actress was recently witnessed on television thanking all those who had contributed to her triumph, 'lastly but not leastly' some easily overlooked minor figure. And a New York dentist says 'open widely' on his best behaviour, but 'open big' when in a hurry. Everybody speaks more formally at some times than at others, but putting on airs with what is a solecism as well as an absurdity is to be deplored.

Snootiness

I have given an unpleasant name (it supposedly derives from snout) to an unpleasant thing, a name that at any rate has an English root and therefore befits a very English thing. I like and admire the English character as much as anybody does, I think, but this is and for a long time has been a grave weakness in it. To strike up outside the home key: I have heard it sug- gested that English snootiness lost the African empire that English enterprise and magnanimity had helped to acquire, lost the hearts and minds of the colonialised nations as well as sovereignty over their territories. French behaviour to indigenous peoples was probably harsher than ours was, but the post-imperial descendants of those peoples, in spheres like poetry and cuisine, seem closer to the French than our former subjects do to us. One important reason is the persistence of English snootiness. A man will perhaps for- give or agree to overlook a kick in the stomach more readily than a snub. Here is another word for a kind of nose, which organ features in several allied expressions. Toffee-nosed, more

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properly toffy-nosed, toffish-nosed, toff being an earlier coin- age than toffee/taffy, is one of these, turn up one's nose another. The image is of a supposed aristocrat keeping his nose loftily above the level of the malodorous common herd. To demonstrate that we have not actually left linguistic matters behind, let me suggest to the reader that Chesterton perfectly characterised the English snub in two spoken sen- tences, one the apparent statement, 'No doubt you're right,' said as to mean, 'No doubt you think you're right,' and the apparent query , 'You think so?' said so as to convey the follow-up, 'You would.' A couple of rounds of this sort of thing, rubbed in with a snooty lifting of the nose and a refusal to shake hands, another English ruling-class habit, and superiority is entrenched beyond removal even by immediate violence. The African empire and all such things are vanished now, but English snootiness is not. Its survivals are none of my concern here unless as features of style of utterance. I admit I am quite likely seeing what is not there when I find a contemporary version of it in the pervasive unspecific irony with which journalists treat the people and subjects they comment upon in columns and sketches. No doubt every culture has its modes of non-committal superiority of manner, not that anything very heinous is at stake here. But the snub rather than any sort of rude remark is still the distinctive English way of winning the upper ground. Not so long ago it was fashionable to indicate superiority by insincerely apologising for the use of slang or a cliche with some formula as 'to use the vernacular expression'. Now slang itself is fashionable, but the habit of seeming self-reproach has not disappeared. People still say, even if they seldom write, 'to coin a phrase' or 'if you'll pardon the expression' when letting fall wordage they consider beneath them, though they may assume a self-mocking tone in which to do so, and some of the self-mockery may be

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So far and no fW'ther

The subtlest and most tenacious method of using low expressions and preserving dignity is to hang inverted com- mas round them, a habit first noticeable in the works of Henry James. This is an attempt to have it both ways. It would be hard to set out briefly what the courtesy light in a car is and does, and yet the phrase is the manufacturer's, so stick it in quotes and directness is achieved without loss of dignity. Or so the writer hopes. The reader perhaps wants to yell, 'Either have the courage of your cliches and use them without apology or work harder at devising alterna- tives. More shortly, get off your high horse.'

So far and no further

As was for many years inevitable, derivatives of far h
ve been driven out by those of fore or fur, and it is now correct to say and write further and furthest in all meanings and contexts. Parther and farthest are still fully intelligible, at least when written, but avoided in use. I once heard the word fur used as a primary, positive adverb - 'it's not too fur down the road from here' - by a batman-driver in 1944. Unless the speaker was back- forming from further or furthest, which of course is quite possible though I judge unlikely, this suggests an original form quite distinct from fore. In any case, as everybody knows, far remains the positive form in use alongside com- parative and superlative expansions not directly derived from it.

Some

The recent history of this little word is a good example of the perpetual dynamism of linguistic error, its tireless search for new prey, however insignificant on the face of it. The

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realms of pronunciation and stress, being less easy to write about than the word on the page, are especially inviting. So it is coming to be with some. A useful distinction had grown up whereby some in the sense of 'some but not others' (sense I, as in 'some problems are easily solved') had come to be pronounced sum, with full value given to the vowel, whereas some in the sense of 'an unspecified number or amount' (sense 2, as in 'have some sandwiches, have some tea') had come to be pronounced s'm. Now, sense I is increasingly pronounced as in sense 2 and sense 2 as in sense I. To be invited to 'have sum tea' is intelligible enough and suggests nothing more damaging than that the speaker hails from the North of England, or is a victim of the current quasi-pedantic craze for giving such vowels their full value. But to be told over the radio, say, that 's'm recent Cabinet decisions have been very unpopular, while others. . .' may be baffling, not for long but perhaps for long enough to cause the listener to lose the thread of the first part of the sentence. If broadcasters would go to the burdensome length of reading their words before starting to say them, this and similar mild annoy- ances might be avoided.

Spelling mistakes

These are, perhaps unexpectedly, less common in tabloid newspapers with a high circulation than in the so-called quality Press. This is probably because the tabloids are more heavily sub-edited than the others, no doubt in pursuit of base objectives like uniformity, but uniformity in pursuit of correct spelling is hardly base at all. It is reassuring to find that there are still enough good spellers to go round. The qualities commit fewer vulgarities and barbarisms of language, not least in their main headlines, but the greater freedom their contributors enjoy extends to eccen-

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tricities of spelling. It is in those columns and long articles that you will quite often find the Meditteranean and Carribean Seas, British ex-patriots, some of them dessicated, miniscular objections and things loveable andforgiveable (though Friday's child has yet to be loveing and giveing), not to speak of difficulties with hyphens (though these infest the tabloids too) and, just the other week and twice over in The Times, pantomine (though perhaps this was not so much a spelling mistake as just a mistake). Of the many arguments for avoiding incorrect spelling I would choose two. One is that neglect of this precaution goes down badly with people, including some who may be thought generally unworthy but whose disapproval may be worth avoiding. The other argument is more in the nature of an appeal. If writing is worth doing it should be done as well as possible. Waiting at table is also worth doing, and simple pride should prevent a waiter from serving from dirty plates and with dirty hands. And the waiter will have a better time of it too with clean plates and clean hands.

Spelling reform

Some tender-hearted or woolly-headed observers have noticed that English spelling is often inconsistent or worse, and that children and foreigners, not to mention a few adult native speakers not otherwise unintelligent, find difficulty with it. Such observers sometimes go on to urge spelling reform, perhaps being in a position to know that Webster of dictionary fame happened to be a mild reformer (hence American color, center, traveler, etc.) and nobody has com- plained. So why not go further? The reasons why not are various, starting with the fact that by accident or design, probably design, Webster went about as far as it was safe to go. The next point is chat

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English vowel-sounds change from one position to another, so thatfraternise, for example, gives something like FRATT- uh-nise whereas fraternity, very much part of the same lan- guage-family, gives fruh-TERR-nity. Next, sounds change from place to place even within these islands, so both the fraternal words acquire a detectable R in west-of-England speech not spoken or heard in south-eastern England. And what about Yorkshire, Glasgow, Belfast, not to speak of other places where they speak English from the cradle, like America in all its variety, Australia, New Zealand and a host of places I cannot list here? Economic even more than linguistic obstacles impede any programme of spelling reform. The cost of republishing all extant literature in any such spelling would be prohibi- tive. And that of banishing millions of literate people from the existing community of English-readers - for nothing else would be entailed by any selective plan - is not to be reckoned fiscally. No. It is more realistic, more merciful and finally more blessed to keep on beavering away with I before E except after C (if they still teach that) and resigning oneself to the prospect that some people will always be better spellers than others.

Split infinitive

This, the saying or writing of to really think, to boldly go, etc., is the best known of the imaginary rules that petty linguistic tyrants seek to lay upon the English language. There is no grammatical reason whatever against splitting an infinitive and often the avoidance of one lands the writer in trouble, as in Fowler's example:

The men are declared strongly to favour a strike.

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Here, in the course of evading the suspect to strongly favour, the writer has left tpe reader in some doubt whether strongly applies to the declaring or the favouring. As Fowler remarks \ elsewhere in his article:

It is of no avail merely to fling oneself desperately out of temptation; one must do it so that no traces of the struggle remain; that is, sentences must be thoroughly remodelled instead of having a word lifted from its origi- nal place and dumped elsewhere.

A warning that every writer, at least, should take generally to heart. Towards the end of the piece, Fowler lays down his recommended policy:

We will split infinitives rather than be barbarous or arti- ficial; more than that, we will freely admit that sufficient recasting will get rid of any s[plit] i[nfinitive] without involving either of those faults, [and] yet reserve to our- selves the right of deciding in each case whether recasting is worth while.

The whole Fowler notice deserves and repays perusal, all I8oo-odd words of it. See ME U, pp. 558-561. That last sentence of his is as true as any such sentence can be. But although he was writing nearly seventy years ago, the 'rule' against split infinitives shows no signs of yielding to reason. This fact prompts some gloomy con- clusions. One such is 'that anti-split-infinitive fanatics are beyond reason. Another is that, whatever anybody may say, split infinitives are still to be avoided in most circumstances. Consider: people with strong erroneous views about 'correct' English are just the sort of people who consider your appli- cation for a job, decide whether you are 'educated' or not, wonder about your general suitability for this and that (e.g. your inclusion in a reading list). Do you want to be right

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or do you want to get on? - sorry, to succeed. I personally think that to split an infinitive is perfectly legitimate, but I do my best never to split one in public and I would certainly not advise anybody else to do so, even today. Today we have reached a point at which some of our grammatical martinets have not actually been taught gram- mar, with the result that they are as hard as ever on the big SI without being at all clear what it is. Indeed, even their slightly better-educated predecessors were often shaky on the point, seeming to think that a phrase like 'X is thought to be easily led' contained an example. Any ungainly departure from natural word-order is likely to betray a fear that a splittable infinitive may be lurking somewhere in the reeds. When a correspondent, a self- declared Y orkshireman, demands of the editor of The Times, 'Have you lost completely your sense of proportion?' seasoned campaigners will sniff the air, in this case and others without result. But nobody is ever quite safe.

Splitting words

It was in 1985 that Fleet Street switched over from old- fashioned methods of type-setting to the new technology involving computers, such that you effectively typed your article straight into the columns of the newspaper. One result of this move was that the splitting of words between lines of print, formerly the outcome of entirely human choice, became semi-automated and therefore declined sharply in quality. It was nothing for a word to start at the end of one line as cha or chan or chang and end at the start of the next with nging or ging or ing or ed. After some years of gross discourtesy to the reader, who without warning had to juggle mentally with uncouth fragments of words in the hope of arriving at a recognisable whole like changing or changed, the position improved somewhat. The days of

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penk-nives, studi-os and stren-gth were over, or at least num- bered. Dismaying gaps appear to this day in what would formerly have been close lines of type, and quite often such lines fail to extend to the end of a column, but in general things have become only about half as bad as they were after progress had first struck. There are (at least) two kinds of affront left to complain about - no more effective step seems open. One is the occur- rence of compounds like pre-historic and un-usable in ordinary lines of print, the doing presumably of someone whose com- puter has been inadequately briefed. Another comes from a consensus of error whereby England and English etc. are split En-glish etc. instead of Eng-lish etc. Now I may be seeing things where nothing is, but we live in what was once called something like Angle-land, not in any precursor of En or gland, so can it not be Eng-lish and Eng-land from now on? The 1993 Collins Gem Dictionary of English Spelling includes, as it says on its cover, 'complete hyphenation guidance', i.e. to whether and where you may split words. It is mostly quite sound on change, though it permits chang- ing (to rhyme with banging, clanging, etc. ?), but it does list Eng-land and Eng-lish and seems in general trustworthy.

Sucking pig

This is the ordinary name for a piglet not yet weaned, whether considered as an animal or as a dish. However, one often hears and sees the similar expression suckling-Pig, evidently mean- ing the same thing. I suspect the alternative of being an Americanism, perhaps an ancient one, of the crypto- puritanical sort like roach (British cockroach) or rooster (British cock) that infiltrated supposedly more tasteful variants or downright changes of the original. The gain in tastefulness from sucking to suckling may seem small, but every little helps, as the old lady said when she made water into the sea.

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Sycophant

Part of the history of this word illustrates the folly of trying to explain the meaning of a word by its origin. The word sycophant derives straightforwardly enough from a Greek word which transliterates as sukophantes, which descends no less straightforwardly from two shorter words, sukon a fig and phaino I show. Then the trouble starts. The longer word is said in the authoritative Liddell and Scott Greek-English Lexicon to be:

properly a fig-shewer, * i.e. one who brings figs to light by shaking the tree: or a fig-informer, i.e. one who informs against persons exporting figs from Attica [of which Athens was the principal city], but used in the sense of a common informer, a false accuser, slanderer.

Really? How a fig-shewer came to mean a common informer is not explained, nor how either came to mean what, the word means in English, a flatterer, toady or parasitic person. The big OED rightly washes its hands of the matter: '[not] satisfactorily accounted for . . . cannot be substantiated. . .' The comparatively small COD sensibly gave the ruling, at least until 1970, 'reason for name unkn[own]', but then in 1988 amended this to 'reason for name uncer[tain]', so perhaps some new fantasy or guess is in preparation. Surely any true friend of the language, one who wants to treat it and its predecessors as more than 'a philological playground' in Fowler's own words, will agree that the origin of sycophant is undiscoverable, and leave it at that. The importance of historical origins as a guide to meaning has seldom been so convincingly given the lie to.

* One who shews or more familiarly shows figs. To write a fig-shower might mislead.

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Symbolic forms

Anxious readers may need to be reassured that they are not about to be told anything whatever about symbolism in the graphic or literary arts. A symbolic form in a language describes (not perhaps very satisfactorily) that class of word that stands somewhere between onomatopoeic words like cuckoo and sizzle on the one hand and ordinary non-echoic words like beauty and bedstead on the other. As one authority puts it, such forms 'have a connotation of somehow illustrat- ing the meaning more immediately than do ordinary speech- forms'. There is no shortage of words that sound rather similar and have a meaning in the same rough area. Famous examples include some that begin with the cluster gl and others that end with the sound ump. The first group seem to have something to do with steady light, for instance glow, glare, glimmer, gleam, glint, gloaming, the second with the idea of clumsiness, like hump, clump (he clumped along), chump, lump, stump and several more. Why or how this sort of thing happens nobody seems to know, but it does happen in other languages without any points of agreement emergIng. One symbolic group that has not attracted so much atten- tion is typified by the word pig. 'Rightly is they called pigs,' said some fictional character, presumably a townsman, after a look at life in the sty. So it could be a term of contempt or even loathing, whether applied by an old-fashioned farmer to a domesticated animal or by a slightly less old- fashioned demonstrator to a policeman. That demonstrator might care to know, by the way, that that use of pig was first recorded in the year 1812, only a dozen years after the first policemen or such figure appeared in London. Meaning the animal, pig began to drive out the older word swine in the early nineteenth century, meaning a person probably about 1860. Pig, it will be readily agreed, is a monosyllable (therefore

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emphatic) beginning with the sound Pi-. There are only a limited number of these possible in English, but three of them do, or can, carry contempt: Pimp, the archaic excla- mation pish, and good old Piss, a term of strong execration when uttered on its own. Several words in the pig group are indelicate, therefore likely to carry strong feeling. If we pull back to include monosyllables just beginning with the letter P, the list is much longer: pah, pap, poke, pox, podge, pooh, poop (archaic childish term for excrement), pulp, pus, poof, poove, ponce, punk (which meant a prostitute in the eighteenth century and earlier). The sound puh is tailor- made to express contempt, with the puff of breath that goes with it at the beginning of an English word making it almost a word in itself. To take the other end of the word, of monosyllables with a short vowel ending in -g, a large number again convey contempt, some of them again indelicate and several of them slang: bag, cag, drag, fag, slag, nag (in two senses), shag, hag, dreg, prig (archaic slang for a thief), frig, bog, hog, wog, quag (mire), bug (in two senses), slug, mug (in two senses), smug - and when we meet Silas Wegg in Our Mutual Friend, we know at once he will be up to no good. Finally, the special, restricted cases, monosyllables begin- ning with P and ending with G. Not many are possible, and most of them are not words at all; as far as I know there is no pag, no pog, no poog in English. By my count there are only two. Pug is not contemptuous when applied to a breed of dog, but pug-nosed is offensive, to call a boxer a pug is offensive even though the word may derive from pugilist, and at various times in the past pug has meant an ape, a dwarf and, as before, a prostitute. The only other possibility is peg, pretty innocuous on the face of it, but once used as a verb meaning to gorge, to overeat, so perhaps I pick up half a mark there. All in all, then, if anyone had been commissioned to run up a word to convey emphatic contempt on the brink of

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downright loathing, that person could not have bettered the one commonly applied to pore us domestieus and to human beings regarded as being of the same status. So absolutely rightly is they called pigs.

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Thankfully

Not an illiteracy in sentences like, 'After my long walk in the sun I thankfully put down a glass of shandy,' where the walker/drinker is thankful. But a stark illiteracy in, say, 'Thankfully, the shandy was well chilled,' where nobody in particular is thankful. A word like luckily is required instead. The use of thankfully in a dangling position, however, as in my second example just above, is not a politician's use like that of dangling hopefully. It makes no attempt to smuggle in more than it says, even though it is a warmer sort of word than luckily. In any case, this is a use that looks likely to catch on further with or without the approval of honest writers, who will go on avoiding it.

That, which, who

This is an old trap, or crux. Any full treatment of it is bound to cover a lot of space: the position about these relative pronouns takes up some 3000 words of ME U , words I would not dare to try to summarise. Instead, I offer a few pieces of advice on the question of when it is correct to write 'the book that I was reading' and when 'the book which I was reading'.

I. Remember, or take note, before you start that plenty of good writers have got this one wrong now and again

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and plenty of bad writers have got it right. It will help some aspirants to say they prefer to sin with Shakespeare than to be vir1!uous with - I leave the choice to them. Those of sterner stuff will prefer to sin as little as possible. 2. The problem is often duckable by omitting any pronoun and writing 'the book I was reading' or its equivalent, as I did after the comma in the second sentence of this article. 3. Sentences of the general type of 'the book I was reading' will do for virtually any kind of speaking and most kinds of writing. In formal prose, however, many people will feel a which or a that, one or the other, is required of them. 4. Although the word that as a relative pronoun is the more common of the two in speech, which is in no way the posher or grander or more literary or more 'correct' of the two, and the sub-editor who went through a friend's typescript changing every relative that to which was wrong as well as intolerably cheeky. 5. When a relative pronoun is required, the rule is that defining clauses are introduced by that, and others, non- defining or informative ones, by which. If this sounds horrible, just keep repeating This is the house that Jack built. Let us distinguish between two possibilities: This is the house that Jack built, not the one that anyone else built. The house is defined as the one that Jack built. This is the house, which Jack built or caused to be built with the money he in
erited from his uncle Herbert, who . . . Note the comma after house. We are given information about this house and its building, but the house is not defined as the one that Jack built. 6. The picture remains essentially the same when people, not things, are involved, as comparison between the two following specimens will show. This is the man that I spoke to, less satisfactorily but to

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some tastes more respectfully put as This is the man whom I spoke to, a construction to be careful of in one's own writings. See 7. This is the man, whom I spoke to for several minutes and recognised without difficulty as . . . Not, again, the comma after man. 7. Confusions may arise when the writer becomes nervous of the length of his defining clause and puts in a pair of commas that make the clause seem like a non-defining one, as In: Young children, who are undersized and unprepossessing and have none of the qllalities other children admire, may need special attention. Here he has inadvertently committed himself to a statement that all young children are undersized, etc. Easily avoided, as for instance by: Some young children, those who are undersized, etc., may need special attention. The amount of rewriting necessary in this case is small, but it turns nonsense into sense. This is often the case.

Thesaurus

The only thesaurus mentionable here is the Ioaa-page lexi- con of English synonyms and near-synonyms first published by P.M. Roget in 1852. Roget (1779-1869) was many things, including a practising doctor of medicine, a secretary of the Royal Society and an original member of the Senate of London University. In his preface to the first edition he said he had completed a smaller version for his own use which he started to enlarge and prepare for publication on retirement from his secretaryship. Unfortunately, Roget was very much a man of his time in his intellectual processes and his general view of such

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things, and he classified his word-lists into thematic div- isions like I - Abstract Relations, Section I, Existence, 2, Relation and so on to the extent of dozens of sub-headings. But fortunately these can be totally ignored without notice- able loss. At such a distance Roget's classifications look pretty archaic to me and I have never even tried to make sense of them, nor has anyone else I know of. His thesaurus does not seem to suffer thereby. A synonym is a word that means the same thing as another. It has been said that there are only two pairs of perfect synonyms in English, almost and nearly and commence and begin. On inspection even these show differences. Unlike nearly, almost can qualify a noun, as in Philip Larkin's refer- ence to 'our almost-instinct'; nearly, unlike almost, means 'closely' in the first place. Commence and begin are more synonymous in a way, but only someone with no feeling for words would treat them as interchangeable. What Roget did is group words and phrases in roughly the same area of meaning, as in:

885 DISCOURTESY - N. discourtesy, impoliteness, bad manners, disgraceful table m.; no manners, want of courtesy, lack of politeness, lack of manners, incivility, churlishness, uncouthness, boorishness, yobbishness 847 ill-breeding; unpleasantness, nastiness, misbehaviour, mis- conduct, unbecoming conduct; tactlessness, want of con- sideration, stepping on one's toes.

The Thesaurus is far from perfect, but it is essential for those interested in language and also for those writers who merely want to find a suitable word.

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Till and until

Fowler says roundly and twice over that till is the 'usual' form and chides until as 'giving a certain leisurely or deliber- ate or pompous air' to the context, though he concedes that 'when the clause or phrase precedes the main sentence, until is perhaps actually the commoner.' All this remains true, and the only point of this entry is to reassure anyone who needs it that till is a genuine English preposition and con- junction with its roots in Old English and Old Norse and is not a daringly informal shortening of stuffy old upper- class until and spelt 'tile

Too

Too is sometimes used by Americans, and increasingly here, to mean very, as in I don't feel too well. This colloquial use is surely unobjectionable and does not even need an eye kept on it, unlike many a potential abuse. A student, a young American, I had the duty of supervising on a creative writing course (poetry division) once defended himself against the charge of wilful obscurity by pleading to me, 'Sir, I guess I don't pay too much heed to the reader.' Would that other shortcomings of our pupils contained their own demolition so neatly. Never begin a fresh sentence with too followed by a comma, to mean something like further or also. Not even Americans should be allowed to get away with that.

Track record

These days, no politician or other public figure in good standing has anything else but a track record. He or she cannot have just a record any more because that is what a

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convicted criminal has. The phrase is a good example of the kind of thing that is perfectly harmless in newspaper use (however nasty the grin of recognition it may arouse) and not at all harmless in any attempt at anything at all serious. (Another good example is ROLE MODEL. Nobody can just be a model any more because the word means some- body who displays garments etc. by wearing them in a photograph.)

Transpire

This famous misuse, which consists in trying to make the word mean simply 'happen' instead of 'leak out, come to be known', is still with us after nearly a century of denunci- ation. One bar to its destruction has perhaps been the diffi- culty of deciding whether the word is intended to mean 'happen' or 'come to be known' in familiar contexts like 'such abuses seldom transpire in a democracy'. Another has perhaps been the difficulty of making up one's mind to bother, if that is not just an admission of defeat.

Twice two

Whether you should say twice two is four or are four was the sort of 'argument' people interested in words were some- times asked to 'settle'. All right, then: either is correct, and the two have been so for half a dozen centuries. The was and were in the first sentence are in the past tense because the problem involves some acquaintance with multipli- cation. Next question.

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Two cheers for only connect

It is not necessary to be bored by the novels of E.M. Forster as much as I am in order to be fed up with a couple of slogans he started on their course, one of them contained in a novel of 1910, the other part of a title of 1951. As far too many people will be aware, they are 'only connect' and 'two cheers' for some abstraction or other, 'democracy' in the original. I. Only connect. It seems hopelessly vague as a guide to conduct, whatever Forster may have meant, and the context is a poor interpreter. Perhaps the maxim calls upon the writer to be on the look-out for similarities in behaviour or character and nothing else. Or does it mean that the mere demonstration that something is connected to some- thing else is enough in itself and that nothing needs explain- ing or discussing? Or is it just a phrase that comes in handy for those who want to seem profound but have nothing very definite to say? 2. Two cheers were probably as many as Forster could man- age in favour of anything, from democracy to stamp- collecting, that is to say anything bodiless. His avowal, that he only had two cheers to spare for the system that he was able to flourish under, has brought him some undeserved respect as well as doing its bit to reinforce political quietism. The Forsters of this world go on as if they would prefer to be spared the vulgarities entailed in running a decent society, one which deserves four cheers from its citizens and others too.

Typewriter vs. word-processor

This book, like all my others, even the most recent, was written not on a word-processor but a typewriter. Currently this is what it has been for the last thirty years, an Adler

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office model of the acoustic (i.e. non-electrical) sort, a characteristic it shares with all its forerunners. I stick to my alphabet piano in the first place for reasons to do with age, habit, experience, tight-fistedness and so on, but not for those alone. Some years ago, a leading firm that made word-processors asked me and other worthies of that era (Stirling Moss, Humphrey Lyttelton et al.) to let them have a few words saying how much we liked word-processors, especially those of that particular make. I found it hard to think of ways how and reasons why, but the fee was an actual word- processor, brand new and instantly floggable. Even so I came to feel quite sorry for the nice young fellow from the advertising agency who trudged up to my house in Kentish Town to quiz me on such points. 'I expect you've often found these things pretty useful in your walk of life,' he began. 'I've never used one,' I said. cOho Well, I expect you've often found you can remember the first two or three letters of a word but not the rest, haven't you?' 'No, never, as it happens.' cOho Well, there's a dictionary with 80,000 words in it available in there,' he said, referring to the piece of machin- ery on the table between us. 'There's a dictionary with 150,000 words in it available there,' I said, giving my Concise Oxford a friendly glance. cOho Well, what can I say you said, for Christ's sake?' What I eventually let him say I said was that the word- processor would change a character's name, as it might be from Herbert to Charlie, in the twinkling of an eye and without any exceptions throughout a piece of writing. I did not make him say I said that I could manage that unassisted, without benefit of word-processor, when I came to re-type. Nor did I make him record our brief chinwag when I asked him whether, using a word-processor, I could go on having

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access to my first thoughts the way I could with a type- wrIter. 'Sorry?' he said. I explained, or reminded him, how after x-ing out one's first thoughts on a typewriter and putting in a corrected version one could still see what one's first thoughts had been and perhaps derive benefit from them. 'Oh yes, I remember doing that,' he said. 'Well, could you do anything like that on a word- processor?' This time he understood. 'No,' he said. That was enough to make me decide to stick to my typewriter. But then the word-processor people had the last laugh by giving me only an obsolescent model to flog round the place when I reached the stage of realising my fee. My feelings about word-processors, already cool, were further lowered when a friend told me how he had blotted out, simply by pressing the wrong button, the whole of a speech he had written to be delivered at his old school. I happen to be less than good at buttons and am anyway not by any manner of means the one to risk losing a whole novel that way, or even a whole line of one. In any case, most words you read outside newspapers will still have reached you through the agency of a typewriter or some- thing even more primitive, like a human hand holding a pen.

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Unique

This word is already used colloquially to mean something like 'unusual', and many are the denunciations that its appearance with qualifiers (rather unique, very unique) has excited. This misuse is so notorious among the almost- literate that, like the split infinitive, anything reminiscent of it is best avoided. The phrase, or a phrase like, rather unique, meaning something of the order of 'unique in some ways though perhaps not in others', seems to me defensible in usage and semantics, but I would not advise anybody to use it who fancies a quiet life. It would be no less risky to mention those long-dead pedants who once campaigned against almost invariably on similar grounds.

Unities

A good deal was heard of these when I was a lad, nothing much now except retrospectively, historically. The unity of time was preserved if the entire action of a play (fable, story, novel) occupied no more than twenty-four hours, that of place if changes of scene were small and unobtrusive, that of action if everything introduced bore on the main action. Only the third has scope as well as substance, and the example of Hamlet suggests its inadequacy. Nevertheless any thorough critique of that play would have to take large

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account of its neglect of the unity of action, though probably not under that name.

University

What constitutes a university, and how that might differ from what constitutes a polytechnic or other establishment for vocational training, it is not my present business to expound. Nevertheless it cannot be said too often that edu- cation is one thing and instruction, however worthy, neces- sary and incidentally or momentarily educative, another.

Up to a point, Lord Copper

I wonder how many users of this expression could say where it comes from. Not a majority, to judge by the number of people who seem to think it registers tepid agreement, as the first four words by themselves would, with Lord Copper being named as part of some exotic ritual, perhaps propi- tiatory in derivation. I have said 'V p to a point' in conver- sation before now and set a dunce or two mechanically intoning 'Lord Copper' as if to complete a mantra. I was reminded of the lady who, having once heard somebody say 'Surprise, surprise' but not noticed the sarcastic intention, said brightly, 'Oh, what a lovely surprise, surprise' on being offered a chocolate. In fact 'Up to a point, Lord Copper' was said by an underling to the great newspaper proprietor' in order to register the strongest disagreement thought to be safe. See Scoop, by Evelyn Waugh. Outside its context the phrase may be misleading and should be dropped.

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Viable

This word was once applied only to foetuses and meant 'capable of being brought to (full) term', and when meta- phorically used should still observe the connection. In fact viable should be dropped altogether, not for any elaborate semantic reason but simply because it has taken the fancy of every trendy little twit on the look-out for a posh word for feasible, practicable.

Virile

This is a few years ago now, but I cannot resist dropping a reminder that, attacked by collective illiteracy more severely than usual, journalists forgot that the word descended not very far from the Latin vir, man (as opposed to a woman) and meant by rights 'having masculine vigour or strength', not just 'vigorous, full of beans', and so it was not all right to say, among other things, that an old lady was still virile at the age of ninety-three. So far, so entirely predictable, but nobody could have guessed Fowler's comment that in this case the reporter had probably associated virility 'with viridus green, not vir man, and was thinking of a green old age'. End of note.

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Visitor's London

Visitor's London

This usage, which could be called a false possessive, is an import from the USA, along with England's London. The latter takes care of those who, hearing perhaps of Bucking- ham Palace in London, need to be told that neither London, Ontario nor London, Ohio is meant, though London, England used to do that job efficiently enough without a vexatious apostrophe. England's London may be considered a solecism or a mis- nomer, but England's Helicon is neither. This is the title of a book published in 1600, an anthology containing poems by Sidney, Spenser, Drayton and others. The original Heli- con was a Greek mountain sacred to the Muses, who had a temple there. The phrase England's Helicon is thus not semantically on all fours with England's London. The one says something like 'if there were a Mt Helicon in England, its native Muses would surely smile on the contents of this volume,' whereas the other, like California's Death Valley, Pisa's Leaning Tower and the rest, does not even make a claim to ownership but just says limply that such
and-such a thing is to be found in such-and-such a place. For all that, expressions like Pepys's London are defensible. They do not claim any kind of proprietorship but are obvi- ous shorthand for London as so-and-so knew it. But if an adjective exists it should be used in such contexts, Victorian not Victoria's London.

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Watershed

Here I think is a lonely instance of a vulgarisation being turned back on itself. Once, a watershed was a line of separation between waters flowing to different rivers or basins or seas; the second element, scheide, of the German word from which watershed is taken is indeed cognate with the English verb shed and means 'boundary'. Next, watershed was popularised and misapplied to mean a catchment area ('the school became a watershed for all children born in this part of South
ondon'). Finally, the word reverted to its old hydrographical sense. Or did so in effect; more accurately, perhaps, the popularisation faded away and the true techni- cal meaning carried on as before.

Weave

The weave in the fabric sense and the weave in the moving (to and fro) sense are different words, each with its separate line of descent from an earlier stage of the language. So anyone who says anything like 'The car wove its way through the lines of traffic' is guilty of a solecism. The preterite of weave-moving is weaved.

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Welsh rarebit

The rarebit part of this expression is not genuine. The Welsh part is, or more nearly is, recalling as it does a now-forgotten era when the Welsh people were supposed to have a passion for cheese. I have no way of knowing how truly this reflects Welsh dietetic habits in, let us say, the seventeenth century, but it seems plausible that an indigent pastoral people would have snapped up all the eatables they could find, very much including cheese, which lends itself to being turned into a hot dish for the family with the aid of a dab of butter and a little ale and pepper and salt. Clearly, the English called the result a Welsh rabbit partly in jest, partly as a sneer - more jest than sneer, probably, since over the years the English have always been much more friendly to the Welsh than to the Scots or Irish. To call a lump of toasted cheese a rabbit shows the same bantering spirit as, more recently, a mishit at cricket got dubbed a Chinese cut, less commonly a Czechoslovakian one. The phrase Welsh rabbit dates from the earlier eighteenth century. Welsh rarebit is much later, and no evidence exists of the independent use of rarebit to mean delicacy or any- thing else. The COD gives it as the result of popular ety- mology. With all respect, I think the COD is wrong here. I think that rarebit is more likely to be a juvenile form of political correctness, in
that it anticipates and forestalls objection by the Welsh, none of whorD is known to have bothered to complain, to something just conceivably derogatory to them like Welsh rabbit. But I have no strong or even very definite feelings on the point. I had to laugh, though, when I once picked up the menu at a posh restaurant, the sort of menu where they print the name of the chap whose recipe they say they use, and saw among the afters 'Welsh Rabbit Llewelyn Rhys'. In my

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experience Welshmen rarely miss jokes wherever they may be aimed.

What x is (all) about

It seems important not to spend a moment more than strictly necessary in denouncing this fearful gobbet of trend. Anybody who speaks or writes to the effect that anything is what anything, anything at all from aardvarks to zymotics, is about, especially all about, deserves exclusion from the ways and habitations of mankind forthwith and without possibility of remission in the foreseeable future.

Whizz

English spelling is littered with intrusive letters that may have been pronounced at some earlier stage but are not, or not everywhere, these days. Thus initial K in words like knight and knee was probably still sounded by some speakers in some areas in the eighteenth century; initial P in words like psychology and perhaps pterodactyl is supposed to have lasted well into the twentieth, although I myself, born in 1922, never heard it. Nowadays initial P in such words is sounded no more, with the annoying result among others that psychosis, gross mental derangement, sounds just the same as sycosis, a form of shaving-rash. Others have gone too at less measurable times, like the H in ghastly and ghost, which was actually sneaked in by early printers and never pronounced. The case for its retention in writing, however, has become a definite part of the whole case against spelling reform. One letter formerly sounded everywhere is the H in imi- tatives like whizz and whack, relative-interrogatives like which and what, and plenty of other words like wheat and

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whet. In all cases the H-sound precedes the W-sound and ancestral forms show the H coming first too in written records. (Indeed to pronounce such an H immediately after a W is not very practicable for normal English-speakers, however straightforward it may be for some others.) That particular H is still naturally sounded in parts of Scotland, Ireland and America, at any rate among older speakers. Irish English especially, perhaps like the Irish language, was always heavily aspirated, and in the supposed rustic or below-stairs variant phwat for what we can hear an attempt to indicate such an initial cluster of sounds. The Scottish consonant ch, as in loch, might have come closer, but that would have entailed explanation and some real interest on the reader's part. The most important word in the foregoing par
graph is 'naturally', and in this matter as in others naturalness, lack of self-consciousness, must set such speakers at a priceless advantage over those who speak as they think they should. No affectation is easier to detect than a phoney HW begin- ning to wh- words, with its taint of such cobwebbed nooks as elocution classes. Let us hope that we shall soon hear no more of this artificiality. I only hope I am wrong when I uneasily sense its impending revival among self-admiring broadcasters.

Whom

It has become safe to say that, except in funeral addresses and the like, or as a joke, whom is no longer heard from speakers of English. The word is found in formal prose, sometimes when who is required, as in Unfortunately I had not then heard whom he was. On other occasions who is found in prose formal enough to make some readers feel that whom, if perhaps not positively required, would be preferable as more respectful, as in I was then presented to His Royal High-

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ness, who I felt was known to me already from our previous meeting. Here no rule of thumb is possible for the writer, but it may be helpful to keep on the look-out for whom territory and at other times try to forget the word altogether.

Whose

The theoretical lexicon of the English language contains no relative pronoun of the inanimate in a genitive sense. In other and perhaps less forbidding words, you can talk about 'the lady, whose figure was ample and genuine', but not, theoretically, 'the lady's figure, whose amplitude and genu- ineness were equally obvious'; you have to say something like 'the lady's figure, the amplitude and genuineness of which were equally obvious'. It is now over sixty years since Fowler was denouncing this 'rule' as about as helpful as the one that forbade putting a preposition at the end of a sentence. He produced a real example with no fewer than twelve words in the which clause before the reader got to which itself. But now, sixty years later as I say, writers are still refusing to allow which its full natural freedom and still insisting on writing about 'the dictionary, the peerless scholarship and consequent utter reliability in trying circumstances of which have assisted our task' and refusing to write about 'the dictionary, whose peerless scholarship and consequent utter reliability in try- ing circumstances have assisted our task'. Nobody who has ever had to string half a dozen sentences together will think that the licence to write the second kind of sentence instead of the first is not worth bothering about.

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. - Wlse

There are a few words with -wise incorporated in them so firmly that the fusion has become an established word, such as likewise, otherwise, clockwise, anticlockwise, perhaps crabwise. Elsewhere, for instance in moneywise ('the project is sound moneywise') or in clubwise, say ('the soldier used his rifle clubwise'), a kind of promiscuity seems about to rage. Gen- eral ridicule or weariness may quell it; nothing else seems likely to.

W omanese

It has long been noticed, by members of both sexes in their different ways, that men and women speak discrete languages, or more precisely they speak closely related vari- ants of a single language. Each variant is well enough under- stood across the sexual divide, but attempts to treat the two as one are as unproductive as any other chimera about the essential sameness of men and women. The word reason- able, to take a familiar case, changes meaning with the sex of its user. So a wife might say of her husband that it was not reasonable of him to expect her to be reasonable on some stated occasion and be understood, not as one making a mildly cynical, moderately impartial, worldly-wise remark on a difference between the two sexes, but as putting for- ward a serious, valid complaint about typical male insensi- tivity - putting it to another female, naturally. No doubt I have already come too far to be safe. I had better take refuge behind the rock-hard factual observation that, unlike most men, women are always getting set phrases wrong. This propensity of theirs was noted at least as far back as the works of Somerset Maugham (1874-1965), if not much further in the character of Mrs Malaprop in Sheri- dan's The Rivals of 1775, whose nice derangement of

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epitaphs may have struck many auditors as not close enough for discomfort but never, surely, as being put into the mouth or a character of the wrong sex. It is worth noting not only as required but also as accurate that Mrs Malaprop's mis- takes are nearly enough on target to be, like so many of this type, inners rather than outers or hopeless misses. You can always guess at once what she nearly said. My ignorance of foreign languages is far too deep for me even to conjecture what female behaviour there might be. The novels and stories of Peter DeVries, however, from Tunnel of Love (1954) onwards, make it clear that such divergences or variations (or whatever one is to call them) of self-expression thrive in the land of the free. There and only there, possibly, could a wife have said to a husband in reference to some third party, 'No, you're wrong, he's not a profound character, at least only on the surface. Deep down he's shallow.' This is perhaps not exactly a malaprop- ism but that it is a specimen of womanese will be doubted by no normal male who has talked to a normal female for more than five minutes. Such a one will, if he is any good, have seen that examples of womanese and of how men respond to them capture a pair of truths about the sexes in a way that no discourse in run-of-the-mill English could. So to our own time and place. I fill out this pioneering study by reproducing a string of such cases as listed in a novel of 1995. Note the wide range of styles ventured into. All phrases quoted are warranted truthful instances of womanese, presented flat. Vicious snowball. Quicksand wit. Up gum street. Beyond contempt. On its death legs. Hubbub of activity. When it came down to the crunch. Greaseboat. He lost his top and she blew her rag. And I was talking aloud - once, just once, but once. I t is not extraordinary that the extraterrestrial origin of women was a recurrent theme of science fiction, though I have never seen their imperfect grasp of their native lan- guage put forward as one more piece of evidence.

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Wrath, wroth

These words for (righteous) anger and (righteously) angry are now too archaic for use in serious conversation: 'poet., rhet. or joc.' says COD against wrath. Even so, the noun appears in solemn places like newspaper headlines, this very day in the front-page banner of a popular daily to describe the Tory backbench response to some of the Chancellor's budget proposals. The biblical and other associations of wrath make it suitable for a more serious and more disin- terested emotion than that denoted by anger on its own. Pronounce wrath to rhyme with moth, and wroth, now surely an obsolete word, to rhyme with both. Avoid them equally in whatever you may say or write yourself.

Writing: repetitions

Philip Larkin once said he admired Hemingway for his work-habits more than any other writer. 'You know how when you start in the morning it's like getting blood out of a stone to begin with, with lots of time spent just staring at the blank paper and going out for a pee and thank God when the phone rings, and then you gradually speed up so that after an hour or more the stuff's coming quite easily, well of course I don't mean easily, just a bit faster - you get that, don't you? I think probably most writers do. Well, our Ernie's no exception there, only when he gets to the point where he starts speeding up, he stops writing.' 'For the day?' 'He sOITletimes goes back before the first evening drink like some people and starts again.' 'I don't see much to admire in any of that. He's cutting out the only time he might actually enjoy writing if he's . , ever gOIng to.

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CThat's what's admirable. Any fool can wallow in what he does without really trying.' It used to be fashionable to say of things like Heming- way's alleged work-habits that there was something 'very English' about going on as if only what you rather disliked doing had a chance of producing anything remotely worth while. But it is no secret that Hemingway was not merely American but one of a characteristically self-conscious kind, about as un-English as he could get without ceasing to speak and write in that language. One wonders if there may not be something about that language that tends to enforce Protestantism, even Puritanism, on the user. But again, it was the English (and Protestant) Larkin who said or wrote, as a memento to all literary persons, 'No one will enjoy reading what you have not enjoyed writing.' After all, it could only have been a Frenchman or Irishman who held the view that to write in the expectation of being enjoyed denoted a certain simplicity of mind. When I look back over my own first drafts, something I very rarely do except while constructing a fair copy, I notice several passages that seem to have originated in that early, costive period of a day's stint. They are distinguishable by the toilsome conscientiousness with which typing errors are corrected, unnecessary words x-ed out, repetitions avoided. Paragraphs first-drafted later in the day let such blemishes stand as their perpetrator confidently entrusts their rectification to some time in the future. Nearer the start, writers are nervous, feeling their way, killing time by performing necessary but postponable tasks, doing the mechanised equivalent of circling with their elbows before actually putting pen to paper. This sort of explanation for slow beginnings appeals to me quite as much as any literary- doctrinal farrago. Both ways of looking at matutinal awkwardness, how- ever, agree that unintentional repetition is the most perni- cious of errors. There could be no clearer sign of a writer

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who is incompetent, lazy, hurried, preoccupied, demoral- ised. Two of the finest poems in our language are almost ruined right at the start, where their early drafts presumably began. Goldsmith's Deserted Village notoriously kicks off with an irremediable and destructive piece of self-repetition that hardly needs emphasising italica:

I II fares the land, to hastening ills a prey, Where wealth accumulates, and men decay. . .

Did Johnson, who according to Boswell wrote the last four lines of the poem, never mention its disastrous opening? All the reader can do now is hold his nose and hurry on to less noisome pastures, as must the reader of Blake's 'London', which opens with the stanza:

I wander through each chartered street Near where the chartered Thames does flow, And mark in every face I meet Marks of weakness, marks of woe.

Here the repetition of 'chartered', whatever it means exactly, like the repetition of 'every' in the next stanza, is unmistak- ably purposeful or advertent, that of'mark(s)' unmistakably negligent and inadvertent. Both poets were too eager to get on with the poem concerned or the next one to reread their first drafts to any purpose, though with Blake at least one cannot be sure that some pissy notion of spontaneity may have stood in the way of unarguably necessary correction. But then if those who think like Hemingway, who incidentally often repeated words on purpose, sense a possibly fruitful difference between what their nine and eleven o'clock selves produce, perhaps they are right. I find it most unlikely. Before sitting down to this entry I half-intended it to be an introduction of some sort to an illustrated account, not of how to write well, but of what non-grammatical

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faults to look out for. I would show a passage of fiction full of assonances, excessive alliteration, etc., and point these out. No great thought was required to convince me that here was a region in which a feigned example hath not anything like as much force to teach as a true example. A useful true example would take some finding and be imposs- ibly long and diffuse even if found; a feigned example could never seem natural and so could not be useful. Nevertheless the point is too important to be brushed aside with a men- tion and an apology. A detailed generalisation will have to do instead. The fundamental generalisation is clearly that an inadver- tent repetition, or anything that could reasonably be mis- taken for one, is bad. I have counted six kinds of harmful repetItIon.

I. Rhyme. As in You have to pay on the appointed day. 'Rich rhyme' is just as bad, as in It must be conceded that we have succeeded. 2. Likeness of vowel sounds falling short of actual rhyme, as in The bill must be paid on the appointed day. 3. Excessive alliteration, as in Public pressure compels pri- vate persons to pay as promptly as postal collections permit. Three words running with the same initial letter or sound is probably the limit in ordinary prose. Read out what you have first-drafted and see. 4. Persistent verse-like rhythms, as in Many letters posted in the middle of the day never reach their destination till a day or two has passed. Victocian writers, especially Dickens, were liable to write blank verse (printed as prose) in passages of strong emotion. 5. Too many words of the same form, as those that end in -ing, -y (not least -Iy) and -tion. Prose that appears at first sight to be just boring often harbours too many of these. I try as a rough rule not to use any of them more than once or twice in a sentence.

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6. Same word reappearing. Particularly easy to fall into when the word in question is common in more than one meaning, as look, like, etc. Very common words, as any, after, etc., can probably be repeated.

Like other kinds of fault, this one is more readily detected by reading a passage aloud, but whatever faculty it may be that helps the writer not to repeat words and sounds is not evenly distributed. Philip Larkin was helped by a fastidious temperament and ferocious conscientiousness, and was able to boast, justifiably I think, that the only words in Jill to be repeated were of the status of and or the. For all that, he perpetrated an ungainly repetition many years later, near the end of one of his best and most finely crafted poems, 'Going, Going':

Most things are never meant, This won't be, most likely. . .

I refrained from telling him that Tennyson would never have let that through. Another writer who evidently had a faultless ear was Chesterton. Even in his journalism, often written against time, he never inadvertently repeats a sound. Or if he does, I may well have missed it. My own non-repetitive gifts are all of the will, and the will fluctuates. Quite likely I have perpetrated the ineptitude in this very article, but to be rebuked for such inconsistency cuts no ice with me. I chime in with the warrant officer's plea, 'Don't do as I do, do as I say.'

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Y e olde

Grammarians will tell you that the letter at the front of ye olde is not a Y but a representation of an obsolete letter, an edh or eth, that looked a bit like a Y. The edh or eth sounded like a th and the whole phrase should be pronounced indis- tinguishably from the old. This is the sort of thing that gets grammarians a bad name. It may not be the funniest jest in the world, but a lot of people have at least used and understood expressions like ye olde lettering, meaning perhaps Gothic type or script. Here ye olde must be pronounced yee oldie if the meaning, along with a possible gleam of humour, is not to be lost. Similarly, when claiming the authorship of Shakespeare's plays Marlowe must say, 'Teehee It was me all yee [not the] time.'

Yoo and 00

This is a question of pure pronunciation and therefore bor- ing or beside the point to a minority of readers, not in my estimate a large minority. Grown men will come to blows no less readily over the correct pronunciation of heinous, for example, than about who really won the last war. I had better say immediately that no one is, perhaps no one could be, totally consistent about how he or she pro- nounces the first syllable of beautiful, suitable, dewdrop, bllJe- bottle, glue-pot, fluted and other such words, and just as

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immediately that I am an elderly Londoner of lower-middle- class origin. Now in many phonetic situations the speaker has a choice between a yoo sound and a plain 00 sound. Which choice that speaker makes depends on several things, including place of origin, age and social class. The reaction of hearers is similarly influenced, with some such overall result as the following: To say yoo where others would say plain 00 may strike some hearers as prissy, old-fashioned and over-educated. Thus my sons, born in the I 94os, ridicule me for saying syootable and syoo for suitable and sue; they would use the plain 00. Similarly, it sounds old-fashioned and provincial to me when I hear a speaker in Wales talk about a flyoot (flute) or a scryoo (screw) or the colour blyoo. And if I were to come across an upper-class speaker who said flyoot and lyoot (lute) and glyoo (glue) I should conclude among other things that he was very old indeed, or at least old-fashioned. Those who say bootiful andfoo (few), if any still do outside Norfolk turkey commercials, also seem to me old-fashioned and provincial. No doubt people like my sons would respond similarly, though perhaps more incredulously. I myself regard those who would say tootor (tutor) or toon as hopelessly down-market. A rough consensus seems to emerge whereby pronunci- ations with yoo strike some hearers as affected, while pronun- ciations with 00 strike some others as bucolic or vulgar. Such displays of mild but inflammable prejudice strike me as peculiarly English.

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Glossary

In compiling this book I have constantly had forced on me afresh the extent to which the subject of English grammar has in this country been founded on the subject of Latin. The two languages are actually not very similar, and Latin is now rarely taught anywhere, yet it has left strong traces in our gram- matical vocabulary and modes of thought. This has brought me here a dilemma between being too Latinate and not Latin- ate enough, between saying too much to maintain a sense of direction and saying too little to be clear. I have tried to com- promise, but my readers are bound to feel a loss of certainty here and there, especially in this Glossary. I can only ask their indulgence.

allegory. An account of one thing in the guise of another. Example: Pilgrim's Progress is an allegory of human life. The Faerie Queen is a series of allegories. Kafka's stories are largely allegorical.

aorist. Pronounced (when I last used to word) AIRist. The name of a generic past tense in classical Greek, from a word meaning 'indefinite'; not a perfect, not an imperfect, not a pluperfect, just past. Normally used as a classy synonym for preterite o

past historic, but nicely applied to an American idiom whereby people say, 'The upstate train just came in,' meaning it came in a few seconds or a couple of minutes ago and is quite likely still in. A British speaker would have had to use the perfect and say, 'The train's just come in.'

assimilation. Making one sound more like another, usually the

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one that follows. For instance, the word impossible started life as a combination of two words of which the first was in meaning not, but the n became m by assimilation. Uneducated speech in London and elsewhere is full of assimi- lations, and this tendency is probably on the increase. I cannot clearly remember hearing somebody talk about a dime breed (meaning 'a dying breed') more than ten or twenty years ago. We also reportedly have the proper names Samamfa (Samantha) and Scumforpe (Scunthorpe).

Cases. See also article on CASE, where it is suggested among other things that some English words in a sentence have cases even though these are not detectable as inflections. The traditional six cases affecting nouns, pronouns and adjec- tives are' as follows:

nominative, the naming case. A noun forming the subject of a sentence or, if an adjective, part of that subject. Example in English: The cat sat on the mat. Also: The black cat is mIne. vocative, the calling case. In all English and nearly all Latin nouns the same in appearance as the nominative. Used when addressing or invoking some person or abstraction. Examples: Call me tomorrow, Percy. 0 Liberty, what crimes are commit- ted in thy name! accusative, the picking-out case. A noun etc. forming the object of a sentence or something aimed at. Examples: Caesar will attack Rome. Percy will perhaps go to Wigan for the weekend. genitive, the ownership or source case, corresponding to of or from. Can be distinguished by's if the owner or source is a person. Examples: Bill's nose. The adverse vote was Bill's. dative, the giving case, corresponding to to or for and expressing indirect or recipient. Examples; Give me your hand. I showed Jenkins who was master. ablative, sometimes called instrumental, the taking-away or

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what-did-it case, corresponding to source or cause. Examples: The chutney came from India. He was killed by criminals.

caesura. Sizz- YOO-ruh. A cut or cutting. A technical term in Greek or Latin versification, now usually meaning a heavy break in a line of English verse. Example, from a sonnet to Shakespeare: Others abide our question. Thou art free. Caesura at full stop after question.

chiasmus. Kigh-AZZmus. Two phrases going together of which the second inverts the order of the first. Example: I cannot dig; to beg I am ashamed. Named after the Greek letter khi or chi, which is shaped like a (St Andrew's) cross.

clause. A sentence, or in phrases like relative clause, subordinate clause, a distinct part of one.

cognate. A word descended from an ancestor it shares with another in a different language is said to be cognate with it, or a cognate of it. Example: The word father in English and the word vater in German are cognate(s). Neither is directly descended from the other, a provision that roles out, say, arid as cognate with Latin aridus, its direct ancestor.

concessive clause. One introduced by although or equivalent.

consecutive clause. On
introduced by with the consequence that or equivalent.

dissimilation. Making one sound less like another; cf. assimilation. The COD example is cinnamon, at an earlier stage cinnamom. Repeated consonants, especially perhaps labials, can be difficult to say. I remember a neighbour who could never get her tongue round the second half of chrysanthemum.

English, Old, Middle and Modern English. In the popular mind,

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or that of most well-wishers of respectful dealings with our language, Old English, often styled old English, runs from the beginning to when people began to spell properly (apart from a few olde-isms like smoaking and musick), and modern English describes the rest, perhaps with the exception of Middle English which is to do with Chaucer. 'The reality is more definite without being quite satisfactorily defined.

Old English was the language of England that ran from the beginnings to about AD 1150. Its general resemblance to present-day English is small, in fact if speakers of it could be reconstituted we should not be able to understand their speech, nor they ours, though a written transcript might give us some inkling. Some little Old English survives in manuscript. It seems to me too scanty and remote for any artistic merit to have survived in it, but it is of linguistic interest, naturally. Middle English runs from about 1150 to about 1500. It contains many words that, often with differences in spelling and pronunciation, survive in the present-day language, many others too that have changed their meaning or altogether gone out of use. There are very large remains of Middle English literature and other writing and its greatest exponent was undoubtedly Geoffrey Chaucer (c. 1340-1400), though others are important. Modern English is taken to have begun about AD 1500. Thus Shakespeare wrote entirely in it, which does not mean that what he and his contemporaries wrote is always readily intelligible to us or to our contemporaries. For one thing, the language has gone on changing since then.

By the way, only a barbarian talks of old English when Elizabethan or Jacobean or other 'old-fashioned English' is meant.

figures of speech. These were once all the rage, and I can remember

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learning the difference between hypallage and synecdoche, and much good it did me. The two best known in English today are simile and metaphor. A simile is a comparison openly expressed as such. Example: The ship goes through the sea (in the same way) as a plough goes through the soil. A metaphor is a concentrated comparison that avoids like or as. Example: The ship ploughs (through) the sea. Metaphor is also used less closely to mean a fanciful but on consideration apt comparison, as in This suggestion gave him food for thought. Other figures of speech include hyperbole, exaggeration for emphasis, sometimes flowery, as in A thousand thanks!, often colloquial and thoughtless, as in ['m dying for a smoke; litotes or meiosis, rhetorical understatement, as in He was not sorry to rest a while; personification, which needs no explaining: rhetorical ques- tion, one to which the answer is self-evident, as in Who's like us?: zeugma, the yoking-together of two nouns or noun phrases by a single verb, etc., as in She left in high dudgeon and a minicab. The last is an example of what Fowler would have called a battered ornament and was never very funny.

gerund. This is a verbal noun. Example: the art of loving.

gerundive. This is a verbal adjective. Example: my loving wife. Fowler says there is no gerundive in English, only a participle. He writes 2000 words on the gerund alone. In my experience you will not get very far with gerund/gerundive unless you know Latin, nor a great deal further if you do.

heroic. Heroic poetry is epic; heroic verse is strictly Greek or Latin hexameters or English blank verse; the heroic couplet is two rhym- ing lines, each of five iambic feet (see below); heroic virtues, or heroic virtues, are fortitude and loyalty and whatever else you please.

hexameter. A six-measure line of Greek or Latin verse. The hex- ameter has been tried in English but never successfully.

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ictus. Metrical ictus is the regular beat of the verse, falling in the normal English jambic line on the even-numbered syllables.

loan word. The English word chauffeur is spoken of as a loan word from the French, an unsatisfactory term because real loans have to be paid back. But the usage is well entrenched and the only other that comes to mind, whereby chauffeur is spoken of as a hon-owing from the French, offers the same defective image. Never mind.

locative. The locative case of a noun (if one exists) indicates the place where something-or-other. It is an extra to the familiar six cases. Although there are vestiges of it in Latin, the locative had no forms of its own and altogether is something to have heard of rather than taken account of.

metre and rhythm. Metre is regular and regularly recurring, as in iambic metre where the metric stress alternates uniformly all through; rhythm varies from line to line with the run of the words and depends on their meaning. So the metre of Bare ruined choirs, where late the sweet hirds sang would go ti-tum-ti-tum-ti- tum-ti-tum-ti-tum; the rhythm would go tum-tum-ti-turn (pause) tum-tum-ti-tum-tum-tum; if I had you here I could demonstrate in five seconds. Playing off the two kinds of stress against each other gives English poetry its characteristic effect.

metrical feet. The names of these in English are based on the usage in Latin. The commonest of these is the iamhus, a light stress followed by a heavy one, example return. Others include the trochee, heavy followed by light, as hrother; the dactyl, heavy followed by two light, as auditor; the anapaest, two light followed by one heavy, as cigarette.

ohject, direct and indirect. That which is directly, or indirectly, affected by the verb in a sentence. In Lend me your ears, for

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instance, your ears (thing lent) is the direct object and me (person lent to) the indirect object.

pathetic fallacy. Anybody who happens not to know this phrase already, as it were, is ludicrously distant from being able to work out what it means, and the thing itself has now been all but silenced by ridicule; nevertheless duty still calls. Ruskin originally coined the phrase. In Fowler's words the so-called fallacy means 'the tendency to credit nature with human emo- tions', and 'the wind gave a howl of disappointed fury at its victim's escape' is often given as an example. Adjectives applied to the sea are especially fraught with this danger, or said to be.

penultimate. Means 'last but one', not, as increasingly in USA, 'the really last, last in a big way'.

prosody. The roles of verse composition, chiefly involving a list of metres and how to use them, derived from study of existing practIce.

saga. Technically, a medieval Scandinavian prose narrative, involving historical facts. More recently a long historical narra- tive in fictional form ('The Forsyte Saga') or a sequence of real-life events (the Nixon saga).

subjunctive. Known in full as the subjunctive mood. The last word is not good here, not illuminating. Mode, not originally connected with it, is better. The reference is to the form or forms of verb showing how it is to be taken, as an expression of fact, command, wish, etc. The further one ventures into this subject without benefit of Latin, the more likely one is to get bogged down. It is more practical to avoid any involvement. This is possible if two simple rules are observed, as follows:

I. Avoid an if-clause or a virtual if-clause when using any part

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of the verb to be in any capacity, however apparently trivial. 2. Be careful with any American writings, which often indulge in subjunctive forms, especially if the context seems precise or public in any way. Do not imitate them. If necessary, mentally translate them into familiar indicative English.

Any sentence with a subjunctive form in it (e.g. 'it was decided that we adjourn' rather than 'that we should adjourn') is suspect. N.B.: The above rules are not flippant or satirical.

tense. The tense of a verb marks the time its action takes place, and the word ultimately descends from Latin tempus, 'time', so present, future, past. This simple scheme would give every verb a maximum of three tenses. Unfortunately a verbal form can also indicate whether the action is complete or not and other subtleties. Thus a Latin verb usually has a present sense, I go; a simple future, I shall go; an imperfect (incomplete past), I was going; a perfect, past action completed, I have gone or I went; a future perfect, I shall have gone; and a pluperfect, i.e. more than perfect, I had gone. It would make good sense to forget the whole of the last sentence instantly, were it not that some writers give versions of the names of Latin tenses when referring to the very different modes used in English to denote the time or completeness etc. of an action, the two being quite disparate languages except in some points of vocabulary. This abbreviated sketch of the matter is intended to help you find your way from one language to another when Latin expressions describe English usages. Note that the preterite, a term not used with Latin verbs, is the historic past tense, like Latin perfect in the second aspect described above, I went.

voice. This sounds formidable, according to the COD the 'set of forms of a verb showing relation of the subject to the action (ACTIVE, PASSIVE, MIDDLE, voice); verb in this form.' Pfui! Except for its occurrence in Ancient Greek, there is no middle voice

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worth bothering about, and an example of a verb-form in the active, 'doing', voice is I love, and an example of a verb-form in the passive, 'acted upon', voice is I am loved, and that is that.

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ABC of Plain Words, The (Gowers), xii ablative case, 254-5 accents, 167, 183 accusative case, 3 2 , 254 acronyms, 29 address, forms of, 195-6 advertisements, I 17- 18 Afrikaans, I 16 all right, alright, 6-7 American Dictionary of the English Language (Webster), 9 American English, 8-12; accent, 167; accentuation, 2-3; 'alternate world', 8, 149; c-athon', 19-20; 'bath', 2 I; 'billion', 24; 'convince', 36; dangling participles, 39-40; 'elevator', 57-8; Germanisms, 86-7; 'gorged-snake' construction, 89-90; 'kids', 122; letter-writing, 19 6 ; 'penultimate', 259; pronunciation, 17 I, 174, 177; 'should' and 'would', 210; 'show me a good loser', 100; 'specialty', 61;

Index

spellings, 164, 242; 'suckling pig', 220; vowels (long or short), 128 Americans, Native, 44 Amis, Martin, 73 anapaest, 258 archaisms, 5 argot, 115 asparagus, 159 avocado, 160-1 Ayer, A.J., 17

Ballard, J.G., 175 Basque, 44 BBC, 2, 183, 186 BBC Pronouncing Dictionary of British Names, The . . . Xll1 Beerbohm, Max, 174 belfry, 160 Benn, Tony, 188 Bible, 17, 4 6 , 157, 193, 208 Blake, William, 248 Bloomfield, Leonard, xiii, 177 Booker Prize, 74 Boots' Booklovers' Library, 72, 73 Boswell, James, 248 Breton, 44

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broadcasting, 2, 168, 169-70, 179 Browning, Robert, 152 Burgess, Anthony, 1 I, 12 I, 17° Byron, lord, 161-2

Calverley, C.S., 152 cant, 1 1 5, 1 16 Canute, King, 65 cases, 254 - 5, see also accusative, dative, nominative, possessIve Castro, Fidel, 208 Catalan, 44, 45 Catullus, 52 Cecil, Lord David, 186 Celtic, 44 Cervantes, Miguel de, 182 Chaucer, Geoffrey, 203, 256 Chauvin, Nicolas, 33 Chesterton, G.K., 83, 15 2 , 213, 25° Chomsky, Noam, xiii Christmas cards, 132-3 Classic FM, 34, 170 clauses, 255 cOIns, 70 Collins Gem Dictionary of English Spelling 220 colloquialisms, 4, 35-6, 122 comedy, 152-3 Complete Plain Words, The (Gowers), xii Concise Oxford Dictionary, The (COD), xi, 75; 'ate', 19; 'brolly', 116; · bureaucrat' ,

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28; 'destination', 43; .direct', 127; .fine toothcomb', 69-70; 'gay', 83; 'girl', 203; 'hamstrung', 94; 'idiom', , . ., 105; InterneCIne, 112; 'ironical', 112 - 1 3; 'jejune', 119; 'kids', 122; 'meticulous', 133 -4; 'obscenity', 139; .OK', 141; 'Pall Mall', 130; 'received pronunciation', 8 ' , 1 3; sentence, 200; 'shibboleth', 208; 'sycophant', 221; 'voice', 260; 'Welsh rarebit', 240; 'wrath', 246

dactyl, 258 Daily Mirror Style (Waterhouse), Xll Dale, F.R., 53 Danish, 44 dative case, 3 2 , 254 Davies, Sir John, 209 decimal currency, 70, see also metric system DeVries, Peter, 245 Dickens, Charles, 47, 145, 249 dictionaries, xi-xii, 46-7 Dictionary of Modern English Usage, see Fowler Dryden, John, 154 due to, 147-8 Dummett, Michael, xii Dutch, 44, 45

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Easter Day, 142 Elephant and Castle, 162 Elgar, Edward, 175 Eliot, T .S., 36, 60 etymology, popular, 159-62

female, 202 feminism, 33, 67- 8 figures of speech, 4, 256-7 Finno-Ugrian,45- 6 Firbank, Ronald, 152 Flemish, 44 Follett, Wilson, xii, 204 forehead, 172 foreign names, 49 forever, 67 Forster, E.M., 231 Fowler, H.W. (Modern English Usage), 75-7; influence, vii, xii, 30 - I; on '-able', I; on 'ale', 5; on 'alright', 6; on 'also', 7; on ' b ' ureaucrat , 27; on 'coastal', 34; on 'delusion', 43; on didacticism, 4 8 -9; , k ' on e e out, 30 - I; on 'especial', 6 I; on 'fallacy', 259; on figures of speech, 257; on 'fivepence', 70; on 'fortuitous', 7 I; on genteelisms, 85; on gerundives, 257; on 'hamstringed', 94; on hyphens, 103, 104; on 'idiom', 1°5; on 'if and when', 106; on '-ise' and ,. , -lze, I 13; on

'malnutrition', 130; on 'meticulous', I 33; on 'only', 142-3; on pairs of words, 149-50; on popularising a technicality, 146; on pronunciation, 168, 172-6; on puns, 179; on split infinitives, 2 17- 18; on 'sycophant', 22 I; on 'till' and 'until', 229; on unattached participles, 40; on 'unless and until', 107; on 'virile', 237; on vogue- words, 20; on 'which', 243 Franklin, Benjamin, 9 Fraser, Bruce, xii French: 'brochure', 27; 'bureaucrat', 28; expressions, 78-82; 'femme', 202; Latin origins, 155 -6; menus, 79; Norman, 15 6 ; Old French, 22; pronunciation, 2, 78-82; translation into, 45 full stops, 29- 30, 200

Gaelic, 44 gender, 84, 20 7- 8 genitive case, 254, see also possessIve case Gere, Richard, 96 German: language, 45; pronuncIatIon, 59, 177 gerund, 63-4, 257 gerundive, 257

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one-dimensional, 50 Ormond, Julia, 96 Orwell, George, 4, 127, 13 6 , 193 Oxford English Dictionary, The (OED), x, xi; 'around', 17; 'ate', 19; 'obscenity', 139-4 0 ; 'sycophant', , , 221; woman, 202

paranoia, 146-7 participles, dangling, 39-40 patois, 115-16 penultimate, 259 Pepys, Samuel, 17 pidgin, I 16 pIg, 222-4 Plain Words (Gowers), xii plurals, 15, 4 1 , 59- 60 , 137- 8 Poe, Edgar Allan, 9 politicians' English, 158-9, 211,229-3° 'Politics and the English Language' (Orwell), 4, 13 6 Pope, Alexander, I I, 152 Portuguese, 59 possessive case, 15- 16, 63 Powell, Anthony, 152 prefixes, 1°9 presently, 110 Princeton University, 8 pronouns, relative, 225-7, 243 pronunciation, 17 I -8; accent, 167; American accentuation, 2 - 3; correct

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and incorrect, 167 - 8; French expressions, 7 8 - 82 ; German, 59; Greek, 90 - I; guides to, xiii; latin, 52-4; of 'ate', 19; of 'deism', 42; of 'England', 58-9; of 'golf', 88; long or short vowels, 12 7- 8 ; of H, 93, 17 I, 172-3, 178; of 'lather', 12 5; of names, xiii, 2-3, 175 -6; of 'Pall Mall', 130; of 'solder', 125; of 'water' , 161 -2; received, 183; residual, 186-9 I; rhymes, 161 -2; vowel sounds, 23, 12 5, 12 7- 8 , 16 9-7°; 'yoo' and '00', 25 1-2 Propertius, 52 prosody, 259 punctuation: apostrophe, 14- 16 ; comma, 13; full stop, 29- 30, 200; question-mark, 181 - 2 Pythagoras, 99

Racine, Jean, 156 refute, 158 repetitions, 246- 50 restaurant, 185, 191-2 rhythm, 258 Roget, P.M. (Thesaurus), xiii, 82, 83, 94, 108, 19 2 , 227- 8 Romansh, 44, 45 Ross, Alan S.C., xiii, 19 Ruskin, John, 259

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saga, 259 satIre, 152 Schwarzenegger, Arnold, 96-7 Scotch, Scots, Scottish, 44, 88, 198-9, 20 5- 6 Scotland, 26, 198-9, 205-6, 24 2 sex, 84, 244-5 Shakespeare , William, 3, 17, 46-7,99, 121, 127,2°4, 25 1 ,255,25 6 Shelley, Mary, 77 Sheridan, Richard Brinsley, 39, 244 simile, 4, 257 Sitwell, Edith, 100 slang, I 16 Southey, Robert, 190 Spanish, 44, 45, 14 1 , 161 special ty, 6 I spelling: alternative, 36; foreign names, 49; intrusive letters, 241 -2; mistakes, 215- 16; popular misspellings, 16 3 - 4; pronunciation and, 17 I - 2; reform, 216- 17 Stalin, Joseph, 120 stress, 1-3 subjunctive, 259-60 swear-words, 72-4 Swift, Jonathan, 58, 15 2

Tennyson, Alfred, lord, 18, 17 1 ,25° tenses, 18- 19, 202, 260 Thatcher, Margaret, 7

Thesaurus see Roget Thomson, James, 205 Times, The 12 I, 122, 19 6 , 21 9 Titles and Forms of Address 195 toffee-nosed, 2 12- 13 toothcomb, fine, 69-70 trochee, 258

United Nations, 12 up to, 159

varicose, 159-60 verbal nouns, 63-4, 257 verbs, nouns as, 136-7 very, 134 vocative case, 254 vogue-words, 20, 184-5 voice, 260- I Voltaire, 156 vowel sounds, 23, 125, 127-8, 16 9-7 0

Wales, 26, 209 Ward, Artemus, I I Waterhouse, Keith, xii Waterhouse on Newspaper Style xii Waugh, Evelyn, 236 Webster, Noah, 9, 216 Webster's International Dictionary xii Wellington, Duke of, 194 Welsh, 44, 45 Wilson, Harold, 158 wIt, 153-4 Woddis, Roger, 151

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Wodehouse, P.G., I I, 191 Wolfe, Charles, 26-7 women, 33, 67-8, 84, 202-4, 244 - 5, see a/so gender Woodham-Smith, Cecil, 18 word-processors, 23 1 - 3 words: new, 25; order, 98-9,

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166; power of, 164-5; vogue-, 20, 18 4 - 5 Wordsworth, William, 42

Yeats, W.B., 151

zeugma, 257